The Poetry Thread

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  1. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    For where they run, or where they hide makes no diffeence by your side.
  2. Jedi_Knight_Seifer Jedi Master

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    doom for you and doom for them,
    this hurts you like a rose's stem,
    beautiful as a day's sunset,
    deadly for those who forget,
    warning, warning, the petals scream,
    when you wake up its just a dream
  3. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    You breathe and heave for your in fear, clam and cool is what you hear.
  4. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    This is a cute and funny poem...

    Pratical Application

    He's teaching her arithmetic,
    He said it was his mission,
    He kissed her once, he kissed her twice and said,
    "Now that's addition."
    And as he added smack by smack
    In silent satisfaction.
    She sweetly gave the kisses back and said,
    "Now that's subtraction."

    Then he kissed her, she kissed him,
    Without an explanation,
    And both together smiled and said,
    "That's multiplication."
    Then Dad appeared upon the scene and
    Made a quick decision.
    He kicked that kid three blocks away
    And said, "That's long division."

    LOL! [face_laugh]
  5. Jedi_Knight_Seifer Jedi Master

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    That poem rocks! It's really funny.
  6. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] NOW THAT IS A FUNNY POEM!! [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]
  7. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    Yeah isn't it hilarious!? Gosh the first I read that I was like on the floor pratically. Well not really but it's funny! [face_laugh]

    Confused

    My Knees start to shake,
    When you're in sight.
    My mind is filled with wonder,
    My heart with fright.

    When will this feeling stop?
    When did it start?
    How can I listen to my mind,
    Without breaking my heart?

    I'm so confused.
    What should I do?
    I can't think of anything,
    Except you.

    Should I ignore you,
    Or just give it time?
    I can't think straight,
    My heart controls my mind.

    Anonymous
  8. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    A cry of a confused heart. Quite good.
  9. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    Inside

    Bottled up inside
    Are the words I never said,
    The feelings I hide,
    The lines you never read.

    You can see it in my eyes,
    Read it on my face:
    Trapped inside are lies
    Of the past I can't replace

    With memories that linger-
    Won't seem to go away.
    Why can't I be happier?
    Today's a brand-new day.

    Yesterdays are over,
    Even though the hurting's not.
    Nothing lasts forever,
    I must cherish what I've got.

    Don't take my love for granted,
    For soon it will be gone_
    All you ever wanted
    Of the love you thought you'd won.

    The hurt I'm feeling now
    Won't disappear overnight,
    But someday, somehow,
    Everything will turn out all right,

    No more wishing for the past.
    It wasn't meant to be.
    It didn't seem to last,
    S I have to set him free.

    Melissa Collette
  10. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    Thats a great Poem, it speaks so clear! :)
  11. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    Very strong messages too. :)
  12. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    Take me in
    Take me out
    Just get me out of here
    All trapped inside
    I can't get out
    Is anyone around?

    I can't breath
    Closed all around me
    Tight inside
    HELP!
    Too much is going on
    I don't want to miss it
    Will anyone help me,
    to get out of here?

    anonymous
  13. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    Is it a man stuck in a box? [face_laugh]
  14. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    I have no idea! [face_laugh]
    That one could go many ways. [face_laugh]
  15. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    [face_laugh] I know it has to be a man stuck in a box, it just has to, 8-}
  16. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    [face_laugh]
    Only if we knew the author then we could ask what it's about. I mean it could be something depressing, or a man in a box that's stuck! [face_laugh]
  17. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    Thats it! [face_laugh] I am going to find out, anyone willing to follow? 8-} Well, anywa back to poetry, I find it many a times to be the persons expressed feelings going into the poem, and many times also the persons beliefs and ways of thought. All good poems are coming from the heart.
  18. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    EVIL LIGHT


    by Sara


    ------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Enter my darkness
    Be free from the light
    Hold it together
    Keep it tight
    Wisper to me the Evil
    Signal to me the good
    Darken the way of which I can
    but light the way that I should

  19. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    hey, That was a great poem I especially like this following line: "Darken the way of which I can but light the way that I should."
    Its a great line which shows that the bad things are always the things to which we do, and yet there are always alternatives.
  20. Mertroid Jedi Grand Master

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    Yes that is very true. That poem did intrigue me and so I posted it too. I'll have more shortly when I find more. :D
  21. Stridarious Jedi Grand Master

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    Yes, that poem was great, it even illistrates the typical Christian walk. There are always the good things to do, yet many times we choose the things that lead to utter destruction. But thank God there is someone to always forgive us! :)
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