Beyond ~The Master Who Turned~ Dedicated to my Wonderful Master, GenOochy~Updated!~

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  1. Jedi_Allegra Force Ghost

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    Ok this is my very first fanfic. *is proud*
    And I hope a lot of ppl read it!

    Beta reader: GenOchy (My wonderful master. well not anymore)

    Author's note: This is a partially true story. The fights and dying parts actually happened.

    ENJOY!!!!

    ~The Master Who Turned~

    1:

    The Jedi padawan Allegra walks into a room deep within the capital planet, saber drawn. A snap-hiss alerts her to a dark presence behind her. Turning around her eyes meet the cloaked form of the former Jedi, Ski.

    "Ski you must turn back!" Allegra call to him.

    Ski replied, his voice enraged, "I can't it is too late, I am too far into the ways of the Sith!"

    "No, Ski, it is not too late! Not if you try."

    "No, I am telling you it is too late!"

    Allegra stops, closes her eyes and uses the Force on him, trying to pull something good from the depths of his heart.

    Enraged Ski used the Force and tore at the nerves in her lungs. She clutched her chest and screamed in pain.

    "Allegra, join me, now!" He demanded.

    "No?Ski? I can't."

    Despite the pain that Allegra felt, she continued to try and bring Ski back. Finally Ski had, had enough. He lowered his hands and gathered up the Darkside. Instantly white lightning shot from his hands, Allegra fell down on the ground in excruciating pain, while Ski looked on and continued.

    Allegra screamed in both horror and pain, " Ski, stop!!!" she cried.
    Looking into the distance, she saw her fallen master in a black cape. Immediately she cried out to him,

    "Master?please?help!"

    Suddenly, a flash of red, then another large blue flash fills the room. A mangled corspe, that once was the dark lord drops to the ground. Allegra's Master steps forward. She lay on the ground, motionless. Quickly he ran over to Allegra and put her head on his lap.

    ?Allegra speak to me.? No sound comes from her mouth. ?Allegra don?t die on me now. I'm here, now.?

    Tears fell from his face. Suddenly she looked up at him. ?Master?thank?you?? her voice trails off. With some of her remaining strength she lifts her hand and wipes the tears from his face.

    ?Allegra stay with me.?

    ?Gen I?? her voice trails off again. Her life begins to slip away. He looks down at her, closes his eyes and pulls life out of the hugh city and brings it into his padawan. Slowly she comes back, her eyes open.

    ?Master?? She looked at his face with a smile on hers.

    Suddenly, the sound of aproching footsteps fills the room.

    "Run, Run Allegra."

    "Why?"

    "Run. Now... Don't ever come back."

    She stood up took a last look at him and fled, as a cloaked figure walked up behind him.

    "You let her escape."
  2. JainaSticksSolo19 Force Ghost

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  3. GenOochy Force Ghost

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    Very good. :D

    When you need a chapter betaed send it on over.

  4. Jedi_Allegra Force Ghost

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    Jaina-Yes there will be more soon!

    GenOochyalright if I have more I will send them to you :D

  5. JainaSticksSolo19 Force Ghost

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  6. Jedi_Daniel Manager Emeritus

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  7. Jedi_Allegra Force Ghost

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    Dan- thank you *bows* thank you very much. :p
  8. Obi-Wan21 Force Ghost

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  9. Jedi_Allegra Force Ghost

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    YAY!!! Another reader. Thank you
  10. CrystalKenobi Jedi Master

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    This is very good master. I was catching up on some reading when I found this.
  11. Jedi_Allegra Force Ghost

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    Edit: Are Ye Ready for chapter two, Mateys?
  12. CrystalKenobi Jedi Master

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    Yes I 'm ready for the next chapter Master.
  13. Jedi_Allegra Force Ghost

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    CHAPTER 2 PPL!


    II

    For a few weeks, the young padawan half ran, half chased her master. Then she came face to face with a cloaked figure, who apeared to be her master, in a building on Tatooine.

    ?Please Master, please turn.? Allegra plead.

    ?I?ve told you I can?t? The figure replied

    ?You must!?

    ?Allegra, I have gone to far. You have to join me.? Tears formed in her eyes, as she realized one of them would not leave this building alive.

    ?Master, please try, for me.? Allegra hung her head, as tears fell to the ground.

    ?Allegra I am sorry?but, I can?t.?

    ?Master please try??

    The figures voice becomes enraged, ?I CAN?T.?

    ?Master? I'm sorry.?

    Allegra ignites her saber and thrust it at him. The figure steped back, but it was to late, the blade went straight into the figure's heart.

    He falls to the ground. Blood runing out of the wound.

    Allegra deignited her saber and ran to his side.

    ?Master?? She cried.

    She puts her hand to the wound. ?Master, I'm so sorry.?

    Then all of a sudden she hers the voice of her master but it did not come from the body.

    ?So, you would have the heart to kill me? That's good, exactly what I need for a dark apprentice.?

    Allegra stands up and faces to the direction of the voice.
    Her Master looks over at the decoy.
    She gasps in horror, ?No?? She stops to take a deep breath. Then starts up again, ?Yes, Master, I would if it would mean the end of your dark ways.?

    His voice becomes deeply enraged, ?So be it.? His saber flew to his hand.

    ?Master, no!!?

    He ignited his saber and swung at her head.

    Allegra quickly ignited hers and blocked the blow. They start a full-fledged battle together. The room lit up by the two swinging blades.

    Suddenly, without any warning, Allegra stopped and closed her eyes, as he made a strike at her chest. He had no time to stop. The blade tore through her and she staggered back.

    The blade de-ignited, as he droped the hilt. Rushing forward he caught her in his arms. He drops to his knees and lifts Allegra?s head onto his lap.

    "Allegra? Why did you do that?" His voice was shaky, broken.

    ?Master, I can?t join you, and I don't want to live against you.? Blood trickled out of the corner of her mouth.

    ?Allegra, no.?

    She tried to get up, but it was in a useless attempt. She fell back into his arms.

    "I'm sorry, I can do no more, maybe someday you'll... see.. the.. light.. again." Her voice broke up, her eyes closed.

    ?Allegra, sweet Allegra. What have I done??

    Tears started to form in his eyes.

    ?Stay with me Allegra.? He whispered.
  14. GenOochy Force Ghost

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    Bump!

    UP!

    Liked the post.

  15. CrystalKenobi Jedi Master

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    I enjoyed this post. I could feel the emotions.
  16. Jedi_Allegra Force Ghost

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    one thing my padawan...were my master said "stay with me allegra". that is nothing compared to what he said in the next chapter. But I won't say anymore. you have to wait. ;)
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