Lemme run Kala through this. Can someone help me score this? Category 1: What's in a name? 9. Does your character's name mean something like "Beautiful", "Dances with dewbacks", et cetera? no, I named her after someone I know Category 2: I am your father. And your uncle. And your half-brother. And your second cousin's best friend's grandmother's former roommate. 11. Is your character closely related to any major figure in the Star Wars saga? Tenel Ka's adoptive daughter. Does that count? 13. Is she a hitherto unknown sibling of Anakin, Luke/Leia, Anakin/Jacen/Jaina, Ben, or Obi-Wan? no, though she and Allana consider each other half-sisters 17. Or, does your character not have any family, and is adopted by the Jedi Order because of her OMGMagickal Force powers? She has few aunts and a grandma, is adopted by ex-Jedi, not Force-sensitive. How many points is that? Category 4: You're so...beautiful. 39. Does your character look to be in her mid-twenties or teens for no reason? yes 40. Is this a plot point? She gets manipulated and twisted easily because of her naivete and vulnerability. Does that count? Category 5: All you need is, what you want is, all you need is love... 54. Thus, does your fic end with a poofy white double shotgun wedding attended by the entire Jedi Order? no, but I'm thinking about having someone crash a random wedding that she attends in the middle of the fic.