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Beyond - Legends The Path of Lineage - (The kids of J/J and J/D, Post NJO) *NEW UPDATE 1/16*

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Master_Vicky, Oct 15, 2003.

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  1. Master_Vicky

    Master_Vicky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ok folks. I've Decided that you've waited long enough. Here it is. The Sequel to Two Weeks...

    Disclaimer: (I always forget to put these things in *shrugs*) Everything that you don't recognize, which will probably be most of it, is mine. Everything else belongs to the big G (not God :p).




    Summary of past events:

    After two decades of peace, the galaxy has once again fallen into unrest. The Chiss peoples have divided into two factions, the Freedom Alliance siding with the Galactic Alliance and the Isolationists opposing them. General Jagged Fel, the leader of the Freedom Alliance, has been rallying more systems to their cause.

    The Jedi have also been plagued with troubles of their own. A few years earlier, the Dark Circle organization emerged, headed by Matthus Emerson. Nothing is known about Emerson, only that he is a user of the dark side. His followers slowly convert young Jedi to his ways, in the hopes of creating a galaxy of darkness. Luke Skywalker has bestowed the duty of halting the actions of the Dark Circle upon himself and the other Jedi Knights.


    Dramatis Personae:

    Adam Fel- Jedi healer
    Allie Fel (Kaser)- Jedi Knight
    Ben Skywalker- Jedi Knight
    Caleb Emerson- Heir to the throne of the Dark Circle
    Danni Quee Solo- Scientist for Galactic Alliance Intel.
    Emma Solo- Padawan to Ben Skywalker
    Han Solo- Captain of the Millennium Falcon
    Jacen Solo- Jedi Master
    Jagged Fel- General; Leader of the Freedom Alliance
    Jaina Solo Fel- Retired pilot; Jedi Master
    Jennolin Solo- Jedi Knight
    Leia Organa Solo-Former New Republic Diplomat
    Luke Skywalker- Jedi Master
    Mara Jade Skywalker- Jedi Master
    Matthus Emerson- Leader of the Dark Circle
    Mika Solo- Jedi Knight
    Nathan Solo- Jedi Knight
    Pace Kaser- Son of Sid Kaser, inventor of the LD comlink
    Sid Kaser- Inventor of the Long Distance Comlink
    Soontir Fel- Former Imperial and Chiss Military Officer
    Syal Antilles Fel- Wife to Soontir Fel











    Jedi training room on Mon Calamari



    "Are you sure you really want to do this?" Jaina Solo Fel asked her old apprentice. Jennolin Solo looked over at her with a fierce determination.

    "Yes."

    "Do you think you're ready for the weight? The risks are a lot higher than you'd think. You could lose everything in an instant, and you'll be doing the same to countless people."

    Jen glanced sideways at her. "The war really left an impression on you, didn't it?"

    Jaina sighed. "War does that to everyone if it's long enough."

    "Well even so, I want to do this. It just feels right."

    Jaina stopped walking and studied her. Ever since she could walk, she had shown an interest in flying. Being her apprentice hadn't helped the matter. It came as no surprise that she would ask her to help put an application in for Starfighter Command. The eagerness in her eyes was enough to convince her that she would do anything to get in. She flashed a small smile at her and nodded. Jen was about to voice her thanks but the sound of lightsabers clashing caught their attention.

    "They're at it again. I'm surprised their lightsabers actually touched this time."

    Jen was referring to her two younger brothers currently sparring in the middle of the room. Being twins, Nathan and Mika shared a bond so close they could predict each other's moves almost every time. The result was a spectacular show of fluid motion and grace. Rather than block attacks they would find a way to avoid the blows, be it by side stepping or flipping or some other form. It almost seemed as if they were going through an intricate dance. In the end they always tied, neither winning.

    "Do you think they still do it as practice, or are they just trying to show off?" Jen asked.

    Jaina shrugged. "I don't know. It's probably both. You can never get enough practice in and we Solos do tend to show off a bit." She smiled as she said the last comment.

    Jen chuckled, her eyes still fixed on the boys. They finally came to a close, both swinging around at the same time leveling their lig
     
  2. Master_Vicky

    Master_Vicky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *sits and waits patiently for people to reply*


    -Vicster
     
  3. J_M_Bulldog

    J_M_Bulldog Jedi Master star 4

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    Hey Conductor

    Great start.
    [face_laugh] A Solo staying out of trouble. That's like telling a wampa not to stay on Hoth.

    Aww, Allie has a finace. Sweet, [face_love] Suprised Jag and the rest of the males in Solo/Skywalker/Fel family haven't made his life difficult.

     
  4. Angel4evaM

    Angel4evaM Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Hey Conductor I can't believe I'm saying this but it was worth the wait. I wish I had your knowledge of SW so that my story would be as good as yours. Keep up the good work. Is it to soon to ask for the next post.




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  5. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Very nice start, Master_Vicky. :D Can't wait to read more.

    ~aeryn
     
  6. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    I may not be a big J/J fan but kids of them are always interesting as is this story, so I've decided to keep my eyes on it! Nice Start. A bit confusing though, but that might be just me ;)
     
  7. Csillan_girl

    Csillan_girl Jedi Master star 5

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    You started it!! :D

    It's cool so far, but you should explain a little who is who. I know Adam and Allie, but I had a little trouble where to place the rest of them. In your next post, perhaps??

    Can't wait for the bad guys to appear!! There will be lots of Chiss, right?? Hehe, you know how to make a blue girl happy!! :D
     
  8. Master_Vicky

    Master_Vicky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Okie dokie. Lots of things to do....

    First off to clear everything up here are the "family relations". ;)

    Jania and Jag's Kids:

    Adam and Allie. (*gasp*yes, that's right, only two.)
    Allie is marring Pace. (Awww. [face_love])

    Jacen and Danni's Kids (Yes, Danni. Muhahahahaha!):

    Jennolin is the oldest (about 18)
    Nathan and Mika are next in line (they're 17. Nathan is older by a few minutes)
    Emma is the youngest (about 15)

    Emma is Ben's Padawan.

    That's all for now. School's about to start. Bye for now.



    -Vicster
     
  9. Jaina_and_Jag

    Jaina_and_Jag Jedi Master star 5

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    Awesome start to what looks to be an awesome story!!! :D I really loved how Allie and her soon to be husband we having a little moment. [face_love] Can't wait til we get to meet the bad guys. [face_mischief]

    J&J
     
  10. Jaina_and_Jag

    Jaina_and_Jag Jedi Master star 5

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  11. so_vain32

    so_vain32 Jedi Youngling

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    This is a really good fic! :) I can't wait for more!

    -Ry
     
  12. Danni_Quee_Solo

    Danni_Quee_Solo Jedi Youngling star 2

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    love your fanfic! I couldn't ask for a better one. Hurry up and post if you don't................*rubbs hand wickedly then run to home depot to find a chainsaw*
    [face_devil] [face_devil] [face_devil] [face_devil]



     
  13. Master_Vicky

    Master_Vicky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sorry about being MIA guys. I've been real busy. But I've got some good news! We won our band competition! BAND NERDS UNITED WHOO! Right... so... to the long awaited replies!


    JMB- A Solo staying out of trouble. That's like telling a wampa not to stay on Hoth.
    Indeed. [face_laugh]

    Suprised Jag and the rest of the males in Solo/Skywalker/Fel family haven't made his life difficult.
    Oh trust me he has. But that's being saved for later. ;)

    angel- If listen to me you would, more knowledge you would have. ;) 8-}

    aeryn- Thank you! :)

    elfsheen- As for being confused, look at my last post. Ans as for everything else, I'm glad to have caught your attention. :)

    Csillan_girl- It's cool so far, but you should explain a little who is who. I know Adam and Allie, but I had a little trouble where to place the rest of them. In your next post, perhaps??
    Once again, read last post.

    There will be lots of Chiss, right??
    Darn tootin'! :D


    More later, school's about to start. :mad:



    -Vicster



     
  14. Master_Vicky

    Master_Vicky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    And now back to the replies! (whoa. that sounded too much like an old tv show.)

    J&J- I can't wait either. Hold on, I don't have to wait! Muhahahahahaha! [face_devil]

    so_vain- Thankies!

    DQS- I'm glad you love my story, but I would like to keep my apendages(sp?). 8-}

    Okie day. Now that that's finished...

    A/N: If anyone is interested in betaing (and doesn't live within the same town as me 8-}), I would appreciate the help. This one is going to be rather long and the first post alone was the longest I've ever written (four pages on Word not including the summary and cast list [face_shocked]), so I'm expecting to find alot of grammar errors that would take forever for me to edit by myself. I would only need you to make sure things were spelled right and that words weren't missing (I tend to type fast when I really get going and not type a word or two ;)).

    If you would like to help you can pm me.


    -Vicster
     
  15. Master_Vicky

    Master_Vicky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    If I can get a beta then I'll put the next post up. ;)


    -Vicster
     
  16. Danni_Quee_Solo

    Danni_Quee_Solo Jedi Youngling star 2

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    DQS- I'm glad you love my story, but I would like to keep my apendages(sp?).

    Fine you can keep them but please i would like to read Two Weeks. You can pm with the adress please.8-}
     
  17. Angel4evaM

    Angel4evaM Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Conductor Since I'm not allowed to help out I do have a suggestion. If you go to the Fan Fiction Writer's Resource board there is a thread full of betas that you can PM and ask for help. That's how I got my beta. It's up to you and if you do change your mind I am willing to help. I will be good I promise. Besides you get to help with mine.



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  18. Master_Vicky

    Master_Vicky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    DQS- The link is in my bio. ;)

    angel- I will consider this. :)


    -Vicster
     
  19. Master_Vicky

    Master_Vicky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    AN: I have sucessfully found a beta and possibly a back-up one. So guess what that means. You get another post! :D 8-} I will have it up shortly.



    -Vicster
     
  20. Master_Vicky

    Master_Vicky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Okie Dokie. The next post. Are you ready? [face_devil]






    Flashback



    "Mother? Why are you crying?"

    "Oh my dear boy." She sobbed.

    He walked closer. "What is it?"

    She wiped her tear-streaked face. "I should have told you long ago. I had hoped it would skip you too."

    His brow wrinkled in confusion. "What do you mean?"

    "You know of the Force?"

    He nodded.

    "You have it."

    "But how? Neither you nor father were Jedi."

    "You are right. I made sure of that when I met your father. But your uncle..." she broke off as another tear slid down her face.

    "I have an uncle?"

    "Yes. We were twins, separated at birth. He was force sensitive and I wasn't. He never knew of me." She looked at him with a profound sadness in her eyes. "I'm sorry. I tried to prevent this"

    "Who is he?"

    "The Emperor."

    He could not keep the shock from his face. Regaining his composure, he walked over and embraced his mother.

    "I will only ask one thing of you." She whispered softly.

    He pulled away slightly.

    "Promise me you won't become like him."

    "I promise."


    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I've failed you mother. Matthus Emerson sat in the dark chamber that was his throne room. Over the years he had done many things. He loved, lost, killed, betrayed, lied, and ultimately broken his all but forgotten promise to his mother. When he thought about it, the only thing in his life that was considerably good was his wife. She was the only one that saw the good in him, or what was left of it. When she had died a few years after their son was born, he completely slipped over the edge and into the darkside of the force.

    The doors at the far end of the room opened slowly to reveal a striking young man with short blonde hair and dark brown eyes. He walked with a casual step, stopping a few paces in front of the high backed throne chair. Inclining his head in a small bow, he waited patiently.

    Matthus studied him with his unwavering eyes. Finally, he said, "Proceed."

    "General Fel has departed from Mon Calamari headed towards the Unknown Regions. We're not clear on the exact destination, but it's not far from the border. His children are escorting him." He waited until he got a nod to go on.

    He gave him a question instead. "Do you remember your mother?"

    The boy took on small look of surprise. "Yes. She was... pretty... kind... loving." His face softened bit and a tiny smile almost formed, but it was erased before it had a chance, going back to the emotionless wall it was. "But it was her love that made her weak. That is why she is gone."

    Matthus's face stayed neutral as he moved his hooded head in a slow nod. He continued the report. "Luke Skywalker is planning another search for the most recent converters. He thinks..."

    Matthus rolled his eyes and cut him off saying, "Don't bore me things I already know, boy. I know of everything Skywalker does. Now tell me something I want to know."

    His voice sent chills down his back. Frowning slightly and glancing momentarily to the floor, he gathered his wits about him and spoke again. "The youngest Solo may be knighted earlier than expected. It's not official, but the possibility is there."

    "Hmm." Matthus lowered his chin down to meet two pale fingers. His eyes seemed to lose focus for a moment, but returned just as quickly. "The Skywalker blood runs strong in her. This may be my chance. Skywalker's son might be too old, but his apprentice isn't. If we can turn her, she could become a very valuable asset." He looked back up at the boy waiting silently. "Bring her to me. Do whatever you have to, but I want her."

    "Of course." He turned and headed towards the doors.

    "Caleb."

    His steps faltered to a stop and his skin paled. He had said his name. He never used his name. Caleb turned slowly, fear evident in his deep brown eyes.

    Matthus looked at him with a stare as hard as durasteel. "Don't fail me."

    Caleb swallowed. "Yes father."
    ********************

    The plot thickens. [face_devil]
     
  21. Danni_Quee_Solo

    Danni_Quee_Solo Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Nice.
     
  22. J_M_Bulldog

    J_M_Bulldog Jedi Master star 4

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    Oooh, that not good, not good at all.

    :mad: *growl* Caleb, stay away from her.
     
  23. Master_Vicky

    Master_Vicky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    DQS- I do believe you are the only person to refer to the bad guys as "nice". 8-}

    JMB- Stay away? Now why would he want to do that? [face_mischief]


    -Vicster
     
  24. Angel4evaM

    Angel4evaM Jedi Youngling star 2

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    SCARRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYY!! *Racks brain to think of which Solo child they could be talking about.* Well considering the fact that Jag and Jaina's kids went with there dad's last name. Then it is either Jennolin or Emma, which in itself isn't good because it's a Solo. If your going to learn anything, DON'T MESS WITH A SOLO OR A FEL! It is certain to only end in you losing your life. Unless it's Jacen and then you might get lucky. Although fatherhood might have changed that. Anyways I'm not here to rant. That was a spooky post but I can't wait to find out what happens. *Sits and trys to wait like a good girl. Unwilling her leg starts to shake.*


    ~Angel~
     
  25. Danni_Quee_Solo

    Danni_Quee_Solo Jedi Youngling star 2

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    DQS- I do believe you are the only person to refer to the bad guys as "nice".8-}

    Im meant that your post was interesting
    Hurry up and post! Asap! Now! ;)

     
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