Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by DarthKakarot, Aug 8, 2005.
very good kak! keep it up!
Thanks for teh support guys, you've been great!
Well, heres an update.... Atlast!!!! Blame Sekot!!! *points the finger*
"I don't want you to say a word until I'm finished" Master Horax said omminously before folding his arms and staring momentarily at the ship's smooth metal floor. Gathering his words he looked over at his former Padawan.
"Master Reboscale, my old Padawan, I wish you the best of luck in life, I hope you succeed even more so than you have under my lead." Horax said as he beamed a smile in Reboscales direction.
"Mast..." Reboscale was cut short by a frown directed at him by Horax.
"Master Kakarot, the smallest amongst our ranks, small, yet fierce, and deadly with a blade." Horax nodded, Kakarot merely smiled and lowered his head in approval.
"Sango, your skills with a double bladed lightsaber are unmatched, pass on your skill, and hopefully we can have more Jedi like you" Sango brushed her hand down her lightsaber hilt, she couldn't help letting out smile.
"Master Kadi, your piloting skills have gotten you far, and your Mastery of the lightside of the force has paid off, good job old friend." Master Kadi blinked, before brushing his head with his long fingered hand. Horax smiled at them all and then nodded before turning and walking toward the closed door. The team followed close behind, but Horax spun his body around to face them.
"No, this is something I must do alone, I know the Dark Lord would do the same. The Force has set his path before me; I and I alone must walk it." Horax stated, but what he said earlier was a clearer goodbye.
"What is it Master? Why are you shutting us out?" Asked Kakarot, who folded his arms, his face was a curious one, the Jedi Master tilted his head ever so slightly before Horax spoke.
"Master Kakarot, when I was dueling Rabai I sensed a massive amount of death, the death of my friends, I fear, that if you go with me, you may die, and I can't let that happen, not in the middle of a war." Horax's tone became deadly serious; he turned to face the door and marched towards it. "Now go, my friends, leave me, I'll escape on a transport ship... Or something, everything will be set right, but I am the key to that, you have to trust me."
"You heard the man, everybody, back to your ships" Reboscale said sternly and with an unmatched dedication. He was the first walk back towards the access, the team slowly followed. Every footstep was heard by all, and then, the sound of Master Horax prying open the doors with the Force.
Stepped through the open door, Horax let it close behind him. Master Reboscale stopped as he heard the door shut, he closed his eyes tight, and tried to clear his mind of what he knew was the inevitable for his former master.
"Hey, come on, Horax said he'd escape; his word is good enough for me. Now come on, we have to get off this ship!" Kakarot assured. Reboscale opened his eyes and took a deep breath before carrying on. His teammates followed behind, none of them saying a word?.
Nice, but you should put me in there!
very good update cant wait for more
very good job
Keep up the good work
Another cool update.
Excellent job, Kakkay!. Please update soon.
I didn't see my name in there.
:Laugh: I'm kidding.
lol. I have included you Joy. Just not yet I will sooooon!
The room was dark, the only light coming from the magnificent space battle raging outside. The Bridge's window was a long rectangular pain of glass that had the Imperial Logo transfixed onto its center. The bottom half of the insignia was obscured by a chair. Darth Vassago's chair.
"Greetings Master Jedi. I trust you are here to put an end to my rule over the Galaxy." The eerie voice of Darth Vassago affirmed.
"That's the idea, Darth!" Horax said as he pulled back his robe, letting it fall to the floor.
"I'm shocked that you made it here in one piece." Vassago crackled as he pressed a button on the arm of his chair. There was a soft beep before the chair began turning to face Horax.
"Surprised?" Horax retorted as he unhooked his lightsaber from his belt and clutched it tightly with his right hand.
The air in the room was still, the tension building quickly. Vassago smirked before standing up. "Your arrogance blinds you, Master Horax" Vassago's lightsaber unhooked itself and flew into his hand. "You will not stop me: your power isn't even half mine."
"You're so certain." Horax snapped with a frown. The Sith Lord gave him a smirk in return. Striking a fighting pose Horax activated his lightsaber and angled it to point at the Emperor. "You're rule is at an end... Your heighness!"
"Foolish. Now you will experience the full power of the Darkside!" In an instant, Vassago threw his left hand forward, hurling a devastating wave of ice blue force lightening. It hit Horax head on, sending him flying backwards toward a wall. But the Jedi Master used it to his advantage and hit the wall with his feet, kicking off it and flipping. He came to a steady landing a few feet short of his original position.
"I don't think so. If anyone is the fool..." Horax thrust both arms forward, sending a powerful wave of raw Force energy at Vassago. It hit him with enough force to send Vassago hurling backwards, and onto the floor. "...It's you". Darth Vassago sprung back into position; he frowned before igniting his lightsaber.
The vibrant violet glow of Darth Vassago's lightsaber filled the room as he held it's curved hilt with both his hands. Swinging it with a flourish to show Horax what he was capable of he declared in an ominous tone, "This game of party tricks is over. Now, Jedi, you will Die!" Without a fiber of hesitation Vassago corkscrew jumped in the air before bring his saber down toward Horax as if to cleave the Jedi in half. Horax ignited his green lightsaber and parried the strong blow before he placed powerful roundhouse kick to Vassago's waist.
Vassago slid across the floor. Undeterred, the Sith Lord stood up, regained his balance, and charged for Horax, swing his saber on a low arc to take out Horax?s footing. But Horax was ready for the trick and leaped in the air, dogging the attack and setting up his next move. Vassago seized the moment and delivered a powerful bolt of lightening, which hit the airborne Master, who flew straight into a wall before sliding into one of the abandon officer pits.
"My rule is over, Jedi? I think not!" Vassago hissed as he jumped down into the small pit and pointed his saber at the throat of his enemy. "The time has come, my friend, the time, has, come." Before Vassago could give the final blow a sudden explosion rocked the ship, giving Horax the few seconds he needed to activate his saber and kick away Vassago.
"No chance, Vassago. Only one of us is getting out of this alive and don't count on it being you!" There was a constant flare of confidence in Horax voice even though he knew deep down he was fighting an ever losing battle.
The pair did not tire as they exchanged blow after blow with each other. They didn't have time to think about anything else but the outcome of the battle. The tension was heart stopping. Around the two, computer terminals damaged in the small confine of the pit gave off sparks. The slashing sabers hums and crackles only added to the heat and tension swirling around the combatants.
Awesome job, Kak!.
I can hardly wait to see who will win.
this was a really good chapter! i liked all the action.Cant wait for more
Great duel! I look forward to more of the story.
good job, way to leave us hanging
I love this Kak! You write battle scenes very well. And all the characters are interesting and described well. Very good!
Wow! Truly amazing. A true Master at work.
Keep up the good work Kaky
The massive battle outside the ship was a losing one, every Rebel soldier was in involved in the space battle, and almost every one was witnessing the horrible death of one of there friends. Death was everywhere. Across the bow of Vassago's ship, the Rebel Commander?s X-Wing flew, escorted on either side by a Y-Wing. "Zero, Neyox, lock S-foils in attack position, and follow my lead, we're going to take out that flagship".
The three fighters dived and barrel-rolled as they realigned themselves upside down, against the bow of Vassago's ship. "And, now!" The Commander ordered as the The three fighters performed yet another barrel-roll to right them.
"Sir, we have a few Tie's on our ta...." One of the other pilots, Neyox, said, but his sentence was cut short by the Commander. "We haven't any time for footnotes, Neyox, we have an objective waiting to be blown up! Form up and set sensors to track the ship?s power-core".
One of the Ties opened fire just as the Commander finished his sentence. The green energy bolts screamed to space and hit the Y-wing, over loading its shields before another bolt screamed forward and hit the fuselage right between the two engines.
"Ahhh......" screamed Neyox as his Y-Wing was torn apart by blaster fire, the burning remains of his ship impacted with the Stardestroyer?s particle hull, causing a large ball of fire and molten medal to sweep outward at one of the chasing Tie fighters.
"That was close sir, but without Neyox how are we supposed to blow the reactor?" Zero questioned as he swerved his fighter out of the way of some Tie Interceptor fire.
"Come around the command tower, there should be a power-regulator right behind it, if we hit that we should be able to cause a surge to the generators." Ordered the commander as he blasted a Tie and sailed through the explosion.
The two ships zoomed past the cruiser?s bridge before flipping around to face the aft of the ship as fighters streamed towards them from both sides. "Lets go Zero, ready your proton torpedoes!" The Commander said as he flicked a switch on his keypad. The two fighters accelerated forward, weaving through enemy laser fire. " And... Fire away!" The two fighters launched proton torpedoes towards the power-regulator as they pulled up and skimmed the explotion.
"That should do it.? The commander said as he switched his comm over to a general frequency. ?All ships, commence your attack! Commence your attack!?
The Blockade runners slowly began to approach the Stardestroyer, Rebel heavy-fighters swooping down into the battle and releasing anti-cruiser mines at the Imperial flagship, causing devastating wounds to its hull.
Time was running out for Vassago and Horax... Time, was running out.
It was worth the wait.Excellent work!!
awesome update! cant wait for another one
Outstanding job!. Very exciting.
Can't wait for the next update.
Keep up the excellent work, Kak.