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Saga The Long and Winding Road---Link to Sequel NOW up! 5/11

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by JediKnight-Obi-Wan, Nov 22, 2000.

  1. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Excellent post! I really like how you are building there relationship. Taking small steps not just suddenly having a great relationship. It's very realistic. Also, the small bits of humour really add to each post. I'm looking forward to more!
     
  2. Julie

    Julie Moderator Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    That was lovely, JKOW. I really enjoyed the little details about their reactions to each other. Especially the way Alex teases! That's so sweet!! :D

    Thank you so very much for posting!! ^_^
     
  3. Healer Apprentice Lina

    Healer Apprentice Lina Jedi Master star 4

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    that was great JKOW!
    I liked the observation of the hair. Very nice touch!
     
  4. Fleet Admiral

    Fleet Admiral Jedi Youngling star 1

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    May 12, 2000
    Cool post!!

    Now I think the title suit the story very well. The road to building a relationship
    between them is long and full of challenges. I love this story more and more now. :)
     
  5. Calamity Jinn

    Calamity Jinn Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Liked the post JKOW!

    Alex certainly has a natural comforting way with him; even if he's guessing some of the time what to do, it looks like the force is with him.

    My fave bit was the thrill Alex felt in discovering the small bond with Meri.

     
  6. juwannajedi

    juwannajedi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I like it, JKOW. I have to admit I am glad to know that you didn't leave us hanging like that on purpose!
     
  7. Jade's Fire2003

    Jade's Fire2003 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    This story is getting really really good! Good writing!
     
  8. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Very cool JWOK!!!

    All the great little details, Alex jamming his foot (I felt his pain), his realization of her accepting his comfort, his gentle teasing... just outstanding!!!
     
  9. JediKnight-Obi-Wan

    JediKnight-Obi-Wan Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Thanks so much, all of you. I would love to post tonight but I'm am soo tired. Its been another one of those days where I've hit the ground running and not stopped and my brain is just soo blaaa. I'll really try to get you one as soon as possible, but I just didn't want to post a non-worthy post just because I'm tired. Its not that I don't have ideas, because I do! *G*

    Oh, hey, Calam, *G* Alex may be doing well now, but just wait till he relaxes a bit. Hehe.
     
  10. Julie

    Julie Moderator Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    We understand perfectly JKOW, and we will continue begging for more anyway! :) I hope you get a chance to post today!!! ^_^
     
  11. Jane Jinn

    Jane Jinn Jedi Knight star 5

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    Good snapshot! I like the "slow but sure" progress. I especially liked the part where Alex rams his whole foot into the dresser, then berates himself with "You're a master, now, Alex. Masters don't say sith." And the relief he feels when it turns out that Meri is not a messy slob like other teenagers he's heard horror stories about. I also liked the way Meri was worried he might make her cut her hair, and the deft way that Alex says the right thing at the right time. More soon?
     
  12. Jade's Fire2003

    Jade's Fire2003 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I totally empathize with the kind of day you've had. But please try to post soon!
     
  13. jodiwent

    jodiwent Jedi Master star 4

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    I love the line... "I'm a master now, masters don't say sith." :p
     
  14. Berit_Aysen

    Berit_Aysen Jedi Youngling star 1

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  15. Jade's Fire2003

    Jade's Fire2003 Jedi Padawan star 4

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  16. EMPRESS

    EMPRESS Jedi Grand Master star 3

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  17. Jade's Fire2003

    Jade's Fire2003 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    //waits patiently for another post

    Don't know how long my patience will last though...
     
  18. Julie

    Julie Moderator Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Merry Christmas! Levitating!
     
  19. Julie

    Julie Moderator Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Levitating! :)
     
  20. JediKnight-Obi-Wan

    JediKnight-Obi-Wan Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I've been stuck in the freakin ICE AGES for most of the past two days!!!! Literally. We had this HUGE ice storm come through and we lost all electricity, which meant no water, and no heat, and worst of all no computer. Even now I can look outside the window and EVERYTHING is covered in ice. We finally got our electricity back today, but the lights have still flickered on and off a few times.

    Ohh its been torture. So thats why I haven't posted, or even been ABLE to write. I'll get right on it. I promise!
     
  21. juwannajedi

    juwannajedi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Mar 23, 2000
    Yippee!!!! EAGERLY looking forward to your next post!
     
  22. JediKnight-Obi-Wan

    JediKnight-Obi-Wan Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Jan 13, 2000
    Crap, I'll be detained longer than I thought. Electricitys out again, and we're running on generator power for a few hours while everyone takes hot showers. We can't leave it on very long though so I won't get time to post :( This is SOO typical that it happens during my christmas break.
     
  23. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Well we all hope you get power back soon! In the meantime, Up!
     
  24. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Gee, and here I've been complaining about all the snow we've been getting in Wisconsin, which is coming down furiously... AGAIN, right now.

    I hope the weather gets better JKOW, but we'll wait patiently for more.

     
  25. Julie

    Julie Moderator Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    YIKES!! I hope that the snow leaves y'all alone soon, JKOW!