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Before - Legends The Jinn and Kenobi Chronicles - a series of vignettes - Confession, Qui's POV on Recovery

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by VaderLVR64, Apr 4, 2004.

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  1. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi

    Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Knight star 5

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    *sniff* Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

     
  2. sheleigh

    sheleigh Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Vadey- Every single one of these little gems are stunning! I wish I could make a comment on every single one of them.

    Wow...

    With the exception of the insane Qui-Gon... which frightened me just a little. (Paranoia! Joy!)

    And sick Qui-Gon had me snickering the entire time. [face_laugh]

    I adored Recovery, and its companion piece...

    Bravo! Chocolate and roses for the author. :D


    sheleigh :)

    Edit for idiocy.
     
  3. Jedi_Tigris

    Jedi_Tigris Jedi Knight star 4

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    Beautiful companion piece!
     
  4. kateydidnt

    kateydidnt Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Beautiful viggies, all of them! ...er except "A Quiet Insanity" ...yeah...that one is just really really really creepy... fantastically written...but CREEPY

    but anyway, I love all of them! I love the relationship between Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon!
     
  5. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    ithesock Aw, shucks... [face_blush] Thank you.

    Kynstar Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

    LukesTheMan Thanks! My muse is very moody...

    -Darksaber- So glad you liked it!

    LuvEwan I'm such a fan of your work, I'm thrilled you liked this!

    dianethx Thank you! :D

    Shaindl I'm flattered you liked it.

    maychorian Poor Obi! It's his own fault for being so gorgeous! =P~

    AnakinsHeir
    That's what I was thinking of, too! :_|

    Jemmiah Your work has put a smile on my face more than once (and a tear in my eye) so I'm glad you enjoyed this!

    Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Thank you...

    sheleigh Oh, chocolate! 8-} Thanks!

    Jedi_Tigris Thanks!

    kateydidnt Creepy? Aw, shucks, thanks! :p
     
  6. Star_Drifter

    Star_Drifter Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I was scared that I had revealed too much, that he would see I had shattered the Jedi Code by forming an attachment to the young man beside me.

    Obi-Wan was the son I would never have. He was also going to be a great Jedi Knight one day, and so my pride in him was doubled. I could no longer hide behind the Code that guided our lives. He deserved to know, especially after our rocky beginning. On the next mission it might be me lying on the ground and I might not survive. I did not want him to live his life wondering if he had ever meant anything to me. I took a deep breath and confessed my transgression.

    ?I ordered you not to die and leave me alone. For I could not bear to lose you.?


    That's alright , Qui-Gon, shatter the Jedi Code all you like when it comes to Obi-Wan. [:D]

    We'll understand! ;)

    What a wonderful compilation of vignettes! =D= =D= =D=

    I have thoroughly enjoyed them all, even "EWWWWWW"! :D

    Thank you for all of these treasures! [:D]
     
  7. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Hi VaderLVR64
    I had a bit of time to read as I am home with the flu.
    The Flu, Not a good companion I can tell You!!!

    A Jedi Redemption
    Qui knew they were meant for each other =D=


    If Fate is Kind.
    All those wonderful feelings Qui had for Obi-wan and was going to wait till after Naboo to tell him.:_|

    Do you ever wonder Obi says "I think you are a good farmer. "Master"[:D]

    No Guarantees Lovely=D=


    To never Love "So you do not Love me Padawan"

    "I didn't mean that Master" "Of course I love you.[face_love]

    In sickness and in health
    "I know your laughing at me Padawan"

    A Quiet Insanity Soooo Evilll[face_devil]

    A Jedi does not know love Brilliant=D=

    Recovery "He will live Master Jinn"

    "What did you say Master?
    "I ordered you not to die and leave me alone, for I could not bear to loose you.=D=

    Confession The bond between us grew stronger that day.=D=

    Well done VaderLVR64 they were very nice viggies.

     
  8. TheLurker

    TheLurker Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Wow.
    Amazing writing...mush galore...obi and qui...this is my kinda fic! lol...i loved every last bit of these fantastic vignettes.
    can't wait for the next one!
    ~Rhi
     
  9. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Star_Drifter You even liked ewwww?? You shouldn't tell me that! [face_shame_on_you] It gives me all sorts of twisted plot bunnies! [face_devil]

    Gkilkenny I hope you're feeling better by now! [:D] And thanks for reading, that was a lot to wade through, wasn't it? [face_laugh]

    TheLurker Thanks! [face_blush] I'm waiting for my muse to speak to me again. She's so temperamental! :rolleyes:
     
  10. Aya-Na_Bashu

    Aya-Na_Bashu Jedi Youngling star 2

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    So poignant, just the way I like my Qui/Obi mush.=D=

    Can I have some more please? [face_praying]
     
  11. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Aya-Na_Bashu Yes, I've got a plot bunny nipping at my heels right now! ;)
     
  12. ardavenport

    ardavenport Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Well, that plot bunny should come hopping out soon, I hope. Just when I was rooting about in the back pages, throwing things out here and there, this pops up on it own. Very nice. Crazy Qui-Gon was just too creepy and Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon's discussion of love and Tahl is just the sort of enhancement that the JA stories need. [face_love]
     
  13. LilyHobbitJedi

    LilyHobbitJedi Jedi Knight star 5

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    =D= =D= I love every single one of these, Qui and Obi vigs are the best! Great job, I hope more is coming. [face_praying]
     
  14. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    ardavenport Thank you! I love my boys! [face_love]

    LilyHobbitJedi Hopefully soon, that plot bunny is proving to be elusive, taunting me cruelly! :p
     
  15. Fifilla

    Fifilla Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Very, very nice!
    I liked all of your vignettes and hope there will be many more!
    ... there WILL be more *wave hand* ;)
     
  16. Lady_Snow_Kaguya

    Lady_Snow_Kaguya Jedi Youngling star 1

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    :eek: oh wow....just got caught up on theres and....[:D]

    Really, really heartfelt and less centered on missions..I love these pieces, where a little everyday is inserted into an otherwise fast-paced series of events. Love them all, particularly this last viggie, so just...gaah!

    [face_love]Congrats on rendering me at a loss for words
     
  17. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    I loved all of these so very much!! =D= You captured the banter and warmth of each so perfectly. They're caring and tender to each other without being overly dramatic or out of character. I love the recurring theme: that you can't leave things unsaid that should be said--like how much someone means to you. :)
     
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