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Saga The Saddest Bullet-Challenge Order 66

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Ob-wan-shawa, Jun 7, 2005.

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  1. Ob-wan-shawa

    Ob-wan-shawa Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Title: The Saddest Bullet
    Authors: Ob-Wan-Shawa
    Characters: Ki-Adi-Mundi, and a Clone Commander
    Timeframe: ROTS
    Notes: Written for the Order 66 Challenge.




    "It will be done my lord."
    In many people's mind that is a horrible thing to say. It's betrayel and murder. Yet to Clone Commander Latuk it was just an order. Like many other order's that have come. Even though this one was to kill the man that is leading him, has led him before. Master Jedi Ki-Adi-Mundi even had saved Latuk's life before. But that wasn't the issue order's were orders. He said to his comrades " Blast him", and fired.

    KI-ADI-MUNDI'S VIEW
    In the last two years this was routine, he has done it hundreds of times. Yet this time it was different. He raised his lightsaber and charged. He didn't notice untill it was too late. He knew they weren't following so he turned, too late. He blocked as many as he could but one got through, the saddest bullet in his life. He has seen many but this one, it killed him. He was shot a few more times and as he died he wondered, why was this different.



    This is my first fan fic please tell me how it is and all!
     
  2. Brant_Flir

    Brant_Flir Jedi Padawan star 4

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    its good. I like how you told both sides.
     
  3. Ob-wan-shawa

    Ob-wan-shawa Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thanks I wanted to show how both felt how it was different but yet the same.
     
  4. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Mar 26, 2001
    Ouch, wonderful.
     
  5. Knight-Ander

    Knight-Ander Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 19, 2002
    Yet to Clone Commander Latuk it was just an order.

    That's pretty much the shocking thing about Order 66. The clones followed it without question.

    Nicely done. :)
     
  6. Ob-wan-shawa

    Ob-wan-shawa Jedi Youngling star 3

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    "That's pretty much the shocking thing about Order 66. The clones followed it without question. "


    Yeah thats another thing that makes it so sad.

    Thaank you all so much for responses I hoped some people would like it.
     
  7. _JM_

    _JM_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I have to agree, it was just an order. The Clones same obedience to authority that had let them win so many battles under Jedi command also allowed them to kill the Jedi without hesitation or mercy when an even higher authority commanded it.

    Nice balance of the perspectives.
     
  8. Ob-wan-shawa

    Ob-wan-shawa Jedi Youngling star 3

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    "I have to agree, it was just an order. The Clones same obedience to authority that had let them win so many battles under Jedi command also allowed them to kill the Jedi without hesitation or mercy when an even higher authority commanded it. "


    Yeah even though the order were evil some were good, so they just followed them all, programming.

    "Nice balance of the perspectives."

    Thanks I wrote the Clone one but then I thought I should do Ki-adi's too it would be cooler.
     
  9. BigE

    BigE Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 31, 2002
    I liked it very much. :)
     
  10. Ob-wan-shawa

    Ob-wan-shawa Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thank you very much. I'm liking the responses it's my first one and no complaints. I want more people to answer more more come!
     
  11. Grievous_FanGirl

    Grievous_FanGirl Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jun 12, 2005
    Oh cool! I like this, well done!:)
     
  12. Captain_Dungar

    Captain_Dungar Jedi Youngling

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    Nov 4, 2005
    Great Fic! I like how you pointed out the two views.:)
     
  13. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Somehow I missed this from months ago... excellent view of both.
     
  14. light-

    light- Jedi Youngling star 2

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    nice stuff

    i thought that was a really sad part in the movie when he got killed.. because he just turned around and like i dunno just the look in his eyes...:_|
     
  15. Magenta_Moonshadow

    Magenta_Moonshadow Jedi Master star 3

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    It was the fact that the Jedi were betrayed, but they never knew why, which always gets me...

    :_|
     
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