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Saga *The Liberator* An Anakin Skywalker Revenge Story! Chapter 14 September 10

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by darksideyesplease, Jan 10, 2006.

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  1. darksideyesplease

    darksideyesplease Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm so meaning to update this, but when I'm not working I'm either too tired from work or doing other writings. Now college football starts this coming saturday... hopefully i can get something done during the week.

    might not be a long long chapter, but at least it will be something to show ya'll i'm still here.
     
  2. darksideyesplease

    darksideyesplease Jedi Master star 4

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    Note: Sorry this is so short, the next chapter will be longer with a lot more stuff in it, just getting this update out and showing you where the story is going now.



    Chapter 13

    Obi-Wan Kenobi, Yoda, and Ki-Adi-Mundi sat together in secluded quarters in the Jedi Temple, away from the other members of the High Council.

    ?I?m sorry, Master Yoda.? Obi-Wan repeated once again.

    Master Yoda was visibly shaken over what Kenobi had told him about Mace Windu.

    ?Forseen this, I did.? Yoda sighed. ?And did nothing.?

    Ki-Adi-Mundi seemed sorrowful too. But more interested in changing the subject matter.

    ?I know this is a grievous time, but Master Yoda we really need to decide about young Skywalker.? Mundi said.

    Yoda nodded in agreement, seeming to shake off his feelings and go about business. ?Talk to him, we must.?

    ?Master, if we do bring him before the High Council; he must be free of his force binds.? Obi-Wan informed.

    ?I don?t think that?s a good idea.? Mundi quickly retorted.

    Obi-Wan frowned at his fellow Jedi and looked back at Master Yoda. ?If he feels we are interrogating him he will just shut us off. We need to be his friend here, we have to show him that. That?s the only way he?s going to cooperate. I heard Padmé?s voice. There is no doubt that this Dr. Kalderous has indeed kidnapped her and murdered Master Windu.?

    ?I agree,? Yoda softly spoke. ?To capture this villain, the Chosen One?s help we shall need.?



    **


    Anakin stared blankly at his former master and trainer as he instructed other Jedi to release Anakin from his binds.

    ?What?s this all about?? Anakin said under his breath, as he briefly looked at his wrists for bruises.

    ?The Council has summoned you.? Obi-Wan replied, looking straight ahead, standing at Anakin?s side.

    ?To condemn me?? Anakin asked; the two now walking towards a lift to carry them to the highest point in the Jedi Temple.

    Obi-Wan breathed heavily, still not turning to look at Anakin. ?You can hold a grudge for what I did, but I had to. Now the Council needs your help. We are still friends here. As far as we are concerned you were trying to apprehend a now known fugitive of the Republic, so the charges could be dismissed and probably will be if we find Klipto and your wife alive.?

    ?I would already have Padmé back with me if??

    ?If what? If I hadn?t come and rescued you from that med center? You were delayed Anakin, I give you that. But it?s not too late.? Obi-Wan explained.

    Anakin?s teeth gritted with anger as his face winced. ?There?s no telling what that monster has done to her.?

    ?Control your anger Anakin. Just because the Sith have been abolished doesn?t mean that the dark side isn?t ever present.?


    **


    Klipto injected himself with yet another healthy dose of a shiny liquid.

    Padmé could see him doing it from around the corner. Whatever he was doing seemed to drain his energy for a moment. Then suddenly he would become erratic with movement as if he couldn?t quit moving.

    This time was different though. After this dose, Dr. Kalderous fell from his seat to the durasteel floor of the ship. Padmé watched intently as Klipto?s body laid still.

    The ship began to tremble, becoming more unstable by the second. It became so turbulent throughout the ship, Padmé could only imagine what was actually happening outside the ship.

    But it was inside the ship she needed to be worried about.

    Klipto?s eyes suddenly sprang open and a wicked smile came over his face. Padmé?s heart leaped as she began to see things levitate throughout the ship. She herself was no floating so she knew they had not lost gravity within the ship. Someone on board was using the force. She had seen Anakin?s tricks enough to know when someone was using such an obvious force tactic.

    ?Help me!.? Padmé yelled, hoping a Jedi may have found her.

    Klipto then sprang to life and the objects levitating in the room crashed to the ground, startling Padmé.

    ?I knew you?d eventually warm up t
     
  3. AnakinLuver

    AnakinLuver Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :eek: Even though this was short, bravo!!!

    Please let Ani let go of his anger... or just a little...

    I'm glad Obi-wan decided not to have him wear those binds... good choice...

    I don't like the ending there...

    Great update!

    Rachel Rose@};-
     
  4. randomangel22

    randomangel22 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    glad that you're back [face_dancing]!! man i don't think anakin's gonna be too happy during the whole interrogation process and i hope padme's gonna be alright [face_worried]...please update soon [face_praying]!!
     
  5. jmsbndgrl

    jmsbndgrl Jedi Master star 4

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    I applaud Obi-Wan's sense in dealing with Anakin. :) However, I am worried about Padme's safety with the psycho doctor. [face_worried]

    Great update!
     
  6. WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT

    WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT Jedi Master star 3

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    The force is definitely in the wrong hands of Klipto. I do hope that the council doesn't dawdle and give Anakin all the help he needs to defeat Klipto.
     
  7. FelsGoddess

    FelsGoddess Jedi Master star 5

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    Well, let's hope someone can help Padme.

    Good update.
     
  8. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Now the force is in the command of a madman...this could be disasterous or this could work in the Jedi's favor. In order ot wield such power one has to respect it and that is something that Klipto does not do.

    Great update Darkside!
     
  9. MoAngel

    MoAngel Jedi Youngling star 2

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    OMG you finally updated and I'm sooo happy. Now we just have to get Anakin back in the game to rescue Padme and out of trouble with the council. Maybe he can quell his anger management issues long enough to have Obi Wan help him devise a plan to rid the galaxy of this crazy ass Jedi wannabe and get the mother of his children safely home.

    Mo
     
  10. Venus_Star2-com

    Venus_Star2-com Jedi Youngling star 2

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    please...please...someone shove a stake through the doctor's heart ( well....chest, considering he has no HEART)....arghhh come back


    rachel
     
  11. Darth_Vastor

    Darth_Vastor Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Excellent work. You've certainly set things up to be very interesting. Whenever you are ready to post again, I can't wait to read more.
     
  12. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oooohhhh, very chilling.

    I hope Anakin can calm down enough to let the Jedi help him.

    He will definitely need all the help he can get.

    Nice update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  13. Jaira

    Jaira Jedi Master star 4

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    Gah! Hurry, Council!!!
     
  14. Kitten

    Kitten Jedi Youngling star 3

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    YEAH!!! I am so glad to see another update. I can't believe that Klipto had gained force abilities; that was pretty unexpected. You really keep your readers on your toes with all the twists you incorporate in your stories.
     
  15. Peagis

    Peagis Jedi Youngling star 3

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    cool story add me to the PM list if u would
     
  16. darksideyesplease

    darksideyesplease Jedi Master star 4

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    Warning: This chapter has some graphic details towards the end, don't read if you're faint of heart.



    Chapter 14

    Anakin stood in front of the High Jedi Council; his tan shirt, slightly torn and saturated with dirt and sweat. The past days had been eventful and Anakin?s appearance clearly showed it. The look upon his face was one of distain and displeasure. He knew that the Council had gone out of their way to make him happy. To let him hunt the slave traders that remained in the galaxy. He knew they had only agreed because he had fulfilled his prophecy. He had destroyed the Sith.

    Now the dark side had returned, only in a new fashion.

    Unlike the Sith; this doctor did not seek to rule the galaxy. For his only taste was for mischief and mayhem.

    Yoda cleared his throat and spoke, ?Something to say, young Skywalker.?

    Anakin?s brow rose vaguely as he was surprised he was allowed to speak first. ?I don?t think you?d like what you heard, Master Yoda.?

    ?Dreadful feelings towards the Jedi you have?? Yoda asked.

    Anakin shook his head, ?Only for one at the moment.?

    Obi-Wan stood from his cushioned seat.

    ?Master Kenobi!? Yoda reacted.

    ?I?m sorry Master, but Anakin has to know the truth.? Obi-Wan said, looking back at his respected elder.

    ?Very well?? Yoda sighed.

    ?I did what I had to Anakin.? Obi-Wan once again tried to explain. ?I was doing my duty.?

    Anakin cracked a sarcastic smile towards his master. ?And at the same time, hindering me from doing what I had to. Stopping me from doing my duty as a husband by protecting my wife. You could have helped me Master. Did you ever think of that? Then you could have arrested me and sent me to prison for the rest of my days. At least Padmé would have been safe.?

    Obi-Wan?s face fell to face the ground. In a way he knew Anakin was right. He had been thinking of that same thing ever since he had knocked Anakin unconscious to bring him back to Coruscant. He had wondered how he could turn his back on Padmé, a true friend of his and one of the few politicians he ever liked. In bringing Anakin to Coruscant, he had done his duty towards the mission but leaving Padmé with that madman, a man who had apparently killed Mace Windu; he had failed as a Jedi in someway.

    ?The truth is?? Obi-Wan unenthusiastically said. ?The truth is you were right. You are right. We should have gone after Klipto then, no matter what charges were against you.?

    ?A chance to set things right, both of you have.? Yoda interrupted.

    Obi-Wan turned and looked at the diminutive Council Leader. Anakin?s eyes also shifted towards Master Yoda as the former duo looked on inquisitively.

    ?This man has killed Master Windu.? Ki-Adi Mundi said, jumping into the conversation from his seat. ?I believe as does Master Yoda that you two have tremendous chemistry and that no two are better to hunt down this violent criminal and bring him to justice.?

    ?Yes, capture him you must!? Yoda warned.

    ?We have received reports of mass murders in the outer rim territory. We believe this Klipto Kalderous is no longer looking to enslave people. It seems his lust now resides in simply torturing and killing. The dark side of the force is ever present in him. He does not wish to hide it the way Darth Sidious was able to. He wants the entire galaxy to know of his power.? Mundi explained.

    ?It could be possible whatever means he took to gain influence within the force has warped his mind as a side effect.? Anakin pointed out.

    ?That is the nature of the dark side, young Skywalker. The Sith, gone they might be but ever careful you must be of the dark sides presence.? Yoda said.

    Anakin nodded. ?Klipto does want to be found. He wants me.?

    ?Under no circumstances can you trade your life for Padmé?s.? Mundi also added.

    ?I?m sorry but I can?t?? Anakin tried to respond before Mundi continued.

    ?We believe that Master Windu?s cells were what gave Klipto his power. He has scientifically uncovered the mystery of the force.
     
  17. FelsGoddess

    FelsGoddess Jedi Master star 5

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    Dang. Mace is gone.

    Great update.
     
  18. jmsbndgrl

    jmsbndgrl Jedi Master star 4

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    This is not good at all. Now there are two of them. [face_worried]

    I hope Padme is going to be ok. Of course, I fear for Anakin, not being able to open a door with the Force is a big deal. [face_worried]
     
  19. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That was scary-crazy! What's happened to Mace? The Sith are gone but not the presence of the darkside. Could this mean that the darkside is using Mace's body in order to come into being? If so, then nobody's safe.

    Great update Darkside, keep them coming!!
     
  20. Ladynaye

    Ladynaye Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Uh-Oh.....it's Zombie Mace!! Reminds me of Biohazard (Resident Evil).

    Please PM me with updates!!

     
  21. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Whoa - Mace is still alive and he's gone psycho?

    :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

    I bet Klipto didn't see that coming! :p

    I'm glad to see Anakin and Obi-Wan teaming up again and I certainly hope, together, they can...uh....do something with whats left of Mace.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  22. randomangel22

    randomangel22 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    OMG mace is still alive and gone completely nuts :eek:???

    i hope padme's ok and that anakin will be able to stop klipto before something bad happens...
     
  23. AnakinLuver

    AnakinLuver Jedi Padawan star 4

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    So... Mace is alive and is completely nutso?8-}

    Rachel Rose@};-
     
  24. Kitten

    Kitten Jedi Youngling star 3

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    OMG! Mace has gone crazy and we all know that Klipto is nuts. What a horrible combination. [face_worried]
     
  25. WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT

    WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT Jedi Master star 3

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    How in the galaxy could Mace have survived that? Are they on Tatooine? I do hope that Mace isn't full of the dark side.
     
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