Beyond The Illusion Series: Part II- Road to Destiny- Yeah. Updated.

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  1. hudzu Chosen One

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    JG:MJ postied
    Nu-uh. The other person did...whats her name again? I dunno....

    JM:You wouldn't kill your namesake right?
    Dun dun dun...

    Fiance:
    You best believe it was good.
  2. hunter_ofthe_myst_ra Jedi Grand Master

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    not that I didn't have faith in you ;) :p
  3. -Trickster- Jedi Master

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    Ooh, it was a good update too! [i've been bad, i missed it for 7 whole days!]

    Very good, very good.

    DON'T KILL JACEN!!!
  4. -Trickster- Jedi Master

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    Can you say...*casts daring and devious look around, raising and dropping eyebrows expectantly* *whispers* Up?
  5. hunter_ofthe_myst_ra Jedi Grand Master

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  6. JAGSGURL15 Jedi Master

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  7. hunter_ofthe_myst_ra Jedi Grand Master

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    he hasn't been allowed to use the comp. :_|
  8. Jaina_and_Jag Force Ghost

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    why is he not allowed on?
  9. hunter_ofthe_myst_ra Jedi Grand Master

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    he's grounded. for....I don't know what.

    causing trouble as usual I'm sure. :p

    naw, parents are dumb it was probably for something stupid.
  10. Jaina_and_Jag Force Ghost

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    Probably. lol. With him, it's hard to guess what he did.
  11. hunter_ofthe_myst_ra Jedi Grand Master

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    heh heh

    P.S. My friend's friend's name is Bekah. I thought I would share that with you.
  12. -Trickster- Jedi Master

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  13. hunter_ofthe_myst_ra Jedi Grand Master

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    He's been gone an awful long time. :(
  14. Jaina_and_Jag Force Ghost

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  15. -Trickster- Jedi Master

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  16. hudzu Chosen One

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    I would write...but I cant find the co-writer...Plus I'm trying to figure out if Jacen should live.
  17. JediMasterJaina FF President/CR Evansville, IN

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    co-writer's computer has gone dead...I'm being forced to use the school computers now...To be honest, this story prolly won't get updated until sometime in May. I'm really sorry. :(

    *disappears back under the massive load of work*

    ~JMJ
  18. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    BOOOOOOO!!!

    We need an update!

    I just updated mine. :D
  19. Jaina_and_Jag Force Ghost

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  20. hunter_ofthe_myst_ra Jedi Grand Master

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  21. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    To answer for M_J ;), that's one of the new Senators from Episode 3. Forgot his name though.
  22. hudzu Chosen One

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  23. JediMasterJaina FF President/CR Evansville, IN

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    *peeks back into thread*

    Eesh...I leave for a little bit to do some work and we've got terrorists on the thread already.

    Why do these things fall apart without me?

    Good news though: Only 8 days left until finals are over with. Then, I can start working on the story again. But nothing until finals are over with...sorry.

    ~JMJ
  24. hudzu Chosen One

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    Due to the rushing of one JMK, I decided to update now.

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    His eyes slowly opened. Jacen Solo was alive. Barely. Scarred all over the place. He tried to move, but found he was held down by blorash jelly. Then he saw the Vong. One of them walked over to him, and released him from the jelly. Jacen fell

    Slowly, he looked up, to see the angry form of a fully healed Danni Quee. "Hey, Quee. How ya feelin'?" He asked sarcastically, knowing fully that he would be dead soon.

    "I'm good Jacen. As thanks for protecting me, I'm going to kill you now. Without torturing you." Danni said, bringing the lit lightsaber she had in her hand down onto Jacen's neck.

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

    Jaina could barely feel Jacen. But she knew he was still alive. How, she didn't know. But he was, and she wasn't going to lose him like she did Anakin. She slowly stood up in her cell, and noticed that everyone was gone. She stumbled over to where she had stood when she had sent out the electricity, and found one of the lightsabers. The Vong must have not seen it when she dropped it. Jaina picked it up and cut her way out of the cell.

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

    Jacen grimaced as he heard the saber bearing down on him.

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

    Jaina heard it before she saw it. The sound of a lightsaber slashing through something. Then a light thump, followed by a heavier thump. She ran as quickly as she could. Turning into a room, she saw Danni Quee with a lit lightsaber, and her decapitated brother on the ground.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    ...
  25. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    :eek: [face_plain] :mad: :( :_|

    Jacen's dead? Noooooooooooooooo! Now he'll never get the chance to hook up with Tahiri! :_|

    And whaddaya mean I rushed you? Blah?!

    EDIT: Dead Jacen better be a dream! Or a nightmare! :mad:
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