The Poetry Thread

Discussion in 'Mojave Desert CA' started by Mertroid, Feb 19, 2003.

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  1. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    Very pretty poem you posted there Mertroid Where do you tend to find these?
  2. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    Everywhere. I also have some poetry books. :)
  3. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    Yes, and one in which you have your poem entered in which I might add I am really proud of you! :) Its a great task you have accomplished Mertroid. I pray that you will use that talent to do so much more then I could ever imagine.
  4. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    Why thank you Alex. I really appreciate it. And yes I'm going to keep writing poetry. I love it and it's great and all. But I'll have another poem here soon. :)
  5. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    Yes, that would be absolutely great Mertroid, to have another one of your great masterpieces here.
  6. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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  7. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    No problem, :) I would love to read another poem that is straight from your heart to this thread [face_love] ahh...see? [face_laugh]
  8. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    Lol. Well here is one I wrote and I'll post it now....

    Peace

    The joy of the sunshine rising.
    The dew drops dripping off the leaves.
    Clouds whisping by.
    The sweet smell of flowers in a meadow,
    peace is here.

    The feeling of your new born son in
    your arms.
    The touch of his small, soft hands,
    saying hello to his new mother.
    A small smile across his face.
    His body fragile and warm against
    your chest...
    Peace is there.

    The joy of watching your son
    grow before your eyes...
    Wishing nothing more but him healthy
    and remembering what he was taught
    Wishing he'd still be around...
    He's off to college.
    Returning home, you hear his voice again,
    joy...
    and peace is here.

    Watching him slip a finger
    on a maiden's hand,
    in a quiet church full of
    love, he's married and pledge
    his love to someone,
    but he will always love you
    more than anyone else.
    Peace is found here.

    Growing old,
    he still finds you beautiful,
    so much time and effort
    he gives to you.
    His warm lips are on your cheek,
    thanking you for being hs mother.
    His words are warm feelings and
    music to your heart and soul.
    With your son...
    Peace will always be here, even if it
    doesn't show, it will always be there.





  9. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    Thats a truthful poem Mertroid I can say that from my love [face_love] for my mom :) .
  10. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    :)
    I shall make sure to post another poem of mine later. :)
  11. Jedi_Knight_Seifer Jedi Master

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    that wa a nice poem. Try this one, its a little weird.


    One Dark Night
    One dark night in the middle of the day,
    Two dead boys got up to play,
    Back to back they faced each other,
    Drew their swords and shot each other,
    A deaf policeman heard the noise,
    And came and killed the two dead boys.
    If you don't believe this lie is true?
    Ask the blind man, he saw it too.


    Hope you like it.

  12. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    That was werid Jedi_Knight_Seifer. Perhaps I will create a poem. One poemi like is The Raven. [face_devil]
  13. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    Whoa that's weird but I like it. That was very neat and awesome! I loved it. Dark and creepy..oohhh. lol [face_laugh]
    :D
  14. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    Darkness is my ally, the nighttime is my friend...

    Note: Lets see if we could create a scary poem together. I added myfirst line now it yourguys turn. :)
  15. Jedi_Knight_Seifer Jedi Master

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    when all else fails, push on to the end....
  16. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    I like this poem so far. :)

    ~Title
    ~Authors

    Darkness is my ally, the nighttime is my friend, when all else fails, push on to the end.
    The end where all hope fades and dreams come true, the point in which they come after you!
  17. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    All bottled up inside, all that I hide,
    is nowhere in sight, until there comes a fright.
  18. Jedi_Knight_Seifer Jedi Master

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    trying to keep it close to my heart,
    hard to do while being torn apart,
    help me to find the light that I need,
    help me to keep it from other's greed
  19. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    the haunty, and daunty greed that brings up from below, and pushes us to the edge where it grabs ahold of us never lets go.
  20. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    Escape you may try,
    But then you're asked why.
    No matter where you run,
    There will be no sun.
  21. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    You may run but slowly behind you they will come!
  22. Jedi_Knight_Seifer Jedi Master

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    even when you think you've beaten them at last,
    They'll be in your present, future, and past
  23. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    So looking back will do no good! [face_devil]
  24. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    So just try to brighten up the mood [face_devil]
  25. Jedi_Knight_Seifer Jedi Master

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    Lit by lightning's brilliant flash,
    run fast as you hear them rend and gash
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