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Beyond - Legends The Revised Silence - A/T lyric (sad, very sad)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Elfsheen, Aug 8, 2003.

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  1. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    It;s the second lyric I wrote, like 'Shouting out loud, I never thought it to be A/T until I re read it!

    Keep your tissues near you! ;)




    [b]The Revised Silence[/b]


    The raving darkness of a silence long gone
    I call to you but you are never there
    Then the unknown calls and I leave
    To return to a revised silence


    I feel (I feel)
    I fall (I fall)
    I crave (I crave)
    I burn (I burn)
    For a memory dead and lost


    The changing of a life in the stillness of time
    I hope to face what I will never have again
    Then I see your face in my minds eye
    To leave me in the desperate longing once more


    I force (I feel)
    I wish (I wish)
    I push (I push)
    I try (I try)
    To find my way to where I need to be


    The turning time stops beyond life
    I love the need to let you go
    Then to go back the saneness of reality
    To let the hurt diminish the word of where you are


    I sense (I sense)
    I found (I found)
    I have (I have)
    I feel (I feel)
    Strength to keep on living

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  2. Jedi_jainafel

    Jedi_jainafel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow, beautiful lyrics Elfsheen.

    *Wipes eyes*

    nina
     
  3. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks Nina!
     
  4. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Kick thread in the butt!
     
  5. Jedi-Tahiri-Veila

    Jedi-Tahiri-Veila Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Beautiful, and very sad. I read some of your other works, and you have a gift with poetry. Great job on this!!
     
  6. JediMasterChie

    JediMasterChie Jedi Youngling star 1

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    :_|

    *grabs kleenex*

    Beautiful!!!!

    :_|
     
  7. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks to you both :)
     
  8. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    *kicks thread*
     
  9. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    UP this goes!
     
  10. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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  11. Jek_Windu

    Jek_Windu Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 26, 2003
    Sorry it took me so long to reply. Wow. That was...sad, but good.
     
  12. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    May 27, 2003
    really good elfsheen, this deserves a bump!
     
  13. Tahiri-Solo

    Tahiri-Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    wow....that was really good!
     
  14. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    WOW, thanks for the reviews!
     
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