The New Order of Gray: Chapter 4: Deity

Ohhhhhh... Atana gets to be laeder!? Don't mind that... Just joking but I like number one with or without Atana as the leader...

 

Can I just pertend Atana and Trey are make to normal and happy...? Or do I have to write a big thing?

 

We'll pretend everybody has been changed back to normal, since this will probably take a long time.

OK, all?
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Fine with me. So what are we going to do after that?

 

Hmm... let's write them complaining to the king and getting the priests fired... or excommunicated... or whatever they would do to them. Inquisition! HAHAHAHA! Oh, nevermind. We were studying Catholicism in History class.

Somebody else write it cuz I'm kinda braindead right now.
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Ooooooooohhhh! UUUUUUUUUUUPPPP! MERRY X-MAN-er, X-MAS!!!

 

I bet you guys are getting tired of me posting.
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Atrus stormed into the priests' meeting room. She was really mad. All of the priests were there. They looked up in shock at her.

"Goddess Ilona," they greeted.

"Shut up and sit down!" she said angerly.

Some of them sat down but a few remained standing.

"I said, sit down!" she shouted and launched a few fireballs that barely missed the priests.

The rest sat down quickly.

"Now, We want to know why you were trying to kill us," she growled.

Jason put a hand on her shoulder and Salem stood beside her, trying to hold her back.

"Darling, please, calm down," Jason whispered, trying to sooth her.

She shock off their hands.

"Forget it, I really hate it when someone hurts others or tries to control others and I will not let them get away with this," she hissed.

 

Naw... nobody gets tired of you posting... they get tired of ME posting.

Good post, by the way. I'll post soon.
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Hey all! Did everybody have a good Christmas?
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~Ånika §kywalker
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I had a great one! I love this time of year!

Great last post, Neon! Atrus is mad It was a different side of her.

This might be my last post or not. Who knows when we are leaving tomorrow.

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Atana leaned back in her soft chair. Trey sat beside her and they were silent.

"Well it is nice not to be singing every second now," Atana said laughing.

"I think we are all happy now," Trey said, teasing.

"Hey," Atana said slapping him on the shouldar.

"I wasn't that bad," she continued laughing.

"Well, I hope Atrus and Jason are getting this all fixed up," Trey said standing up.

"Do you think they need help," she asked, standing beside him.

"Large numbers will overwhelm them," Trey said, considering.

Wihtout a word they walked out the door and down the hall.

They finally came to a thick wood door.

"I demand to know," they could hear Atrus inside.

"Sounds like Atrus is handeling it well," Atana whispered.

Trey opened the door and the priests gasped in fear.

"Ummmmm.... ahhhhh," they stammered as Trey and Atana walked in.

"Great, maybe you too could help me get it thorugh their thick skulls that we were in danger," she yelled, half to them and half at the priests.

The priests were taking a few steps back. They shook with fear. They had guilt written all over their faces, and fear in their eyes as what would become of them.

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Jenéa hesitated before entering the confrence room. She could hear Atrus yelling at the priests. Jason, Salem, Trey, and Atana were in there also, and they were silent. Jesse walked up to her.

"I thinks it's going pretty well," he said.

"I'm thinking about going in there," Jenéa responded. "I have lots of experience with diplomacy and negociating." She thought for a moment. "Oh, Jesse, what about Elora? She's a slave and totally innocent. I feel sorry for her."

"You can't keep her."

"Now we're starting to sound like we ARE married. I wasn't planning on keeping her. I just want her to be free. I know what it's like to be a slave. Come with me?"

"Sure."

The two walked into the room. The priests were terrified. Atrus was furious. Jenéa casually lifted a hand, and she stopped. "Let me try," the red-haired girl said quietly. Jenéa approached the priests. "Now!" she said loudly. The priests jumped.

Jenéa then spoke calmly, but her voice was stern and cold. "We know what you tried to do to us. We know what you did do to us. Any moment now, the king will hear of this, and you all will be removed. You are all responsible. The charges on the scientist will be dropped. He was used. He fixed his mistake. There will be no fixing mistakes for you. In return, you will provide us with a ship, and the supplies we will need to reach our home planet. In return for me, you will let me take the slave, Elora. We will be leaving, and any offensive action by you will be greeted with force. You will know our real power, and you will not forget it."

The entire room was silent.

"Is that clear?" Jenéa asked.

The priests frantically shook their heads.

//Boy, did you scare them, Jenéa,// Jesse said to her.

//I was waiting to do that for a long time.//

//Well done.//

"Now that that's over," Jenéa began, "let's get off this planet. Who's with me?"
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I had a great Christmas too! It is great to see some of the family.

Anyways, are we going to end this tonight?

 

I can start the new thread, if nobody else wants to. Or if there are still some who want to post here, I'll wait.
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Despite a foggy Christmas eve and a blustery Christmas morning, I had a wonderful Christmas. Absolutely spectacular.

I'm pretty much done for this thread. I don't have any more plans for Aileron right now. Isn't the looking into the Future thread the new thread?

 

That thread was more for stories, but it kinda turned into one big story. After that one is finished it should branch out like the Past thread did.
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EEK! I need a name for Chapter 5! Maybe something like "Intermission" since not everybody's getting married. Any other ideas?
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How about Vacations and Wedding Bells? I don't know.

 

Hmm... this is hard. Maybe "Intermission" would basically sum it up. I don't know.
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Yeah, I think Intermission would do.

 

OkieDokie, I'll start it.
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OK, people, here's Chapter 5!
http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=1556425
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