Beyond THE LIVING FORCE (NJO: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, Tahiri, H/L, L/M, Kyp, more) Completed 1/7/05!

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  1. YodaKenobi VIP

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    Title: The Living Force
    Author(s): YodaKenobi
    Timeframe: NJO; post-Force Heretic
    Characters: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, Tahiri, H/L, L/M, Kyp Durron, everyone else whos ever been seen, spoken, or mentioned in a SW story
    Genre: Adventure, mystery
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    Summary: Sequel to Revolution and The Eighth Cortex
    Notes: The third of three stories.


    This is the third and final story in the New Jedi Order series I've been writing ( Revolution and The Eighth Cortex being the first two). The three stories take place following Force Heretic: Reunion and are meant to replace TUF and TFP and end the series. I recommend reading Revolution and The Eighth Cortex to understand this story completely, but there should be enough backstory in "The Living Force" for it all to make sense.
    This will be quite lenghthy, longer than the first two stories combined, but I hope you all enjoy it :) It is nearly completed, and needs to only be typed and post.
    I would like to thank everyone who read Revolution and The Eighth Cortex, as you were a huge encouragment in writing this final story.




    Dramatis Personae


    Ackbar; retired Admiral (Male Mon Calamari)
    Alema Rar; Jedi Kight (Female Twi'lek)
    Anakin Solo; Jedi Knight (Male Human)
    Booster Terrik; Captain, Errant Venture (Male Human)
    Cakhmain; Leia's bodygaurd (Male Noghri)
    Cal Omas; President (Male Human)
    Callista; Potentium Jedi Leader (Female Human)
    Cenn Stellwart; GFI Security Officer (Male Human)
    Cilghal; Jedi Master (Female Mon Calamari)
    C-3PO; Protocol Droid
    Danni Quee; Scientist (Female Human)
    Daphney; Alliance Commando (Female Twi'lek)
    Darak; Assistant to the Magister (Female Ferroan)
    Dest Ornax; Bounty Hunter (Male Human)
    Dif Scaur; Intelligence Director (Male Human)
    Droma; Leader, Ryn Network (Male Ryn)
    Fen Kwaad; Shaping Adept (Female Yuuzhan Vong)
    Ganz Beraflar; Peace Brigade (Male Human)
    Garent Bostish; Imperial Stormtrooper (Male Human)
    Garm Bel Iblis; General (Male Human)
    Gelaa; Priestess, deception sect (Female Yuuzhan Vong)
    Gilad Pellaeon; Grand Admiral (Male Human)
    Han Solo; Captain, Millennium Falcon (Male Human)
    Harrar; Priest, deception sect (Male Yuuzhan Vong)
    HK-22; Assassin Droid
    Jabitha; Magister Zonama Sekot (Female Ferroan)
    Jacen Solo; Jedi Knight (Male Human)
    Jagged Fel; Twin Suns squadron (Male Human)
    Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (Female Human)
    Jakan; High Priest (Male Yuuzhan Vong )
    Jarl Pace; Colonel, Remnant Commando (Male Human)
    Jensin; Captian, Gray Truth (Male Human)
    Jysella Horn; Jedi Student (Female Human)
    Kam Solusar; Jedi Master (Male Human)
    Kenth Hamner; Jedi Master (Male Human)
    Kirana Ti; Jedi Knight (Female Human)
    Kitt; Alliance Commando (Female Human)
    Kunra; Former warrior (Male Yuuzhan Vong)
    Kyle Katarn; Jedi Knight (Male Human)
    Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (Male Human)
    Lando Calrissian; Merchant (Male Human)
    Leia Organa Solo; Former NR diplomat (Female Human)
    Lind Eythatcher; Peace Brigade Leader (Male Human)
    Lomi Plo; Potentium Jedi (Female Human)
    Lowbacca; Jedi Knight (Male Wookiee)
    Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master (Male Human)
    Malik Carr; Commander (Male Yuuzhan Vong)
    Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (Female Human)
    Meewalh; Leia's bodyguard (Female Noghri)
    Mirax Horn; art dealer (Female Human)
    Nas Choka; Warmaster (Male Yuuzhan Vong)
    Neget; Smuggler (Male Rodian)
    Nen Yim; Master Shaper (Female Yuuzhan Vong)
    Nom Anor; former Executor (Male Yuuzhan Vo
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    Chapter 1: Arrival

    It was coming; he could feel it.

    Jacen Solo's head broke the surface of the frigid waters and he looked up at the night sky for the first time since diving in hours before. The stars shone in the Mon Calamari sky like welcoming candles in winter, and through the Force, he could see torrents of orange and blue nebula. Space was vast, and seemingly empty to most, but with the Force, he could feel how full of life it all was.

    It was coming.

    Jacen threw himself in the waters horizontally and began to kick and paddle to a nearby reef, protruding from the murky abyss. His submersible was still there, floating next to the reef where he?d left it and kept in place by its navigational controls. Jacen reached the reef and placed his hands on the pinkish rock before digging his fingers into its bumps and thorns, and pulling himself out of the ocean. His sodden brown locks were made heavy and long from his swim, sticking to his face and neck. Water streamed from his mane and dripped from his beard and long eyelashes, clinging to the lashes as long as gravity would permit, before his blink freed them.

    Removing his breath mask, Jacen sat down on the jagged rocks and leaned back, taking in the black space around him. He was bound by his duty, by the Force, to remain on Mon Calamari... waiting. His heart, however, was elsewhere. He longed to have left with the rest of his family in search of his mother, Leia, who'd been taken captive by a group of Force users, practicing a distorted version of the ancient Potentium. She?d disappeared after the Peace Brigade captured her, hoping to hand her over to the Yuuzhan Vong, but the ruthless band of traitors was slaughtered by the New Potentium, and their leader, Callista, claimed Leia had joined them of her own free will.

    Jacen's father, Han, tracked Leia with the help of Jedi Master Kyp Durron, and two smugglers, where they learned of this new threat to the Force, composed of old Shadow Academy survivors Lomi Plo and Welk. Kyp had nearly died when he confronted Callista, and was still recovering from his wounds.

    The news of Callista's force and his mother's capture came as a shock to Jacen and the Jedi who'd returned from Coruscant after a mission to the former capital to make contact with the leader of the Yuuzhan Vong Shamed One's, had yielded an unusual amount of luck. The mission to Coruscant appeared to be a disaster in the beginning, when the team was separated, Tahiri went missing, and half of the team ended up in Shimrra?s clutches after Yu?shaa, who was actually the Yuuzhan Vong Nom Anor, turned them over to the Supreme Overlord. However, luck changed when Jacen?s twin sister, Jaina, and the rest of the Jedi team still free, happened upon their brother, Anakin, long thought dead. Anakin's survival and shaping at the hands of the Yuuzhan Vong was enable by Vergere, and had led to a new dimension of the Force for the younger Jedi-- he could now feel the Yuuzhan Vong within the great life energy.

    Tahiri meanwhile, had stumbled upon the Yuuzhan Vong's plan to use slaves to pilot their coralskippers and attack the Alliance. Following a vision she'd received on Mon Calamari, Tahiri met with the shaper Nen Yim and learned of her slave seeds and other terrors the shaper had developed to fill the eighth cortex.

    Anakin, Jaina, and the other Jedi, located Tahiri and devised a plan to rescue the captives in Shimrra's palace and take their new information to the Alliance, along with Nen Yim, who'd agreed to help upon learning of the virus Alpha Red. Anakin's rescue plan was successful, but they lost Corran Horn in the escape when the Jedi Knight entered Shimrra's court.

    Hijacking the yammosk bearing vessel, Savior, the Jedi returned to Mon Calamari to find the system under attack by the Yuuzhan Vong fleet and swarms of slave-piloted skips. Jacen was able to bond with the yammosk and send the slaves away from the battle, saving them and the Alliance stronghold.

    So when the Jedi team, including all three Solo children
  3. FamousAmos VIP

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    WOOHOO!! He really did post it :cool:

    Awesome :cool: I liked Jacen's POV on what's been happening.

    And Zonama Sekot is there? Is that good news or bad news? :p

    I can't wait to find out what happened to Leia, either.


    Great post, YodaKenobi! Can't wait for your next installment ;)
  4. Tahiri-Solo Force Ghost

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    It has begun!!

    Great first post!!!!!!!!
  5. Whitey Force Ghost

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    Thanks for the PM, Yoda!

    Great first post. But there's nothing much to comment on since it was only a reflection on previous events. 8-} But it's good for any potential new readers.

    Can't wait until it really gets going! :D
  6. Lethar Force Ghost

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    *nodnods* This has the ring of another great. Can't wait for more from it. :)
  7. Tahi Jedi Grand Master

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    Awesome beginning, Yoda. Some wonderful images - you know how I love good imagery. :)
    Water streamed from his mane and dripped from his beard and long eyelashes, clinging to the lashes as long as gravity would permit, before his blink freed them.
    I really liked that little detail. It's details like that that really make a scene come alive. Good work.

    I also enjoyed the way you got into Jacen's point of view to give us the resume. That was great. A lot of people would have been tempted to just do that in the narrator's voice - omniscient style - but telling it through a character shows authorial maturity. Terrific post. :)

  8. Magnuskn Force Ghost

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    Quite excellent! :) Lots of recap, which were to be expected, but interesting new plotlines emerging already. I can´t wait for the next chapter! :)

    Magnus
  9. Thrawn McEwok Co-Author: Essential Guide to Warfare

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    YK: Title: The Living Force

    Characters: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, Tahiri, H/L, L/M, Kyp Durron, everyone else whos ever been seen, spoken, or mentioned in a SW story

    Does that include Kermit the Frog, Senator Grebleips, Waywa Fybot and Jorj Car'das?! :confused: :eek:

    I recommend reading Revolution and The Eighth Cortex to understand this story completely, but there should be enough backstory in "The Living Force" for it all to make sense.

    I recommend reading Revolution and The Eighth Cortex because they're damn good 'fic! :D

    This will be quite lenghthy, longer than the first two stories combined, but I hope you all enjoy it :) It is nearly completed, and needs to only be typed and post.

    Hmm... we've heard that before, y'know? ;)

    I would like to thank everyone who read Revolution and The Eighth Cortex, as you were a huge encouragment in writing this final story.

    If this means that feedback is part of what's ensuring that we get more 'fic from you, I'm sure we can all dissolve into an orgy of mutual self-congratulation... :p :D

    "Remeber. Together you are greater than the sum of your parts"--Master Ikrit.

    /me strides around the 'fic, doing that air-punching Wookie roar thing from TPM

    OO-rah! OO-rah! OO-rah!

    Chapter 1: Arrival

    It was coming; he could feel it.


    :D

    Yeah. The Living Force is here! :D

    Great opening line, though... :)

    Jacen Solo's head broke the surface of the frigid waters and he looked up at the night sky for the first time since diving in hours before. The stars shone in the Mon Calamari sky like welcoming candles in winter, and through the Force, he could see torrents of orange and blue nebula. Space was vast, and seemingly empty to most, but with the Force, he could feel how full of life it all was.

    It was coming.


    :D

    Is Jacen just really, really good at holding his breath, or does he have some sort of mask on?

    Jacen reached the reef and placed his hands on the pinkish rock before digging his fingers into its bumps and thorns, and pulling himself out of the ocean.

    Embracing the pain, is he?! [face_mischief]

    Removing his breath mask,

    Ahh, he's not all-powerful... :D

    Jacen sat down on the jagged rocks and leaned back, taking in the black space around him. He was bound by his duty, by the Force, to remain on Mon Calamari... waiting.

    :D

    His heart, however, was elsewhere. He longed to have left with the rest of his family in search of his mother, Leia, who'd been taken captive by a group of Force users, practicing a distorted version of the ancient Potentium.

    From a certain point of view... ;)

    Good summary, though! :cool:

    However, luck changed when Jacen?s twin sister, Jaina, and the rest of the Jedi team still free, happened upon their brother, Anakin, long thought dead.

    Yay!

    Anakin's survival and shaping at the hands of the Yuuzhan Vong was enable by Vergere, and had led to a new dimension of the Force for the younger Jedi-- he could now feel the Yuuzhan Vong within the great life energy.

    Tahiri meanwhile, had stumbled upon the Yuuzhan Vong's plan to use slaves to pilot their coralskippers and attack the Alliance. Following a vision she'd received on Mon Calamari, Tahiri met with the shaper Nen Yim and learned of her slave seeds and other terrors the shaper had developed to fill the eighth cortex.


    Nice juxtaposition, btw... [face_mischief]

    So when the Jedi team, including all three Solo children, returned to the planet's surface and learned of Leia's capture, it was a somber end to an e
  10. JainaDurron Jedi Master

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    Great start, Wes. :)

    ~~Jilly
  11. Swift_Wrath_SAB Jedi Knight

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    YAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS HERE! *runs around throwing confetti* YAYAYAYAYAY! I am happy! :D :D GIVE US MORE! By the way, good beginning!
  12. YodaKenobi VIP

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    WOOHOO!! He really did post it

    Damn skippy [face_cool


    Awesome I liked Jacen's POV on what's been happening.

    Kind of dull, but just a general recap.

    And Zonama Sekot is there? Is that good news or bad news?

    You'll see [face_mischief]

    I can't wait to find out what happened to Leia, either.

    Find out in a few chapters I think.


    Great post, YodaKenobi! Can't wait for your next installment

    Next chapter is longer.

    Thanks for reading, Amos :)


    Tahiri-Solo, thanks :)



    Whitey

    Thanks for the PM, Yoda!

    Yeah, just giving everyone a link :p I promise I won't harass you.

    Great first post. But there's nothing much to comment on since it was only a reflection on previous events. But it's good for any potential new readers.

    Yeah, I thought about putting something about just skimming it if you read the 8th cortex 8-} next one should be more interesting.

    Can't wait until it really gets going!

    Thanks, Whitey :D


    Lethar

    *nodnods* This has the ring of another great. Can't wait for more from it.

    Thanks, Lethar [face_blush]


    Tahi

    Awesome beginning, Yoda. Some wonderful images - you know how I love good imagery.

    Thanks, I can definitely tell by your fics ;)

    I really liked that little detail. It's details like that that really make a scene come alive. Good work.

    :D

    I also enjoyed the way you got into Jacen's point of view to give us the resume. That was great. A lot of people would have been tempted to just do that in the narrator's voice - omniscient style - but telling it through a character shows authorial maturity. Terrific post.

    I struggled with this one in the beginning because I thought it was really boring to just go through everything in Jacen's mind, but I was having trouble moving forward without doing that. Glad you liked it though.


    Magnuskn

    Quite excellent! Lots of recap, which were to be expected, but interesting new plotlines emerging already. I can´t wait for the next chapter!

    Thanks :D The next chapter will visit the Yuuzhan Vong and see what they're up too ;) Get to see little Nommy Anor and also everyone's favorite Gollum-like poet.



    Thrawn McEwok

    What do you think of the title?

    Does that include Kermit the Frog, Senator Grebleips, Waywa Fybot and Jorj Car'das?!

    I'm going to try and squeeze those three into the big dance number at the end :)

    Hmm... we've heard that before, y'know?

    Yeah, i pretty much just copied what I said at the beginning of 8th cortex ;)

    If this means that feedback is part of what's ensuring that we get more 'fic from you, I'm sure we can all dissolve into an orgy of mutual self-congratulation...

    Go for it =D=

    /me strides around the 'fic, doing that air-punching Wookie roar thing from TPM
    OO-rah! OO-rah! OO-rah!


    I don't remember that scene [face_thinking]

    Great opening line, though...

    Thanks!

    Is Jacen just really, really good at holding his breath, or does he have some sort of mask on?

    [face_laugh] remember that yammosk in the last one?

    From a certain point of view...

    As always [face_mischief]

    Good summary, though!

    *bows*

    Good grief! Character development for Jacen Solo - and for the better!

    Yeah, I decided to mix it up a bit 8-}

    Anakin seems to have got his big brother back, too...

    Or maybe he'll get his big brother back [face_devil]

    He doesn't notice that Jimmy's been ducking the question for two months now?!

    Well, Jimmy may not be present for the question :D you'll see by chapter 3 what that lads been up too.

    Brilliant paragraph, that... Jacen's quiet grief, his worry, his mixed emotions, sense of duty... far more mature than the kid who left for Coruscant at the start of the previous 'fic...

    Thankies :D

    Yeah. Vergere
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    and also everyone's favorite Gollum-like poet.



    JOD's showing up? :eek:

    (j/k, Destiny. Don't hurt me[face_scared])


    :p
  14. Alpha-synth Jedi Knight

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    I like, I like.

    Post more ASAP.
  15. whats-her-face Jedi Knight

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    Woohoo! Living Force has begun! Thanks for the PM, Wes- I'm totally oblivious and would not have found it on my own.

    Can I just say that that is the most intimidating Dramatis Personae I have ever seen? Compared to that, I feel so... inadequate ;)

    Jacen inhaled deeply; Zonama Sekot had arrived.
    Ooo.... Zonama Sekot.... the planet where the fun just never seems to end. Cooooooool.... :D
  16. DarkDroid Jedi Knight

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    WOW!

    I'm new to these stories, so I might get a little lost, but that first post was absolutely fantastic! The background story there let me understand it completely and the level of detail is utterly amazing.

    Corran was dead, leaving behind his wife, Mirax, and two children.

    :eek: :_|

    Consider me hooked. :)
  17. TahiriVeilaSolo69 Force Ghost

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    YAY!!!!*throws flowers around thread* Yoda finally posted! *gives him lightsaber chocolate bar* I hope there is mushyness in this *she sits in her blue lazyboy and grabs a bowl of popcorn* This is going to be grrreat! 8-}
  18. YodaKenobi VIP

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    JOD's showing up?
    (j/k, Destiny. Don't hurt me[face_scared])


    [face_laugh] look out! :p Lucky for you, JOD has been gone.


    Alpha-synth

    I like, I like.
    Post more ASAP.


    Thanks, Alpha :D more coming soon.


    whats-her-face

    Woohoo! Living Force has begun! Thanks for the PM, Wes- I'm totally oblivious and would not have found it on my own.

    :p

    Can I just say that that is the most intimidating Dramatis Personae I have ever seen? Compared to that, I feel so... inadequate

    Yeah, it's long, but I just think it makes it easier on the reader if they forget a character they can just look at the dramatis. Especially for OCs.

    Ooo.... Zonama Sekot.... the planet where the fun just never seems to end. Cooooooool....

    Yeah, it's a party all the time there 8-}


    DarkDroid
    WOW!
    I'm new to these stories, so I might get a little lost, but that first post was absolutely fantastic! The background story there let me understand it completely and the level of detail is utterly amazing


    Cool, a new reader :cool: I hope it isn't too confusing, thanks for reading :)

    Consider me hooked.

    Good to know :D


    TahiriVeilaSolo69
    YAY!!!!*throws flowers around thread* Yoda finally posted! *gives him lightsaber chocolate bar* I hope there is mushyness in this *she sits in her blue lazyboy and grabs a bowl of popcorn* This is going to be grrreat!

    I like your enthusiasm :D Thanks for the chocolate, and I'll see about the mush [face_thinking]
  19. Owner_of_Fiver Jedi Padawan

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    OK, finally finished part two of the trilogy, and wow! Leia! :eek: :eek: Excellent job with this series so far, YodaKenobi. :D I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us this time; I'm sure it will be great. I agree with Tahi that the imagery was extremely vivid. Very nice start, and I hope to be able to review more often on this one. *fingers crossed*

    I'm sorry I was absent for the ending chapters of the last fic. DRL and my plot bunnies- see my signature- have been running me ragged.

    BTW: Thanks for the PM, and good luck in the awards. :)


    JD.
  20. YodaKenobi VIP

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    <----JDH's sock

    ahhh :p


    OK, finally finished part two of the trilogy, and wow! Leia! Excellent job with this series so far, YodaKenobi. I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us this time; I'm sure it will be great. I agree with Tahi that the imagery was extremely vivid. Very nice start, and I hope to be able to review more often on this one. *fingers crossed*

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked the ending to 8th cortex :) I hope you'll like this one as well ;)

    I'm sorry I was absent for the ending chapters of the last fic. DRL and my plot bunnies- see my signature- have been running me ragged.

    No need to apologize of course :) Hope you can get everything under control and keep DRL at bay.

    BTW: Thanks for the PM, and good luck in the awards.

    Thanks, and same to you ;)
  21. Tahiri-Solo Force Ghost

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    *bounces around*

    new post coming soon? hmm? hmm? hmm?

    everyones here, must be soon, SOON!!

    cant wait, WHEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
  22. _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Master

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    Hello, everybody. I'm here just in time to print out the first chapter. Niice. :D Hope you're all doing well.


  23. Thrawn McEwok Co-Author: Essential Guide to Warfare

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    YK: What do you think of the title?

    [face_laugh]

    I'm going to try and squeeze those three into the big dance number at the end :)

    :p

    I take it there's no hidden significance in the fact that I mentioned four characters?! :eek: :D

    Yeah, i pretty much just copied what I said at the beginning of 8th cortex ;)

    *chuckle*

    Go for it =D=

    Thinks about yelling "orgy!"...

    ... then looks around thread, and sees _J_o_D_, Jilly, Tahiri-Solo, Tahi, TVS69 and Jedida all looking sternly back at him...

    I don't remember that scene [face_thinking]

    In the Senate?

    [face_laugh] remember that yammosk in the last one?

    How could I forget?

    As always [face_mischief]

    Yay! :D

    *bows*

    *throws confetti*

    Yeah, I decided to mix it up a bit 8-}

    So I see! :D

    Or maybe he'll get his big brother back [face_devil]

    :eek: Why? What's Jacen done to deserve that? Is there an Ani/Danni subtext that we're not aware of?! :eek: [face_laugh]

    Well, Jimmy may not be present for the question you'll see by chapter 3 what that lads been up too.

    Looking forward to it! :D

    Thankies :D

    It's good... I like what you're doing with the character... [face_mischief]

    Don't get me started :mad:

    Come on - you know you want to! [face_laugh]

    Thanks for the review, Ewok :)

    Yub yub!

    - The Imperial Ewok
  24. Morgoth_The_Enemy Jedi Knight

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    Excellent first post YodaKenobi!, though I'd expect no less after reading your previous fics.

    I particularly liked Zonama Sekot showing up, wonder what's going to happen next? can't wait for the next post!

    (In case u were wondering, I hijacked my friends comp. so i could read this)
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    Tahiri-Solo

    *bounces around*

    That can't be good for the baby :p

    new post coming soon? hmm? hmm? hmm?
    everyones here, must be soon, SOON!!
    cant wait, WHEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!


    I'm glad you're excited, though you might want to watch your caffeine intake 8-} New post tomorrow.


    _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    Hello, everybody. I'm here just in time to print out the first chapter. Niice. Hope you're all doing well.

    :D good to see you, Lauren. Hope you get everything worked out, and thanks for reading :)


    Thrawn McEwok

    I take it there's no hidden significance in the fact that I mentioned four characters?!

    The only significance is my inability to cout to 4.

    Thinks about yelling "orgy!"...
    ... then looks around thread, and sees _J_o_D_, Jilly, Tahiri-Solo, Tahi, TVS69 and Jedida all looking sternly back at him...


    It's good that you know when to restrain yourself :p

    In the Senate?

    That's the only scene I could think of with Wookiees in it, but I don't remember them celebrating for some reason. I guess I'll have to go pop in TPM :D

    Why? What's Jacen done to deserve that? Is there an Ani/Danni subtext that we're not aware of?!

    no [face_laugh]

    It's good... I like what you're doing with the character...

    I like your Jacen for DP better actually :cool:

    Come on - you know you want to!

    :p



    Morgoth_the_Enemy

    Excellent first post YodaKenobi!, though I'd expect no less after reading your previous fics.

    Thanks, Morgoth :)

    I particularly liked Zonama Sekot showing up, wonder what's going to happen next? can't wait for the next post!

    You'll see ;)

    (In case u were wondering, I hijacked my friends comp. so i could read this)

    haha, good luck with your comp situation.
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