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Beyond - Legends ~*~The only thing I knew - A Tahiri Poem ~*~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Elfsheen, Apr 21, 2003.

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  1. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Once again a Tahiri poem from me. I don't have to say who it applies too! Enjoy!

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    The only thing I knew


    I hypnotize the moon above
    For memories of a distant time
    Vanished in a swirl thoughts


    I listen to the silence that surrounds me
    For the one voice that was taken
    Gone from a whirlwind of sounds


    I stare at the wall before my eyes
    For a love that was stripped
    Disappeared in a storm of emotions


    I feel for your touch on my skin
    For a truth that is not an illusion
    Departed from the only life I knew



    -FIN-
     
  2. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Com'on people, I know this board isn't very fond of poems, but it can't be that bad? Com'on stroke my ego by telling what you think ;)
     
  3. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I stare at the wall before my eyes
    For a love that was stripped
    Disappeared in a storm of emotions


    My favorite stanza, and Elfsheen, I love your poems.

    ~aeryn
     
  4. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks Aeryn, you're about the only one who reads them here, well better said, who replies ;) Thanks :)
     
  5. Ra_Skywalker420

    Ra_Skywalker420 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Mar 11, 2003
    oooo pretty! i like it! very nice!
     
  6. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks Ra!! :)
     
  7. Lonewolf89

    Lonewolf89 Jedi Master star 5

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    Sep 26, 2001
    Very good job, Elf! I really liked your poem, you sumed up Tahiri's emotions very well. :D
     
  8. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks Lonewolf! Well sometimes I can relate
     
  9. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    UPity UP
     
  10. Jek_Windu

    Jek_Windu Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great poem, Elfsheen!!! Very sad, but tht's pretty much every Tahriri poem/vingette.


    Can't wait until your next one my friend :)
     
  11. Star-Lead

    Star-Lead Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Feb 22, 2003
    Too...much...angst...URK!

    Star-Lead's ghost: Sorry about that. Too sad for words really.
     
  12. Star-Lead

    Star-Lead Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Feb 22, 2003
    Why is this not on page 1?
     
  13. Soulwalker

    Soulwalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Mar 18, 2003
    Wow...that was deep...

    Very sad, very powerful. That was excellent. :)
     
  14. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Jek_Windu: Hi, thanks for the reply! :)

    Star-Lead: Thank you too! Yeah it is a little angsty ;)

    Soulwalker: Thanks! :) Yes, sad it is. But I never thought of deep! Thanks :)
     
  15. Stormsong

    Stormsong Jedi Youngling

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    Mar 2, 2003
    To the top you go!
     
  16. Jedi_jainafel

    Jedi_jainafel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Poem?

    Poem's rock!!!

    And i love this one.

    I haven't read a well written Tahiri and/or Anakin poem in awhile, and there most definatly isn't enough on the boards.

    nina
     
  17. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks jainafel!
     
  18. corellian_chic242

    corellian_chic242 Jedi Knight star 6

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    I stare at the wall before my eyes
    For a love that was stripped
    Disappeared in a storm of emotions


    That was great, Elfsheen! That stanza was... amazing. :)
     
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