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Beyond - Legends The Path of Dreams --LotF AU--B/J, J/J/Z, Jacen,-SFFA 2007 Best Romance--COMPLETED: 01/10/08

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Flowerlady, Nov 1, 2006.

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  1. rebel_cheese

    rebel_cheese Jedi Master star 4

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    Had to go catch up again. :p

    Great two posts. Have I mentioned how much I like the idea of Syal/Valin? [face_love] An Antilles and a Horn marrying is essentially as wonderful as the thought of a Halcyon descendent (incidentally another Horn [face_mischief]) falling for a Skywalker.

    Zekk, for once on these boards, is written well as a hero. The times he's usually written well, fanfic or profic, is when he's the bad guy. :p I have to commend you for that. Although I don't ship it either the J/Z moments were pretty good, too.

    It seems that Jacen is conspiring against everyone, really. I hope Jaina and the others realize that Jacen is losing a lot more than just himself . . . [face_worried]

    At least Luke's realizing something is definitely wrong with Ben. Let's just hope he and Mara notice it in time.

    Great job. =D= Your word count more than quadruples mine, but I only have one assignment due Monday so I can spend all of today trying to catch up.
     
  2. Princess Cambria

    Princess Cambria Jedi Master star 4

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    Jacen smiled and smoothly replied, ?Ben is fine. He has received several burns, but as with the case the other day, he managed to save his life and that of Major Shevu. You should be quite proud of his abilities.? Jacen turned to Luke and gave a small crooked grin which, with his words, made Luke shudder for some unknown reason, ?It won?t be long before Ben is as powerful as you or I.?

    :mad: I find myself yelling at the computer when Jacen gets all smug. *gives Jacen the famous Organa glare*

    Luke knew the burns would most likely heal without scaring, the gashes on his face probably wouldn?t. Somehow, that saddened Luke, for he felt his son was too young to have such marring battle scars. But more importantly, Luke wondered just how many scars marred Ben?s soul.

    :_| This scene hit me hard as a parent myself. *sends force suggestion...get Ben away from Jacen NOW !*

    ?Look, sir, I wear the green of Corellia because that is what I am and in honor of our Jedi tradition. I am a Corellian Jedi, but I do not agree with what Corellia is doing and I feel that they are wrong. And I will fight my home world because of it until my last dieing breath; however, I will always consider myself from Corellia even if I never set foot on that world again.?

    :eek: Quite the strong statement coming from Jys.

    ?I mean, I wish they knew about us, about our engagement.?

    Zekk chuckled in spite of the gravity of their conversation, ?And then your father would think he really had a justified reason to kill me.?


    [face_mischief] *reaches for comm link* What's Han's number again? :D

    She surprised him by nodding and looking away, ?Yeah, I know her. I wasn?t really all that surprised to see her defect. I know I couldn?t fight my dad.?

    Valin looked at her and thought about what she was saying. ?Yeah, I?m not sure I could either.? Then added silently, But fighting the person you want to spend the rest of your life with is even harder.

    [:D] Poor Valin.

    Great writing Flowerlady!=D=
     
  3. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm sorry I'm late . . I kinda missed a chapter![face_blush] But I'm here now so . . :p

    I gotta say FL you write like a trooper!;) Great work!

    There's been alot to digest, but it was interesting to read. :)

    I liked seeing Jagged in this. Han and Wedge being on the same team is great!!!:cool: But I feel sorry for Han, I mean how could you fight your own daughter and son?! Its crazy just thinking about it. [face_worried]

    I really liked Syal in Betrayal! :D I'm glad we'll see her in this . . But Poor Syal and Valin! :( Fighting on opposite sides is an odd way of showing their love huh?o_O

    I enjoyed reading Ben in action and his kinda slow transformation into using more darkside feelings. [face_devil] Luke's coldness towards Jacen was spot on, the awkwardness and distance between them was well written. =D=

    Dur gets on my nerves. [face_frustrated] And Brisha is an interesting mystery. Can't wait to see or hear more about her.

    Zekk and Jaina were sweet [face_love] and their conversation about being on 'the wrong side' reminded me of ROTS when Anakin and Padme talk like that. Its strange that they're fighting against people they care for . . [face_thinking]

    This is awesum!:D Can't wait for more! Thanks for the PM! [:D]

    Keep it up!;)
     
  4. Claribel

    Claribel Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Hi!
    You're writing a great story!:)
    Your Jacen is extremly creepy... and the way he's thinking....[face_frustrated]
    I love how Ben has fights with his parents, he's a typical teenager. Unfortunately in his case it could lead him to his grandfather's path.
    And Valin+Syal? wow, I've never thought of that but it looks cool:D
    can't wait for next post!
     
  5. padawanlost

    padawanlost Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow, so much to say.

    I'm so glad Luke's getting bad feelings about Jacen. I love the way you're describing slimy Jacen. It's wonderful writing. Poor Jysella getting ambushed by the reporter. She handled it well though. Very impassioned statements- I really like what you're doing for her, as a character. I wonder what she's going to do with Ben's current slide?

    I love seeing that Lumiya is playing both sides quite handily. She learned quite well from the last Sith, didn't she?

    I'm seeing that Bothawui is going to present a few Jedi with some hard decisions about who they can fight, and possibly kill. Jaina and Valin look close to going over to the Corellians already. I wonder if that's going to pull her away from Zekk. I loved what she said about Ben making it through the war, and how it had changed she and Zekk.

    I'm interested to see what Valin's new wingmate turns out to be. I don't think it could pull him away from Syal, but it could make some difficult problems.


    Fabulous, as always. I'm really glad to hear that this has a long glorious future. :)


    =D=
     
  6. Flowerlady

    Flowerlady Jedi Master star 4

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    G__Anakin
    :)
    [:D]


    JainaJag14
    But we all had each other to get us through, Ben has no one.

    I'm hoping that won't be the case for long. ;)
    You will find out next chapter....:p
    Although I don't 'ship it, the J/Z moment was sweet.
    I don't ship it either...And I don't even like Zekk...well I didn't until I read Betrayal and made him into some noble guy in The Forging of an Empress and Second Chance...
    Valin and Syal...I don't know if I thought of that one. I hope that you are going to continue that plot line in this story.
    I've actually wouldn't have either (kinda like your Zekk/Wyn ship....:p) but then a few months back I read a vig about them and loved the idea...and for this story's plot that ship is perfect....[face_mischief]
    Great update, FL, and thanks for the PM. [:D]
    Thanks for reading...[:D]


    Courtney_Solo
    That was great, Flowerlady!
    Thanks....[face_blush]
    I apologize that I haven't been by for the past two updates.
    My life has become SO much more busy! *sighs*

    That's okay...I know I'm updating this about every other day which may make it hard to keep up, but I promise I'll slow down once December gets here...because then I'll have to update all my other WIPs....;)
    Great job! =D=
    Thanks so much for reading...[:D]


    SWpants666
    Luke all but snapped as he glared at his nephew. He had been trying to get Ben away from Jacen for two years now without success.

    oh man. that would be such a great move. too bad Ben's too attached to Jacen
    Ben is very attached to Jacen and Jacen will do everything he can to produce even more strife between Ben and his parents...

    Zekk came closer and said, ?Well, I see you two have met officially. Lt. Fritzer has come down with?emm? the Bothan flu.? Which wasn?t a flu at all, but a rather nasty venereal disease that humans usually couldn?t contract but there always was exceptions.

    Jaina snickered, ?It seems he came back from his last leave with more than just memories of a good time.?

    Valin shook his head and chuckled, ?I told him to leave the Bothans alone, but would he listen to me? Of course not.?


    [face_laugh] oh too funny
    It was meant to be....It was time for some comic relief, especially before the next chapter....[face_worried]
    great chapter. so great
    Thanks....[face_blush]
    what's the word count up to now?
    a little over 20k....:)


    goddess_sticks
    Great update. :D
    Thanks....[face_blush]
    I liked the scene with Luke and Mara thinking about Ben. It's so sad to see what all the different families are going through.
    Oh it is and it's going to get a whole lot sadder before it gets better....:(
    The part with Jaina and Zekk was sweet.
    Thanks...I'm glad I was able to pull that off...I don't normally ship them and I've never wrote them together where they are actually in love...:p
    [:D]


    rebel_cheese
    Had to go catch up again. :p
    I know the feeling...My PM box has 6 PM's for fics to read...LOL...
    Great two posts. Have I mentioned how much I like the idea of Syal/Valin? [face_love] An Antilles and a Horn marrying is essentially as wonderful as the thought of a Halcyon descendent (incidentally another Horn [face_mischief]) falling for a Skywalker.
    I really like them together too...and yep that would be great....:D

    Zekk, for once on these boards, is written well as a hero. The times he's usually written well, fanfic or profic, is when he's the bad guy. :p
     
  7. Flowerlady

    Flowerlady Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh, you may what to have some tissues ready...just in case....:_|

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    ~Chapter 6~

    Bothawui Orbit

    She felt the tension build within her and as it did so did her old habit of bouncing her foot of the floor of the X-wing cockpit. Syal Antilles never liked waiting and, as she waited for the orders from her commanding general, she really didn?t like it. She looked out her view port and watched as the big ships took up their positions around the planet of Bothawui. The Fifth Fleet was the defender against the slightly larger fleet that made up the Insurgents. The Bothans were given the privilege, if you will, of attacking first since this was their home they were fighting to regain control. Then the rest of the fleet opened up on the GA.

    She watched as the Mon Montha spewed more fighters and wondered again if Valin was among any of them. Sighing, she silently hoped that she wouldn?t have to face him again like this, in battle. She had known Valin Horn all her life. Her father and his mother were like brother and sister, Booster Terrik was as much a grandfather to her and her sister as he was to Valin and his sister Jysella, but oddly Syal and Valin never really considered each other as close as family. They had always just been friends?until he saved her after she crashed on Drall.

    Valin somehow used the Force to keep her alive. She assumed he had put her into a healing trance, but he never would share the specifics with her. She eventually was taken back to Coruscant to recover and Valin somehow managed to get leave to escort her back. She was to stay with Winter and Tycho Celchu but something had come up and she ended up staying with Mirax and Corran Horn, while she convalesced. Valin also stayed with her for a while and then one day he finally admitted that he had fallen in love with her. She had never been happier than when he told her of his feelings that first time and then he had kissed her. She would never forget the fire of that first kiss. Of course, it would have been better if his mother hadn?t caught them.

    Syal had always loved Valin, ever since they had been children on his grandfather?s ship the Errant Venture during the Vong war. But Valin hadn?t always loved her. His first love was a Melodie Jedi named Sannah. However, their relationship became doomed more than it already had been, when she finally began to change into an adult after the war. Valin rushed her back to her home planet of Yavin 8 and remained there for nearly a year, until they finally admitted that they could never be more than just friends. Valin came back to Ossus where he finished his Jedi training in the early days of what would become the Swarm War.

    But now they were on opposite sides of this stupid war. She wished he would see things her way. The GA was turning into the Empire, which she had to snicker at despite the circumstances, for Corellia?s biggest and most supportive ally was the Empire.

    Suddenly, her comm came to life, jarring her out of her thoughts. ?Mynocks, you?re next. Follow the Falcon. Mix it up.? As Syal clicked her comm to acknowledge her commanding general, Han Solo, she realized she wasn?t the only one facing someone she loved on the side of the enemy. Han and his co-pilot were facing their daughter.

    Syal sighed and hit the squadron frequency, ?Okay, Mynocks, we have a go. Lock S-foils in attack position. Now let?s convince the GA we mean business.?

    She received eleven clicks and kicked up her sublights as the Millennium Falcon shot forward. As she painfully watched the all too familiar oncoming X-wings of Rogue Squadron, her heart broke and she whispered, ?Oh, Valin, I?m so sorry it has come to this. Please forgive me. I love you.?

    ~

    ?Here they come!?

    Valin heard Zekk?s call over the comm and he watched in growing horror as the Inserguent Squad came closer. He recognized the Millennium Falcon and he felt Jaina?s growing sorrow a
     
  8. JainaJag14

    JainaJag14 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I've actually wouldn't have either (kinda like your Zekk/Wyn ship.... ) but then a few months back I read a vig about them and loved the idea...and for this story's plot that ship is perfect.... I don't think that even I predicted Wyn/Zekk. I just came to me. I agree, the ship works very well in this fic.

    Anyway...

    :_| Syal and Valin. So sad. Well, you did warn me. I hope they turn out alright. That first section was very rough on everyone. Good thing I had my box of tissues handy. ;)

    But, ah, Ben and Jysella...so perfect. [face_love] I love Benella so much. You write it beautifuly.

    Great update, FL, and thanks for the word count and the PM. [:D]
     
  9. padawanlost

    padawanlost Jedi Padawan star 4

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    What a wonderful/horrible day for the Horn siblings :eek:

    Please let Jaina save Syal. [face_praying] I knew she was going to have too much trouble fighting her parents. Zekk's taking a page from the Jacen playbook- [face_shame_on_you].

    [face_love] Ben and Jysella. I'm slightly nervous about Jacen's manipulation of her opinion of Luke and Mara, even if it is accurate in some ways. I'm worried he's going to use her to make Ben fall all that much faster.

    Can't wait for tomorrow's update. I'm so nervous for Syal. I have to go to sleep before I bite off all my fingernails.

    =D=
     
  10. Claribel

    Claribel Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Is it just me or the posts are really getting longer and longer? You are crazy!:D
    The beginning was so sad. When Leia said that she didn't really know her children...:(
    And I hope Valin's going to fix his mistake and save Syal one more time!
    This time Jacen reminded me of Palpatine...:mad:
    Ben and Jys...[face_love] They are so sweet together...
    I wouldn't mind another post soon...:D I like it more and more!
     
  11. G__Anakin

    G__Anakin Jedi Master star 4

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    I didn't cry:confused:

    Great Chapter!:)
     
  12. SWpants

    SWpants Force Ghost star 5

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    It is so upsetting having to see Syal and Valin fight each other. :(
    And Han and Leia having to fight the "kids" :(


    ?Syal?? Jaina?s broken heart only shattered further as she watched Valin Horn take aim at the X-wing of the woman he loved and fire.


    :eek:[face_worried]


    ?His parents don?t understand him, Jys. But we do. They want him to be a holocopy of what they are now. The perfect Jedi. But Ben doesn?t want to be like his father or his mother. He wants and needs to find his own way, which means he will make mistakes. He isn?t perfect. But why we and especially you,? Jacen gave a knowing smile and she looked away this time with a slight flush touching her cheeks, ?are important to him is because we accept his imperfections and love him despite them. Luke and Mara, irregardless of their seemingly good intentions, can?t do this. They?ve forgotten that we all have made mistakes on our journeys to being good Jedi, including them.?

    oh my gosh...he actually makes sense. What what a sly fox that one is


    ?Ben, I love you too. Force help me. But I don?t know what I?d do if I?d ever lose you.?

    oh something happy :) Unless, of course, Jys and the Skywalkers can't turn Ben away from Jacen and the Dark cause that wouldn't be good


    congrats on the word count...almost halfway there!
     
  13. Princess Cambria

    Princess Cambria Jedi Master star 4

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    ?No, it isn?t but someday your luck is going to run out and either we will have to actually take aim at her or she will us.? Leia then stood to head to her usual spot in the top turret, at the cockpit exit she turned and looked back at him, ?Han, I don?t have a good feeling about this. And I?m getting too old for this.? Then her voice took on a faraway quality as did her suddenly moist eyes, ?I gave birth to three children, Han, and I never really got to know any of them. I wasn?t there when the twins said their first words; I not only missed Anakin?s first words but also his first steps. Do you realize that I never really knew what Anakin?s favorite color was? I don?t know what Jaina?s dream wedding would be like. And Jacen has become such a stranger that I actually am afraid of him.? She met Han?s eyes again and concluded, ?I will not fail Allana as I failed her father, Han. I will fight this battle but I cannot fight this war with you. It kills me a little each time I pull the trigger.?
    :_|

    Another wonderful chapter=D=
     
  14. goddess_sticks

    goddess_sticks Jedi Knight star 2

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    Everything is so sad. :_| But you write it well.

    Ben and Jysella are very sweet. They would be even better if Jacen wasn't always looming around.

    Poor Syal. It will be interesting to see the outcome of the battle.

    Great update. =D=
     
  15. Aiel

    Aiel Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Sad about Valin and Syal, and Han and Leia having to fight their family, but very sweet when it came to Ben and Jysella. [face_love] Awww, warm fuzzies!

    Hope to see more soon and cheers for the PM! [:D]
     
  16. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Wow! I'm torn between celebrating and boo-hooing. [face_worried]

    I'll celebrate. :D

    Ben and Jysella!!!!!! [face_dancing]

    C @};- S
     
  17. Flowerlady

    Flowerlady Jedi Master star 4

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    Tnanks everyone for reading and responding....[:D]

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    ~Chapter 7~

    Bothawui Orbit

    Syal took a barrage of laser fire and her astromech screeched as her shields went down. She pulled the injured ship level and immediately saw her mistake as she picked up another Rogue Squadron X-wing.

    ?Kriff!? she cursed and after the tail didn?t shoot she instantly banked the ship and pulled it into a series of evasive maneuvers her dad had taught her. ?We lost that one Zippers.?

    Then the R-9 began to squeal again and she looked down at her sensors. ?Sithspit, don?t they ever give up?? She tried to pull into another dive but her ship was becoming sluggish and didn?t respond as well as it had when she escaped the last possible attack. Suddenly, she looked down at her sensor display wide-eyed as the X-wing that seemed to come out of nowhere had a lock on her and she was shieldless. ?Oh, no. Zippers get out of here,? she nearly screamed as she hit the ejector. Syal closed her eyes and prayed that she would be able to clear the blast zone and wouldn?t be impaled by expanding debris and shrapnel.

    She cleared the ship as it began to explode from the laser blast that hit it when she suddenly noticed that the expanding ball of what had been her X-wing seemed to be moving in the other direction and away from her. However, she wasn?t aware of anything else as she lost consciousness.

    ~

    ?Valin! No!? Jaina screamed over the comm and through the Force. She knew the type of guilt that went with shooting at a loved one. She had been forced to do that same thing six years before. However, she quickly forgot the sorrow of a love gone terribly wrong as she reached out into the Force with an invisible grasp to catch the exploding ship and to pull it away from the ejecting pilot.

    ?Jaina?? Both Valin?s and Zekk?s voices came over at the same time then Valin realizing who he must have shot let out a shattering cry drowning out anything Zekk may have said, ?Syal!!??

    Jaina let go of the fireball that had been Syal Antilles? X-wing and reached out into the Force again to find Syal floating in her ejector seat. She was unconscious but she was otherwise unharmed. Then she felt Valin?s profound despair, ?Valin, she?s okay. You hear me? Syal is okay. She cleared the blast and is going to be alright.?

    Valin?s voice was detached and lifeless, ?I almost killed her, Jaina. I almost killed her.?

    Suddenly, she realized Valin was in worse shape to fight than she was as she took aim and at a Corellian fighter and fired. ?Lead??

    Zekk, having sensed Jaina?s thoughts and feelings through their bond, came over the comm saying, ?Yes, Sticks, you?re right. Nine. Get back to base. You?re relived of duty. Do you copy??

    Valin never responsed.

    Zekk then called, ?Ten??

    ?Yes, Lead, Ten here,? the voice of Allia Judday came over in answer.

    ?Ten, you are to escort Nine back to the Mon Mothma, understand??

    A click resounded and then Valin?s protest, ?Colonel I?m fine. I?m upset but I?m okay. I don?t intend to leave this battle. I won?t let anything happen to her while she is out here.?

    Jaina felt Zekk reach out to the younger man through the meld and finally he said, ?Alright, Nine. Ten is your wing.?

    After Jaina went through a portside banking turn to avoid being vaped, she took out another fighter this time a Corellian fighter from another squadron. Then she said, ?Lead, permission to remain in the fight. I?m fine now.?

    She felt Zekk?s loving touch and his concern and she sent her reassurance back along with her love. Softly he said, ?As long as you?re sure, Sticks.?

    ?I?m fine, Zekk,? she repeated forcefully, forgoing all pretense of military propriety. ?Come on, we have a battle to win.?

    ~~~

    Hangar Mon Mothma

    Valin sat his X-wing down on the flight deck and felt as if his heart had been shattered into a million pieces. He had stayed with Syal until her area was no longer in danger. He kne
     
  18. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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    SWEET FORCE! :D THAT WAS AWESUM!!! I loved it, as always!;)

    Go Valin! :) I can't believe he almost killed Syal!!! But it made him smarten up, yay! :p Now only if Zekk and Jaina could follow his example . . [face_thinking]

    The battle was brilliant!

    And the Ben and Jys part was of course a favourite moment of mine!!! [face_love] Yay![face_dancing]

    Lovin' this!=D= Can't wait for more! Nice work!;)
     
  19. JainaJag14

    JainaJag14 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I am a Jedi first and foremost, Sir, just as you are. But I am Corellian. I realize that I can no longer fire upon the people of my home planet or more importantly the woman I want to marry someday. =D=

    Yeay, you go Valin! Show them how it's done.

    That was a great update, and thanks for the PM. [:D]
     
  20. SWpants

    SWpants Force Ghost star 5

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    Allia's story was very upsetting :(

    And oh no! I can't believe they made Valin give the lightsaber back!!!
     
  21. reagan64

    reagan64 Jedi Master star 3

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    Wow.

    This story gives me a lot of mixed feelings. On one hand, I am extremely anti-Jedi for the liberties they take, but on the other hand...being forced to kill someone so closed to you is horrific.
     
  22. G__Anakin

    G__Anakin Jedi Master star 4

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  23. padawanlost

    padawanlost Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm so relieved that Jaina saved her from the explosion. I have to give it up for Valin, he did the right thing and its going to cost him. I'm sure that someone will make sure that he's okay.

    So did the GA recover her or did the Corellians? I'm guessing he didn't let the GA capture her either [face_praying]

    I can't say I'm surprised, but it looks like Jag won his battle after all. Now if he could just win back his girl[face_love]

    Great developments. =D=
     
  24. Aiel

    Aiel Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Hmmm. [face_thinking] It's getting very, very interesting. :D

    Hope to see more soon and cheers for the PM! [:D]
     
  25. rebel_cheese

    rebel_cheese Jedi Master star 4

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    As usual I fall behind and need to catch up . . . [face_blush]

    My time constraints are so terrible right now that I can only tell you that the first post was awesome, but I have enough to go into the second one in more detail.

    I feel terrible for Valin. First he nearly kills the woman he loves and now he's been arrested . . .

    Allia's story was heartbreaking. :( That sucks, your fiance` was killed on the opposite side and you might have done it . . .

    Jaina and Zekk remain sweet and heroic, and I'm glad. It doesn't look like there's too many heroes left on the GA side.

    Do I detect some Corellian sympathy on your part, FL? [face_thinking] But that's all right, after Sal-Solo bit the dust my sympathies have shifted to Corellia too.

    And I have to agree with your assumption about the fate of Valin and Sannah . . . it's so sad, you know. That's what Lusa and Raynar would have eventually been . . . a doomed love. :(

    Great job. =D=
     
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