Discussion The Mary Sue - what they are and why we should avoid them

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  1. Mistress_Renata Manager Emeritus

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    This surprises anyone?
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  2. Ewok Poet Jedi Grand Master

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    I don't think the line dividing those two is particularly thin, so there are many "rights" and "wrongs" we can consider.

    A garden toolshed, as far as I'm concerned. They could simply ASK somebody who has the disability in question.

    Yup, that is all he actually did. BUT HE'S SO HANDSOME THAT IT HURTS, ISN'T HE?



    [face_rofl][face_rofl] SO.TRUE.



    It's in one of the books. And I agree about Obi-Wan.


    This is pretty much my view of things. =D=


    You think so?

    "Waiting for Nute" by Sameel Bq'tt is something I would write and read.

    BECAUSE ABSURD. YOU GAVE ME A KRIFFIN' PLOT BUNNY, YOU SON OF A BITH...WAIT, YOU'RE A WOMAN. ANYWAY, HEADASPLODE *jumps into the cold vacuum of space and realises that once her head really explodes*

    I really want to write that, btw. It's way too tempting, especially because of the creepy slave scene and when the slave speaks, because he could speak like that Stu example. [face_rofl]

    Otherwise, yes, I agree that you won this threadamajig. :D

    And here's a list of various Sues (and Stus, as far as I'm concerned). I think that most of the SW ones in profic and films are God-mode Stus.
    http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MarySue
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  3. A Blind Prophet Jedi Master

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    i actually had an idea of making something that was a complete mary sue... and then trying to make them actually be interesting. think like luke and leia's older sister who's a better pilot than han and stupid levels of rich kind of thing. i never did anything with it, but the concept of mary sue's seems more like a challenge to me than something that should be taboo.
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  4. Cowgirl Jedi 1701 Jedi Knight

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    That could be a fun plot bunny.
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  5. Kurisan Jedi Knight

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    Again with the rich = sue. I don't quite get that.

    In fact almost every rich person I see in fiction (whether by the pros or in ff), are always portrayed as evil or stupid or both.

    It's a trope I rather tire of.
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  6. Ewok Poet Jedi Grand Master

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    I could go for rich = ignorant of people's day-to-day struggles, but not more. Then again, what's rich to me is something in the lines of proper western middle class, as our middle is lower, so...
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  7. Mistress_Renata Manager Emeritus

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    Plus, rich means you can buy your way out of problems, you can always wear designer clothing, have a massive house, servants, top grade transportation, and do all of these things even when you're barely out of school. (Bruce Wayne, we are looking at you! :) ) Contributing to Sue-ism.

    Some rich people are evil, some are just clueless, and there are others who are philanthropists who try to use their money to help others. I suppose the rich=evil trope comes from the idea that ruthless people crave money & power & don't care who they hurt or what they have to do to get it. And rub their wealth in other people's faces once they've gotten it.
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  8. Ewok Poet Jedi Grand Master

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    Still, sounds more like other tropes, not Sue. Except for Bruce paragraph.

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  9. Cowgirl Jedi 1701 Jedi Knight

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    Are you accusing Batman of being a Mary Sue?! *gasps* [face_laugh]
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  10. Anedon Jedi Master

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    He isn't one.
    Yeah he has a lot of skills but he spent several years gaining them and is shown constantly training and improving his abilities.
    Bruce Wayne puts a lot of hard work into being Batman. A Sue would just have this skills with no explanation.
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  11. Cowgirl Jedi 1701 Jedi Knight

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    Yeah, I didn't really think you were. I was just joking.:D
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  12. FireKeeper Jedi Youngling

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    Geez, what a Stu... And I thought some fanfics had it bad... At least they didn't write a lengthy two-paragraph description about how good looking their Sue/ Stu was.

    Also, I actually kinda liked Aragorn in LOTR. And I think every female falling in love with him( which, if I remember correct, were just Arwen and Eowyn) more has to do with there being very few major female characters in LOTR rather than some devastating handsomeness( or at least, I don't remember him being described as handsome in the books, correct me if I am wrong) or something.
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  13. DARTH_MU Jedi Master

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    Ewok Poet, Where did you find such a gem of two paragraphs of pure.....

    My eyes.

    I can't breathe. Too many run on sentences.

    Theoretically, though, Luke, Mara, Thrawn, and Tallon Karrde are all sues/stus.

    I guess it's all how and the length of time you develop them (OC kids to adult spanning trilogy or a series) If an infant William grew up in kindergarten in book one, and in book ten we have the two paragraphs provided by Ewok Poet, no one would mind.
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  14. cookeycat Jedi Youngling

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    Ahsoka Tano from TCW is Mary Sue.
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  15. divapilot Jedi Grand Master

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    Explain.
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  16. cookeycat Jedi Youngling

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    "...A character frequently but not always a girl, usually young and more often a teen (Ashoka is like 14), who appears of nowhere
    and gets related to the main characters (Anakin), gets preferential treatment for no reasons (why she never used an uniform?),
    has skills far beyond her age and is showed as far more competent than many older and wiser character (why is she in charge
    of a battalion of people genetically made to fight?), even defeating main villains who should be far her level
    (Trandoshans, Mandalorians, Clones, Pre Vizla, Grevious, Ventress;
    all them characters able to kill full trained jedis even masters but defeated by Ashoka) gets skills as plot demands
    (mechanic, pilot, fencer, actress, changes to double sable) never faces consequences by her harsh behavior
    (sending cones to their deaths because she gets reckless, just cost her a frown and slap in the wrist)
    even when other people could be hired by same behaviour and if for some miracle is show to be in the wrong,
    at the end of the episode will be "right" or pitted or any kind of punishment will lead to a beneficial situation
    (being sent to the library gets her being the only one able to find something wrong with Jocasta),
    doesn't have any major flaw and is very attractive even to people who should not considerer her attractive
    (remember that separattis human boy, Lux) and of course gets spared when everybody around her dies (order 66)
    because lame excuses (yes she is not technically a Jedi but still a kind of famous force and hero war, so should have been a target).
    And then comes rebels, (when she is the strongest and wisest character ever). "
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  17. leiamoody Jedi Grand Master

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    But Ahsoka still manages to have an interesting character arc. She makes mistakes, has to learn from them, and still isn't so blessed with the Force she doesn't immediately recognize Anakin became Vader.
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  18. Sith-I-5 Jedi Grand Master

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    Well..., you rose to that challenge.

    The 'sending clones to their death' thing doesn't count; no-one seems to be taking much notice of clones, anyway.
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  19. Briannakin Grand Moff Darth Fanfic & Costuming/Props Manager

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    I would say yes, if you strictly look at the Clone Wars 2008 movie, Ahsoka does come off heavy on the Mary-Sue-ishness. But she had a character arc. She fails miserably in some places, eventually leading to her leaving the Jedi order. I'd say her surviving order 66 makes a lot of sense. It's a big freaking galaxy - if Obi-Wan can survive USING THE SAME LAST NAME ON THE HOME PLANET WHERE HE FOUND ANAKIN, Ahsoka's survival isn't much of a suspension of disbelief.

    But again. I point to the fact that the Mary/Gary-Sue test really doesn't work for Star Wars characters (Anakin and Luke are two prime examples). THE defining feature of a Mary/Gary Sue is an underdeveloped character, which these characters are not.
  20. DARTH_MU Jedi Master

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    looks over rules of mary sueism.

    dang it! The OC I'm developing is a Mary Sue! Why oh why did I make her a teen girl!? Well, at least she died. (and I guess she isn't that attractive. So....)
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  21. gizkaspice Jedi Knight

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    Oh boy, the dreaded Mary Sue.... It doesn't help in developing the character at all if you're constantly hovering over them checking how Sue-ish they might be, and the term is overused and gets thrown around too often IMO.

    It's really not that hard to write a compelling character--all one has to do is go out into the real world and actually talk to real people and understand that people have flaws. There's always going to be over-achievers who seem like they're great at everything, but even those people may struggle with internal conflicts or have other issues. Understandably, real people tend to be kind of boring and a "Mary Sue" is ideal and can do anything. But a character that seems smarter, or more powerful than everyone else really doesn't seem fun to be around with so IMO it's not really about trying to "avoid them" but more like understanding a character's limits and their position within the actual story.

    Just my two cents [face_peace]
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