Discussion in 'Mojave Desert CA' started by Mertroid, Feb 19, 2003.
Very pretty poem you posted there Mertroid Where do you tend to find these?
Everywhere. I also have some poetry books.
Yes, and one in which you have your poem entered in which I might add I am really proud of you! Its a great task you have accomplished [link=http://boards.theforce.net/user.asp?usr=703289][hl=gold]Mertroid[/hl][/link]. I pray that you will use that talent to do so much more then I could ever imagine.
Why thank you Alex. I really appreciate it. And yes I'm going to keep writing poetry. I love it and it's great and all. But I'll have another poem here soon.
Yes, that would be absolutely great [link=http://boards.theforce.net/user.asp?usr=703289][hl=gold]Mertroid[/hl][/link], to have another one of your great masterpieces here.
No problem, I would love to read another poem that is straight from your heart to this thread ahh...see?
Lol. Well here is one I wrote and I'll post it now....
The joy of the sunshine rising.
The dew drops dripping off the leaves.
Clouds whisping by.
The sweet smell of flowers in a meadow,
peace is here.
The feeling of your new born son in
The touch of his small, soft hands,
saying hello to his new mother.
A small smile across his face.
His body fragile and warm against
Peace is there.
The joy of watching your son
grow before your eyes...
Wishing nothing more but him healthy
and remembering what he was taught
Wishing he'd still be around...
He's off to college.
Returning home, you hear his voice again,
and peace is here.
Watching him slip a finger
on a maiden's hand,
in a quiet church full of
love, he's married and pledge
his love to someone,
but he will always love you
more than anyone else.
Peace is found here.
he still finds you beautiful,
so much time and effort
he gives to you.
His warm lips are on your cheek,
thanking you for being hs mother.
His words are warm feelings and
music to your heart and soul.
With your son...
Peace will always be here, even if it
doesn't show, it will always be there.
Thats a truthful poem [link=http://boards.theforce.net/user.asp?usr=703289][hl=gold]Mertroid[/hl][/link] I can say that from my love for my mom .
I shall make sure to post another poem of mine later.
that wa a nice poem. Try this one, its a little weird.
One Dark Night
One dark night in the middle of the day,
Two dead boys got up to play,
Back to back they faced each other,
Drew their swords and shot each other,
A deaf policeman heard the noise,
And came and killed the two dead boys.
If you don't believe this lie is true?
Ask the blind man, he saw it too.
Hope you like it.
That was werid [link=http://boards.theforce.net/user.asp?usr=789243][hl=gold]Jedi_Knight_Seifer[/hl][/link]. Perhaps I will create a poem. One poemi like is The Raven.
Whoa that's weird but I like it. That was very neat and awesome! I loved it. Dark and creepy..oohhh. lol
Darkness is my ally, the nighttime is my friend...
Note: Lets see if we could create a scary poem together. I added myfirst line now it yourguys turn.
when all else fails, push on to the end....
I like this poem so far.
Darkness is my ally, the nighttime is my friend, when all else fails, push on to the end.
The end where all hope fades and dreams come true, the point in which they come after you!
All bottled up inside, all that I hide,
is nowhere in sight, until there comes a fright.
trying to keep it close to my heart,
hard to do while being torn apart,
help me to find the light that I need,
help me to keep it from other's greed
the haunty, and daunty greed that brings up from below, and pushes us to the edge where it grabs ahold of us never lets go.
Escape you may try,
But then you're asked why.
No matter where you run,
There will be no sun.
You may run but slowly behind you they will come!
even when you think you've beaten them at last,
They'll be in your present, future, and past
So looking back will do no good!
So just try to brighten up the mood
Lit by lightning's brilliant flash,
run fast as you hear them rend and gash