Before - Legends The Qui-Gon Jinn Challenge Thread : New Challenge **Qui-Gon as a kid ** updated 5/8/05

The Best Intentions


Found that stupid kid.
Must train him I told Yoda.
Oops! Now I am dead.

 

These are all great. Uhm, feel free to PM me the other ones.

 

I second that! These are awesomely well done! PM me too!

 

Flash and clashing swords
Oops, didn't see that coming
you must train the boy.

 

Cranky Padawan
Another 'pathetic' life
Look who's training now...

 

tangled_sphere those were all lovely, I love the line Gentle, world-worn eyes.

VaderLVR64 Haha, that's an interesting way of going with it. Nice one.

DarthIshtar Nice work. Those are cute, especially the second one.


Now, I need to try my hand at a couple more, if I can ever wake up around here.

 

These are so much fun to read, you guys!

Perhaps your next training mission should be to get the man himself to me. Getting right on it, Master!

Put me on the PM list!

 

Feeling mean right now...

Want Some Cheese with that Whine?
I had blue eyes first
That is all I hear from him
Obi, that whiner!





Why Him?
Don?t mind being dead.
But Maul? Such a bantha?s butt.
Obi was too slow.




Size Matters Not
I said I love you
She just said no, my saber
Wasn?t big enough.

I can't help what dirty thoughts you might come up with, I truly meant his lightsaber

 

Vader, you naughy tsika ma!

 

*SNRK!* Saber wasn't big enough!!!! Suuuuuure VaderLVR64 well maybe you were! I'll believe you...maybe hehehehehe those were cute! Loved the 'Why him?' hehehehe

 

Now what could we possibly make of that last little haiku VLR? Perhaps Jinn should construct a new saber, a bigger one, so that he can impress the lady of his choice.

These are all great, everyone's done a wonderful job.


Okay, here's one of my own:

No More, No Less
I am not to love
I am a Jedi, no more
no less, just Jedi.

 

These are all wonderful everyone. Here's some I came up with at work.

To Obi-Wan's Question
A heart once shattered
Cannot accept a second
Son. The answer.... no.

Turning
Broken Circle. Xan's
Sharp laughter cuts deep. Master's
Failure is complete.

The Living Force
Butterflies wing free
A boy's delight when they rest
On his broken nose.

 

I made one really long one at Athena's suggestion about my three oc's Qui-Gon, Kyran and Devin from my Repercussions story Enjoy!

Family Ties


Bonds thicker than blood
between them flow always, they
help each other, friends.

Like three brothers they
work together with the Force
to get the job done

All have been childhood
companions, nothing can tear
Family apart.

When one is hurt, near
is the other, feeling it.
Bonds are strong with them.

A threefold cord is
not easily broken. Torn,
But not broken down.

They have each other
to lean on for strength and love
The Force brings them close.

Time after time they
are tried by the Force. As
Iron sharpens iron.

They sharpen their skills.
Their strength is relentless; yes
Helping them along.

Making them stronger.
Even in death they are not
parted. Watching they

Are for each other
Eternity is theirs, as
Lives draw to a close.

Each one not perfect
But having done duty, they
Receive their reward.

 

VaderLVR Those are all good! I love the first one, haha, precious.

AnakinsHeir oh, that's a nice little one, I like it.

diane those are lovely! I adore the last one! Oh, I can see that. *hugs it*

Layren Nice job! That's your boys all right. I'm glad you went for it.

Yup, that was my idea all right, because I wrote a little one for one of my OCs and Qui-Gon, but I'm not going to post it because I haven't posted the story with him here yet. But I did write a few others. The first one is for anyone (all of us?) who's ever been writing a story and got attacked by other ideas.

Jedi in my head,
told him to leave, I'm busy,
he would not listen.


Compassion
Love, gentle and free,
strong enough to save them all,
cares enough to try.


Hold On
Hold my hand, my boy,
one who made me love again;
let go and I'll die.

 

Ah that was great Master! Great job there Diane and AnakinsHeir!! Athena I loved those two! How sweet!

 

Lost Love

She had green eyes, striped
True heart that loved only me.
Now she?s gone, my love.


Okay, first time posting anything I wrote. I figure I can't screw up 17 syllables too badly.

 

Wow, a bunch posted today as well....

VaderVR64 Loved the last line. Oops!

Ish Another oops but loved the middle line! I must have a thing for oops...
And then the second one. Kinda ironic, isn't it...LOL.

Vadey More you say! Whine... LOL.
Bantha's butt. I think Maul would take exception to that!
And your final one.... oh, my. Sure you meant lightsaber... sure you did.

AnakinsHeir I liked the repetition in something so short.

Layren Cool that you did a long one. I'm finding that they are getting a bit easier but you should see me at work counting on my fingers when I think no one is looking...LOL. Good job tying this in with your OCs.

Athena See, you can do more!
I'm busy...LOL. I don't think that would work with our Master Jedi!
Compassion was sweet but my favorite was Hold On. So sad.

Luke Cool, your first post!!!! Hope to see many more. I liked the middle line. Pretty much described Tahl to a T. Good job.

Leona Who would have thought that Quiku would be so popular?
Love the doublet of Quiku. Both describes the Padawans very well. I liked the Xan one the best but only by a thread! Keep it up!

 

LukesTheMan Oh, that's lovely! Tahl! *whimper* What a wonderful first try!

Leona Thanks. Those are wonderful, they go so well together. Sums up the Master's evolution pretty quickly.

No, diane, no it doesn't, lol. Thanks, I had to try some Qui/Obi angst.

 

Awww!! You guys!!! these are all so adorable!!!!!! LOL! Athena , yes, he never listens to me either...

LOL, if I was poetically inclined in the least I would post something, but for the moment, I'll just read and lurk and say AWESOME JOB starting this thread Diane, is way fun!!!

 

The Force

The ways of the Force
Unifying and Living
Bound as one in me.

 

I haven't enough time before work to reply individually but these are WONDERFUL, everyone.

More later, maybe I can even come up with some more Quiku myself.

As Diane knows, my brain has been slighly distracted recently (you would not believe the amount of time I spent on the web trying to figure that one out...) which is too bad because it appears that the Quiku inspiration is somewhat delicate and easily lost. Fortunately, also easily refound I think.

KD