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Beyond - Legends The Illusion Series: Part II- Road to Destiny- Yeah. Updated.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by hudzu, Jun 12, 2003.

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  1. J_M_Bulldog

    J_M_Bulldog Jedi Master star 4

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    Great post guys.
    Danni: yes there's one great Jedi. *snickers uncontrolably*
    EDIT: ooops. Sorry snatched next page. [face_blush]
     
  2. JediMasterJaina

    JediMasterJaina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    R11JS- Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it!

    Jedida- Ah...my newest betawan... :D Thanks for reading!! I'm working on your beta as we speak!!

    Goofy- Thank you!! Delirious Jacen was prolly very fun for Gambler to write...(I get to do all the mush and angst stuff) ;)

    J&J- We'll see.... [face_devil] We'll see...

    BA- Thank you!! (You took page 7....grrr...j/k!!!)

    Page 7!!! WOOHOO!!! YEAH!!

    ~JMJ
     
  3. hudzu

    hudzu Force Ghost star 6

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    This is the part where I would pass out cake...except that I did that the last four pages...SO NO CAKE FOR YOU!
     
  4. Jaina_and_Jag

    Jaina_and_Jag Jedi Master star 5

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    Congrats on page 7 guys!!!! :D
     
  5. JediMasterJaina

    JediMasterJaina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Gambler! What is it with you and food!? Oy...think of something other than cake!! Lol...

    Thanksies, Country Girl!!

    ~JMJ
     
  6. hudzu

    hudzu Force Ghost star 6

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    Like I said before...NO CAKE FOR YOU!
     
  7. Jaina_and_Jag

    Jaina_and_Jag Jedi Master star 5

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  8. Jedida

    Jedida Jedi Padawan star 4

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    uppers!
     
  9. JediMasterKobe

    JediMasterKobe Jedi Padawan star 4

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  10. jedishellyskywalker

    jedishellyskywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    Up? Cake? Post?
     
  11. JediMasterKobe

    JediMasterKobe Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Have ewok, will travel. :cool:
     
  12. jedishellyskywalker

    jedishellyskywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    hehehe! Ewok...
     
  13. JediMasterJaina

    JediMasterJaina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    HUH!? What the....?

    Have ewok, will travel? What are you two smoking and more importantly:

    CAN I HAVE SOME?!

    ~JMJ
     
  14. Rogue11JS

    Rogue11JS Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Who them?

    Oh, they permanently have a stash of those candy cigars. i honestly think they're kinda gross but well... whatever flys your x-wing.

    :D!
     
  15. JediMasterJaina

    JediMasterJaina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL!!!! [face_laugh] x 1138!!

    ~JMJ
     
  16. JAGSGURL15

    JAGSGURL15 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    awesome job i love how u right jag

    post soon and good luck

    thanks again

    tiffany
     
  17. JediMasterJaina

    JediMasterJaina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    JG15- Hey!! It's my betawan's padawan!! Welcome!! I'm sooo glad you like it!!


    Okay, I know it's been a while since you guys have had a postie.... :( I could give you tons of excuses, but the short of it all is that I haven't been working on it like I should be...I will totally take the blame for that!! Believe me, MJ has been riding my butt to work on a new post! And so I am...

    ~JMJ
     
  18. Jaina_and_Jag

    Jaina_and_Jag Jedi Master star 5

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  19. hudzu

    hudzu Force Ghost star 6

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    The butt-riding has been shoved upon me...However, I am busy writing chapter two of A Wes Janson Story ....so :p
     
  20. JediMasterJaina

    JediMasterJaina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yeah, I've been busting my butt on R2D, and I've got about 3 pages on Word written so far...even if Gambler here doesn't write anything for this chapter, it's prolly still going to be an uber postie!

    ~JMJ
     
  21. JediMasterJaina

    JediMasterJaina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Whew!! Sorry it took so long to get this chapter up, but it's an UBER postie, so I hope you enjoy it!!

    *Public Service Announcement*

    [announcer voice] This chapter was brought to you entirely by JMJ[/announcer voice] :D


    CHAPTER 7



    ?Kyp!? Xaria exclaimed. ?What is it??

    ?Jacen. Jacen?s hurt.? Kyp?s pained expression told Xaria everything she needed to know.

    ?But I thought that you weren?t that close to Jacen,? Jag piped in.

    ?I?m not, but Jaina is, and this is what she?s sending to me through the Force.?

    ?Wait! Who?s Jaina?? Xaria asked suspiciously.

    ?My wife and Kyp?s partner.? Jag said.

    ?Partner? Do you three have some kind of kinky ?thing? going on that I should know about?? Xaria asked teasingly.

    Jag seemed to redden slightly. ?I hardly think so, Ms. Bian.? His tone became glacial.

    ?Hold on, Colonel! I was joking!? Xaria held her palms up in a non-threatening way.

    Jag softened slightly and nodded before he turned back to Kyp, who had been silent through the whole exchange. ?What is she telling you?? he said.

    ?Jacen?s hurt, badly, but she thinks she can manage it.?

    Jag let out a laugh of surprise. ?No offense to my lovely wife, but she can barely manage a healing trance on herself, let alone healing someone else. You tell her that we?re coming after her.?

    Kyp was silent while relaying Jag?s message. Then his eyes shot open.

    ?What?? Xaria asked. ?Something?s not right.?

    Kyp nodded, his stomach frosting over. ?She says not to come. That if Jag and I go, we?ll be killed.?

    ?But-? Jag started.

    ?They?re right. If you and Kyp leave Hapes, you will die.? The trio turned to face the new voice, that of Tenel Ka. ?Jaina has had the same vision that has been plaguing me for the last few weeks.?

    ?Wait? Visions? So I?m not going mad?? Xaria asked incredulously.

    Kyp turned to the small redhead. ?You?re having visions, Xar? What are they of??

    Xaria kept a steady eye on Tenel Ka as she spoke. ?Two men of green fire, great pilots and warriors alike. Both trying to save a woman they love. Another comes. Another green fire. The Darkest Knight. It consumes the men, and their fire burns out. Two of brown ice melt. Turn to the dark. The green fire consumes all. Fire, ice, all gone. All that is left is green.?

    ?It is as I feared, then,? Tenel Ka said as she turned to Jag and Kyp, ?I cannot allow you to go.?

    ?You cannot tell me whether or not I am ?allowed? to go after my wife!?

    ?Colonel! Come to your senses! Do you really want to leave your wife and children alone? If you leave Hapes now, you will die. Nothing you can do can change that and to chance it would be a fool?s errand!?

    Jag hung his head as tears stung his eyes. ?Then what do I do?? he said, despairingly.

    ?You may help coordinate the attack on Coruscant. I cannot do it alone. Your tactical genius is what won the last battle here at Hapes.? Tenel Ka said gently.

    Jag nodded and followed Tenel Ka out of the hangar bay, more determined to save his wife.

    Kyp and Xaria were silent for a long time. The newfound knowledge of Xaria?s visions had rendered Kyp flabbergasted, as did the actual vision itself.

    Could it be possible? Could she be Force-senstitive? Kyp thought

    ?I don?t know,? Xaria said. ?Is it possible??

    Kyp shot her a wry glance. ?I don?t think there?s any question now. Let me try something. Master Skywalker did this to me to test my Force potential.?

    ?Alright.? Xaria said.

    ?Okay, I need you to relax. You should feel me probing your mind.?

    ?Wait a minute! Probing?! Nobody said anything about a probe! I don?t think so buddy!?

    ?A mental probe, Xar. It won?t hurt you. I promise. Please, trust me.?

    ?Alright.? Xaria said warily.

    ?Close your eyes then.? Kyp replied.

    Xaria closed her eyes, allowing an almost peaceful expression to cross over her features.

    Force, she looks beautiful, Kyp thought. He stood still in front of her for the longest time, admiring her.

    ?Anytime there, Kyppie.?

    ?Oh, right.
     
  22. Jaina_and_Jag

    Jaina_and_Jag Jedi Master star 5

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    Awesome! :D I really love this Xaria girl. She sounds like Kyp's type. ;)
     
  23. JediMasterJaina

    JediMasterJaina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Country Girl- Hehehe...I'm glad you like Xaria! If you want to know where I got Xaria's personality from, just look at me! Xaria is basically me, with red hair and blue eyes...lol...not very original, I know, but it helped...lol.

    ~JMJ
     
  24. J_M_Bulldog

    J_M_Bulldog Jedi Master star 4

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    :eek: ok the vision was scary.
    Kyp/Xaria, [face_love]
    I like her, hehee.

    EDIT: seriously needed to learn how to spell, :p
     
  25. JediMasterKobe

    JediMasterKobe Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey Ears, if Xaria's you then Mr.Durron's a very lucky man. [face_mischief]
     
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