Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by _3MD_PsychoSniper, Nov 11, 2003.
Whoops - double post.
?I officially HATE stun bolts!? Kyrie yelled once she was able to talk again.
?At least they weren?t blaster bolts,? Gebi commented.
?That?s true. They?re just really bad to wake up from,? Kyrie mumbled.
?At least we?re waking up,? Gebi mumbled.
?Oh, shut up!? Kyrie cried.
LOL Great dialogue.
Clever kids, too. I hope they give the pirates what-for. I used to love Chinese Whispers - but I'm an old fogie.
Can't wait to see what the kids do.
looks like I have a LOT of catching up to do, and in my own thread at that.
This looks interesting, I like it! I haven't read it all...yet. I have to go eat dinner! Courtney
Welcome back Typo!
Welcome to the insanity Courtney_Solo
The kids had been very good for half an hour, but that was all that they could stand really.
Pyto started humming an annoying tune first.
The rest of the group chimed in and gradually they started singing, ?This is the tune that doesn?t end, it goes on and on for the pirates, we just started singing it, not knowing what they?d do, and we?ll continue singing because that?s all we have to do. This is the??
That was when the same pirate came in and yelled at the group again.
?I told you to keep quiet!? he shouted.
?We?re bored! Can you really expect a group of kids to keep quiet for this long with nothing to do? We can barely sit five minutes without being entertained by something,? Kuati yelled at the guard.
She received a smack across her small face with the blunt end of his blaster for her smart comment, eliciting a sharp cry of pain from her lips.
The other kids cried out in protest when he did that, but he ignored their cries.
?What the hell are you doing?? another pirate yelled.
?Keeping them in line.?
?That?s not how you keep them in line! The boss wants them healthy, not scared out of their minds. If they have to talk or sing, then let them.?
?Yeah, but doesn?t he always say that fear leads to the Dark Side? I?m just warming them up for him.?
?Leave ?em be. They?re scared enough as it is. Especially if they find out why we kidnapped them.?
?Why did you kidnap us?? Krit asked.
?You?re going to be the first students of our boss. He?s a Sith. You?re able to talk, just don?t cause too much trouble.?
?You okay, Kuati?? Kale asked her.
?No,? she cried. ?My cheek hurts, and I can?t move.?
?Maybe you should be more careful about what you say next time,? Kale suggested.
?Maybe I should,? she replied, and in a completely un-Kuati-like action, she started to cry.
Kale scooted next to her and tried to comfort her as best as he could, which didn?t work very well because his hands were bound behind his back.
?Yes!? Kyrie cried out.
The other kids turned to stare at her.
?Remember that talent I have? It works on other things,? Kyrie told them.
They stared blankly at her for a while. Once they caught on, they nodded eagerly in affirmation.
?So, who thinks Kuati smells like poo-doo?? Pyto loudly asked the group.
?Shut up, Pyto. We don?t want to hear it,? Kale commanded.
?Of course you don?t want to hear me, or anyone else talk right now. You just want to
make Kuati feel better because you looooooooove her,? Pyto teased.
Kale, and a few others, were surprised that Pyto was actually making sense that day. He was acting obnoxious to cover for any noise that the other kids might make as they freed themselves.
?I do not!? Kale yelled back.
Otri snorted. ?Yeah, sure, that's what they all say...?
YES!!!!!!!!! Finly caught !
good work in my absence Jaya.
I think Pyto's[i/] the one who loves kauti.
Yay! I'm caught up again! Great post Jaya! I loved the return of the tortorous song that never ends. I do feel a bit sorry for Kauti, but it is cool seeing all of the kids working together, even Pyto.
I think Pyto's the one who loves kauti.
Bite your tongue!!!!!
YES !!!!!!!!! Finly caught !
Glad to see that you haven't changed, Typo! Welcome back, and hope you enjoyed basic training and AIT.
:: giggles ::
Raven, now what did I promise you?
Does that mean I get five credits, Jaya?
What? Wrong thread Valin.
So? I guessed right, didn't I?
I will post my comments by tomorrow night, Master. I promise. Really, I will.
No, Valin, you did not guess right. And that's really getting annoying.
Uh oh, not good! So the pirates kidnapped them to take them to a Sith lord? Wonder who thats supposed to be? Hehe, like how they're surprised Pyto/Otri is making sense now
Welcome back, Wes Janson/Typo!
Aren't the Sith supposed to be extinct?
Well, I don't really care as long as this person isn't another resurrected Emporer
So what's that power again? I forget...
March 10th Post
He ran his hand through his hair and took stock of his situation. ?Nothing around to use as a weapon; food tray?s disposable ? no good. No cracks; everything?s airtight. Nothing.? He kicked the wall in frustration.
Then, it hit him.
?I?m a Jedi? I wonder?? His thoughts trailed off and he worked on focusing his mind. ?Gotta open the lock??
Doh!! *Hits Wes upside the head*
After searching most of the base, Wes found a computer that someone had forgotten to log out of. Finding the room, he headed that direction, cautiously.
Well that was convenient.
March 15th Post
?But now we?ve got better fire power. At least your dad knows what to pack, Otri,? Kuati commented.
I guess she?s still upset with Pyto to call him ?Otri?. Or? she?s just going to give him a hard time about his name, simply because she?s Kuati.
?But how do we know they?ll come all the way in? You?d think they would have learned from their previous mistakes.? Kuati added in her dissenting voice, meeting a few gasps and groans from the group.
Ah, the voice of reason.
?Maybe someone goes up and tugs on one of the pirate?s pant legs and tells him that Jodi hasn?t stopped crying and needs attention. It?d have to be someone that can look very sweet and adorable,? Kale softly spoke.
The group turned to stare at Kuati, except for Pyto. He continued to fiddle with his new gadgets until Gebi spotted it and took them away before he could set them off ahead of their escape plan.
That?s my little angel?
March 17th Post
?I?ve gotten that problem fixed,? Kale said proudly. ?I made a miniature jamming device that should take out their comms. But that would mean that we would have to leave the datapad here? so maybe we should just take their comm devices.?
Hehe, what a smart kid.
?Will you just shut up already?? Kuati screamed.
Kuati needs her daily fix of ?beating up on Pyto?ah?Orti?
?Let me see that,? Kuati snapped as she took the can from his hand.
?You can read? I didn?t know you could read!? Kyrie teased as she read the can Kuati held.
Ah, a new target.
March 29th Post
?Okay guys, they should be here in about a minute. Jodi, I need you to start crying now. The rest of you girls, you need to get ready to cry too. Kale, I need you to have the jammer set up so that you can activate it when the pirates come in here. We don?t need them calling for reinforcements before we escape. Pyto, you, sadly, are in charge of the distractions. You, and your team, will be in charge of setting off the smoke bombs, setting off the mini-boomers, and then hitting the pirates with the knock-out gas. Kuati, you probably have the most important job of all. If you can?t get the pirates in the door, we?re in deep bantha dung.? Kale surveyed his group. He hoped that they were all up for their tasks today. ?Does everyone understand their orders?? They all nodded in response. ?Good, then let?s get in place.?
Just how old are these kids again, Master?
?Hm? why don?t you think about them hurting Wes. If we can?t get out of here, that?s what they?ll do to him.?
Jodi felt tears start to form in her eyes. ?That?ll do,? she whispered back.
You posted, Padawan! Wow. I'm impressed!
Ahh the plot thickens - -
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AHHHHHHHHH NEW POST! Kale and Kuati sitting in a tree..... So the kids are free, and they're going to be raising merry hell for the pirates.