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  1. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Gonna post the first half of five since it's what I have from my beta...hoping to get it on the next page though. :)
     
  2. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Chapter Five
    Altair Manor, Theed, Naboo

    Julie Drian removed the thermometer from Mailelei's ear, satisfied that her fever had dropped another couple points. It hadn't taken long to diagnose blood poisoning, and find the culprit - a laceration on her leg. Julie immediately started her on IV antibiotics and drained the infected cut. Amaia assisted her in getting Mailelie into an infirmary shift and then under cooling blankets, also cleaning up when she suddenly threw up. She was quiet while they worked, which suited Julie fine. It was more important to get Mailelie's condition stabilized. Now, after over two hours of working, her temperature had finally decreased enough to no longer be dangerous, and Mailelie was breathing much easier. Julie crossed to the bedside to check the cut on her leg, while Amaia mopped Mailelie's brow with a cool cloth. "Did you know Princess Nadia very well, Amaia?"

    Amaia looked over at her, surprised. "No, I rarely came to court." She smiled slightly. "And her Highness had so many suitors, it was difficult to speak with her even when I came."

    "I can imagine," Julie said, returning her smile. "Good thing she's married now."

    "To whom?" Amaia asked, shocked.

    "Jacen Solo," Julie said, then winked at her. "Only took them five years."

    "That's all?" Amaia mused, shaking her head. "How do you know her?"

    "We trained to be Jedi together," Julie answered, brushing her hair out of her face. "Shared a dorm room."

    Amaia was surprised. "I didn't know that about her Highness." She shook her head. "I was aware that a Jedi was coming to escort her off world a few years ago, but I never imagined she would not only end up not only marrying him, but training to be one as well?"

    Julie smiled. "I can imagine that it it quite surprising."

    Amaia nodded. "It is.? She was silent for a moment, considering. "Not everyone objected to Lyanna's rule at first. It is hard to keep the people's faith when there is no food to feed them. But they were really good people, and I believe they would have been able to turn things around soon." She took a deep breath. "I've been working for years to make it safe for Princess Nadia to return." She looked down at Mailelei. "I would give anything to see her, to know for myself that it all hasn't been for nothing."

    Julie finished checking Mailelie's leg, then looked up into Amaia's eyes. She was suddenly reminded of what Solana had said about Amaia being a possible choice for Lainey's decoy. They had a similar sad quality to their eyes, reflecting slightly in their bearing.

    Since their return to Naboo, after Lainey?s knighting, she and Lainey had been having people ask them to train their Force-sensitive children, and they both had always referred them to Master Skywalker. Recently, they had both considered asking Luke if it would be okay, once Lainey?s baby was born, to start pre-training children on Naboo. "Lainey and I plan to go to Coruscant in a few weeks. Maybe you could come."

    "I could be recognized." Amaia shook her head. "But thank you for the offer."

    "I can think of a few ways to disguise you," Julie said, smiling cryptically. "Ways in which you could remain in the shadows."

    Amaia looked at her, blue eyes bright. "Possibly." She opened her mouth to speak, but hesitated a moment, focusing her gaze on Mailelie. "Did you....use the Force on her?"

    "A little bit," Julie answered, patting her patient's hand. "I've put her into a healing sleep. She will wake from it in the morning."

    "Oh." Amaia tilted her head to the side, pursing her lips. "Doesn't look much different from normal sleep."

    Julie nodded. "There isn't much difference, except that it is much deeper and more refreshing."

    Amaia still studied her, when the door to the room slid open, admitting Prince Richard Naberrie.

    "Amaia, we're broadcasting in five minutes," Richard began as he entered the room, freezing when he noticed Julie. "Julya?"

    "Yes," Julie answered. "Lainey and I ar
     
  3. Jaina_Solo_59

    Jaina_Solo_59 Jedi Master star 4

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    great post!
    I'd say more but I'm supposedly cleaning my room.
     
  4. Caramello-Jedi

    Caramello-Jedi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    The last 2 posts were great.

    So they are gonna get her to Coruscant? I think i know how.

    Good work.

    More soon please?
     
  5. jade51999

    jade51999 Jedi Knight star 5

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    Good..now there's a new post I know there won't be a new one for a few days so i can get this darned paper done..

    runs around like a chicken with her head cut off..

    stupid grad school..why do i need a masters degree again?

    why!? Why!?

    :)

    Anyway..your post..nice..fascinating that Richard showed up..are we going to see more of Julya's brother? Oh and the discussion with Amaia about Nadia..hmm...i bet shell go as the decoy :)
     
  6. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    the beta has finished with all of five now. :D
     
  7. Arin_Atona

    Arin_Atona Jedi Master star 4

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    "Jacen Solo," Julie said, then winked at her. "Only took them five years."

    Silly kids.

    "I can think of a few ways to disguise you," Julie said, smiling cryptically. "Ways in which you could remain in the shadows."

    Yeah. I guess decoy too.

    Julie nodded. "There isn't much difference, except that it is much deeper and more refreshing."

    I need some of that kind of sleep :p

    "We'll see how the Galaxy responds to our holorecording first."

    Hopefully they're better at video editing than I am!
     
  8. padawan feline

    padawan feline Jedi Master star 3

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    Hehe. I don't think looking for the hand of the force is rediculous at all! I mean heck, I'm looking for it now! It would be so cool to really have the Force! ;) :D :D :D

    hehe. BTW- I thought it was pretty cool when you had Qui-Gon and his wife in the hospital naming their little boy, Bortonspew. That's such an interesting name. Even though the scene didn't seem to fit in anywhere... well I'm sure you'll explain it later, so it was a really cool scene.
     
  9. jess_squared

    jess_squared Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Don't have time to say a whole lot, but good post. :)

    "Maybe," Richard mused, looking back at Mailelie. "We'll see how the Galaxy responds to our holorecording first."

    Can't wait to see what this holorecording is.. :) And I'm really liking this Mailelie girl. Hehe. But even if she agrees to be Lainey's decoy, I still don't see Lainey doing well with having a decoy.

    Keep up the good work. Can't wait for more. :)
     
  10. Myri_Antilles

    Myri_Antilles Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Very good! Not as entertaining as some of your other posts, but I suppose the plot has to be advanced in serious ways sometimes. ;)

    Hmmm... would the disguise for Amaia be anything along the lines of a handmaiden for Lainey?

    I can't wait to see the holorecording! :D
     
  11. jade51999

    jade51999 Jedi Knight star 5

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    Padawan Feline I'm sorry, I'm confused..what are you talking about?! with the Bortonstew stuff...*shrug* just curious :)
     
  12. padawan feline

    padawan feline Jedi Master star 3

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    jade51999 posted:

    Padawan Feline I'm sorry, I'm confused..what are you talking about?! with the Bortonstew stuff...*shrug* just curious

    Well... let's just say I notice a lot of things other people don't seem to. ;) Just have a look at all my other posts in this thread. :D

     
  13. jade51999

    jade51999 Jedi Knight star 5

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    Ahh..I see!

    It all makes sense now!
     
  14. Myri_Antilles

    Myri_Antilles Jedi Padawan star 4

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    It all makes sense now!

    Well, I understand it, but it still doesn't make sense... ;) :p
     
  15. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    If I am to lose all respectability, I am going to do it right."

    LOl [face_laugh]

    That was great!!! Hmm, they're broadcasting . . . what was on that holorecording the guy took from Richard's wife?
     
  16. PrincessPadme

    PrincessPadme Jedi Youngling star 1

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    "Jacen Solo," Julie said, then winked at her. "Only took them five years."

    And a very long five years it was... ;)

    Recently, they had both considered asking Luke if it would be okay, once Lainey?s baby was born, to start pre-training children on Naboo.

    Ooo, sounds like fun! And a good way to keep both Julie and Lainey on Naboo. :)

    "I can think of a few ways to disguise you," Julie said, smiling cryptically. "Ways in which you could remain in the shadows."

    Ah, so my earlier suspicion begins to play itself out. [face_thinking]

    "We'll see how the Galaxy responds to our holorecording first."

    Alright, so just what is up with this mysterious holorecording? I think you ought to let us know soon... ;)

    ~Padme :)
     
  17. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Jaina_Solo_59:

    great post!
    I'd say more but I'm supposedly cleaning my room.
    lol! That's alright...clean your room! ;) Thanks :)

    Caramello-Jedi:

    The last 2 posts were great. Thanks :-D

    So they are gonna get her to Coruscant? I think i know how. In a barrel. ;)

    Good work.

    More soon please?
    Thanks! More today :-D

    jade51999:

    Good..now there's a new post I know there won't be a new one for a few days so i can get this darned paper done..

    runs around like a chicken with her head cut off..
    lol! Wow, you're glad there won't be more soon, that's um great! ;)

    stupid grad school..why do i need a masters degree again?

    why!? Why!?
    To be all you can be?

    Anyway..your post..nice..fascinating that Richard showed up..are we going to see more of Julya's brother? Quite possibly ;)

    Oh and the discussion with Amaia about Nadia..hmm...i bet shell go as the decoy Now what is giving you guys this idea??? ;) Thanks!

    RebelMom:

    the beta has finished with all of five now. :-D

    Arin_Atona:

    Silly kids. Indeed!

    Yeah. I guess decoy too. Wow, you guys are really stuck on this idea... ;)

    I need some of that kind of sleep Me too!

    Hopefully they're better at video editing than I am! Guess you'll find out!

    padawan feline:

    Hehe. I don't think looking for the hand of the force is rediculous at all! I mean heck, I'm looking for it now! It would be so cool to really have the Force! I don't think Richard would accept you, I mean...um...good luck with that! ;)

    hehe. BTW- I thought it was pretty cool when you had Qui-Gon and his wife in the hospital naming their little boy, Bortonspew. That's such an interesting name. Even though the scene didn't seem to fit in anywhere... well I'm sure you'll explain it later, so it was a really cool scene. Indeed I will, all will be explained in due time. ;)

    jess_squared:

    Don't have time to say a whole lot, but good post. Thanks :D

    Can't wait to see what this holorecording is.. *looks secretive*

    And I'm really liking this Mailelie girl. Hehe. I'm guessing you mean Amaia? ;)

    But even if she agrees to be Lainey's decoy, I still don't see Lainey doing well with having a decoy. Oh definitely not...O:)

    Keep up the good work. Can't wait for more. Thanks! :)

    Myri_Antilles:

    Very good! Not as entertaining as some of your other posts, but I suppose the plot has to be advanced in serious ways sometimes. My sister thoght I was so weird for laughing so hard at that. ;) Thanks :)

    Hmmm... would the disguise for Amaia be anything along the lines of a handmaiden for Lainey? Why only for her? What if Armand needed one? ;)

    I can't wait to see the holorecording! Dang...I hope it can live up to this hype... ;)

    NYCitygurl:

    LOl Thanks! :D

    That was great!!! Hmm, they're broadcasting . . . what was on that holorecording the guy took from Richard's wife? Oh that was just a message on a datachip. :) Of course that is going to come into play later... ;)Thanks :)

    PrincessPadme:

    And a very long five years it was... Darn engagement saber ;)

    Ooo, sounds like fun! And a good way to keep both Julie and Lainey on Naboo. And to keep those two ou of trouble, me thinks. ;)

    Ah, so my earlier suspicion begins to play itself out. Dang...I am so...predictable... ;)

    Alright, so just what is up with this mysterious holorecording? I think you ought to let us know soon... Letting you know today! :D


     
  18. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Alright, this post is dedicated to Sache, even though it isn't necessarily what she wants. ;)


    ***
    Lainey and Solana had grown bored enough to turn on the holoprojector, watching an idiotic design show on redecorating master refreshers. Solana leaned forward with interest, pointing out things she'd like to see put in Lainey and Armand's. Lainey tried to look interested, though a nice long nap was suddenly appealing to her. She couldn't understand what was so wrong with the refreshers in the first place. Why fix something that wasn't broken? Lainey folded her arms, leaning back against the couch with a sigh. This was why she rarely watched the holonet any more. Who had time to watch people wasting time?

    She closed her eyes, wondering what was going on downstairs. Devon had sent up servants to keep her informed, and from what she had last learned, the girl was suffering from blood poisoning and they were treating her for it. Lainey found it strange that Devon's household medic was not present, and that Devon hadn't specified who the girl was in the first place. It made her wonder what was really going on, or, if perhaps she was just being overly suspicious. Pregnancy had made her quite a bit more imaginative than usual, resulting in odd dreams and absent-mindedness. She'd dreamed last night that her baby had been born a mynock, and she'd had to chase him flying just barely above her head all around Theed. Armand hadn't been much help at all. He?d simply informed her that their son had inherited his special gifts from her, and that she'd have to deal with it. Lainey had woken up mad at him, but he'd attributed it to her normal early morning moodiness.

    An ice-cold hand touched her cheek, and she started, her eyes flashing open. Armand stood over her, his cheeks flushed red from the cold, with poorly brushed off snow clinging to his hair and coat. "Good morning, Lainey."

    "Armand?" Lainey asked, taking both his hands in hers. "You're freezing cold! What are you doing here?"

    "Well, the snow has lessened considerably," Armand answered, somewhat sheepishly. "And rumor has it my wife's around here somewhere."

    Lainey took his hands, alternately blowing on them and lecturing Armand. "You should have waited the storm out. What if you had crashed or gotten stuck somewhere? It's hardly two degrees outside!" She moved on to his cheeks, reaching up on her tiptoes to reach them, gently stroking. "There's been fifteen crashes already, you know, and five deaths...."

    Armand raised an eyebrow, cocking his head toward Pavol Drian. "Notice how she scolds, but she can't keep her hands off me?"

    "Notice how my husband lacks common sense?" Lainey asked Solana, running her fingers through his thick wet hair. "He won't even wear a snowcap!"

    Solana exchanged glances with Pavol, before rising to her feet. "How about I go make some hot chocolate for them, milady?"

    Lainey nodded. "Thank you, Solana."

    Jet stepped forward, somewhat awkwardly. "I will assist you, if it pleases milord?"

    "Go ahead," Armand said, gesturing for him to go.

    Lainey had to smile, casting Armand a sly glance. She'd noticed a chemistry between Solana and Jet not long after she and Armand had married, but it was something the two had been fighting for the past three years. There was an unspoken rule that handmaidens did not get involved with the guard, due in part to the dangerous lives they led. Also, it could interfere with their duties to their liege lord and lady. It was not a rule Lainey and Armand chose to enforce, and though they had tried to make it as obvious as subtly allowed, Solana and Jet had not caught on. Though, recently, Jet had seemed to be making up excuses to be alone with Solana, or, Lainey thought ruefully, to get away from she and Armand when they argued.

    Taking advantage of Lainey's slight distraction, Armand had buried his face in her neck, kissing her subtly it took her a moment to realize it when he found a particularly sensitive spot. Lainey ga
     
  19. Jaina_Solo_59

    Jaina_Solo_59 Jedi Master star 4

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    He He He!
    I read this morning but I had to go to school where people call me Kathy! I really hate that.
     
  20. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Ah ha...funny, I don't mind being called Kathy at all. ;)
     
  21. laurethiel1138

    laurethiel1138 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Now that's interesting...

    Armand, Pavol and Lainey know.

    Wonder who's next?

    MTFBWY,

    Lauré ;)
     
  22. NYCitygurl

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    She'd dreamed last night that her baby had been born a mynock, and she'd had to chase him flying just barely above her head all around Theed. Armand hadn't been much help at all. He?d simply informed her that their son had inherited his special gifts from her, and that she'd have to deal with it. Lainey had woken up mad at him, but he'd attributed it to her normal early morning moodiness.


    Lol!!! [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Yes, they figured it out!!!
     
  23. Myri_Antilles

    Myri_Antilles Jedi Padawan star 4

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    My sister thoght I was so weird for laughing so hard at that.

    Didn't you know that sisters ALWAYS think that? ;) :p

    Why only for her? What if Armand needed one?

    Well... <thinks> You know, the Naboo seem to like handmaidens to look like the person they're guarding... I certainly hope she doesn't look like Armand... ;)

    Dang...I hope it can live up to this hype...

    I'm sure you can! :p

    <reads post>

    She'd dreamed last night that her baby had been born a mynock, and she'd had to chase him flying just barely above her head all around Theed. Armand hadn't been much help at all. He?d simply informed her that their son had inherited his special gifts from her, and that she'd have to deal with it.

    [face_laugh] <holds sides> That's a great mental picture there... :p

    "Notice how she scolds, but she can't keep her hands off me?"

    :p Great mush (as usual)!

    More really soon? :p

     
  24. Jaina_Solo_59

    Jaina_Solo_59 Jedi Master star 4

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    I've been called Kathleen like my entire life and to tease me people call me Kathy. Well on the boards people call me Kat.
     
  25. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    I get called Kathleen too ;) I always hated being called Kathryn..., since that isn't even short for Kathleen! :)

    Will do replies later... :)
     
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