This. I have an iPad with the iPencil stylus and use it to draw. In fact, the little sketch of Kanan and Hera in my avatar was done that way. So it’s very plausible a character in the GFFA could use her datapad in lieu of a sketchbook.[/QUOTE]

 

I think what I am trying to say is that for most characters with an health issue, be it Tenel'Ka, Luke, or someone that pulled a chess move that Chewie didn't like; this is a conversation between them and their health professional. And maybe friends and family.

For someone with the influence of characters that you write for, @Briannakin , be it the Organas, or the President of the United States, I feel that FAR MORE people will be trying to get involved, entire universities (and maybe improve their reputation, or get a royal warrant, into the bargain); doctors coming along to advise of new discoveries or technologies; the other planets offering to sweeten trade deals by offering to helping out.

Absolutely no problem you giving an OC a disability; it's the apparent lack of follow-up from the rest of your world that I queried.

Edit: That Big Zoo multi-species hospital, on Alderaan, literally had nothing to offer.
Okay.

 

Has anyone else ever scrapped a big project?

I have a 57k word fic that I've finally just decided to abandon and move on. It was good practice, and I'm definitely going to use some of the OCs and other stuff from it in the future, but it's still painful to go through all that work to just give up on it.

 

That is a lot of words to abandon, @Flyboy240. I've abandoned fics before, but nothing that had that kind of girth. What's causing the abandonment? Hit a dead end? Lose interest? Write yourself into a corner? What's at the core of this decision. I'm not saying don't do it. Just be sure why you want to do it.

 

I wrote it without a concrete outline so the story ended up growing out of control, the latter 2/3 of it just sort of feel like aimless wandering with no overarching plot. It was good practice and now I don't have to worry about fixing it, which would take a total re-write which I just don't have the motivation for.

 

I was just telling someone that at the last Celebration I went to a writing panel with Delilah Dawson, who said, "Don't be afraid to kill your babies." Which means that if a scene or a character isn't working, then, scrap it. In your case, I'd suggest going back to the point where things started meandering, junk back to there, then step back and take a fresh look. I think plotting is one of the hardest things to do. Maybe if you cut back to where things went off track, you can refocus and think where it's all going.

And of course, what gets cut goes in a separate file, which can be called on if necessary. That way, it wasn't all for nothing.

 

I would never, ever cut a 57K anything. Don't do it.

 

Behind Door Number One, keep digging.

Behind Door Number Two, acknowledge that during this process, we both know where the other is coming from, say "Drokk it", and move on.

*Chooses Door Number Two*

So, a 57k project? Whooooh.

Well, certainly don't erase the data. You may suddenly get inspiration one day, and you want the material on standby.

Certainly, try to identify where it all started to go wrong.

Feel free to PM me a summary, the last chapter, and what it is you aren't happy about.

You could be just burned out from such a big project. Working on something else for a bit, or working on a series of "quick wins", may help.

 

@Flyboy240 Given what I've seen of your stories I find it difficult to believe that you'd go to the trouble of writing 57,000 words if it were all worthy of the recycle bin. Surely the subject must have appealed to you if you wrote so much about it? Maybe what you have doesn't work as a 57K-word story, but there must be material for a bunch of vignettes in it, for instance – material that doesn't tell one single story from beginning to end, but that can tell the reader about a group of characters or events in an impressionistic way.

That being said, if you really think it's useless stuff in any shape or form, my advice is to step back from it a little, and if you confirm your impression later when you look at it again, burn it with fire. I find it immensely liberating to delete old files once I've decided never to return to them. It's as if freeing up space on my computer frees up space in my brain at the same time.

 

@Flyboy240 - Any fanon that you can strip-mine from this epic, for the Fanon Thread, before you deep six it, if you choose to go that way?

 

Thanks for all the support

There are definitely salavageable elements in it- characters, locations, plot points etc. I'll probably use a lot of them in future stories. My February fanon post was taken from it. I'll probably come back to it and edit it eventually, but for now I have other things I'm more motivated to work on.

 

It's VERY important if you're using a translation program to reverse it and make sure it still makes sense. Here's how a conversation could possibly go; the top one is the original and the bottom is translated back into English from the language I chose to use as the language of the people of this particular world.


My Emperor, I beg you to not tell them anything! They could give the information to anyone or the Sith could pull the information from their minds! We know from their story that the Sith are hoping to use Kyber Crystals for a weapon; we must not give them access to any more information!



My emperor has asked me not to say anything! They were able to communicate information to anyone, Sith was able to draw out information from the heart! Sister knows from their story that she wants to use Kyber Crystals as a weapon. It is necessary to prevent access to further information.


Wow, I wonder where 'sister' came from and how the speaker went from asking the Emperor to not reveal information to saying that they had been asked by their Emperor not to say anything.

This was Google Translate by the way.

 

@Lady_Misty - In the event that I am translating from English to another language, which is generally my modus operandi, why should I assume that the error is happening from English to Whatever, rather than only during the Whatever to English stage?

The first translate may be perfectly fine.

 

So, my muse has been unexpectedly inspired by the Rebels finale and has been working overtime on a story idea. There are a couple of problems though: A.) I've got several on going projects; the last thing I need is to start something new, and B.) It's going to be a pretty emotional story, and those can be hard for me to write.

Do I write what the moose muse gives when it gives it so I don't lose it? Shelve it until I finish some of the open projects? How many stories is too many to have going on at one time (I know that's a "your mileage may vary" kind of thing, but generally speaking)?

 

@Lady_Misty and @Sith-I-5 my advice is don't trust Google translate - or any other online translator - for anything - either too or from English, or any other language for that matter. I have lived for many years in Japan and can tell instantly when someone has used it to translate blocks of text: The result is totally incomprehensible.

I would say use it to translate individual words only, then study or get help putting these into sentences.

Even then be careful to check nuances and meanings - heart to mind is a pretty close mistake compared to some I've seen, yet completely changes the meaning of the sentence.

K

 

@Raissa Baiard I too am currently in flux with dozens of projects suggesting themselves to me, then fighting it out at the back of my subconscious to see who gets out of my head and onto a page first.

I think the trick here is to chill and remember this is fanfic. No-one is going to pay you for writing this, there are no deadlines - and don't take this the wrong way - but no-one will really care if you don't get round to writing something (because they won't know).

We do this because it's fun. So, I potter round with a project until it gets stuck, move on to the next, and so on. Yes that means I have lots of unfinished bits lying around but I can always come back to them later and it is OK to not finish things. I go with the muse when it strikes and enjoy it.

Seriously, don't worry about it. It's nice to finish and post something, of course, but the fun is really in the act of creating.

K

 

Using translators for individual words, fair enough.
But learning to stitch them together into legible sentences could take years; I'm not halting a fic in its tracks for that long for the sake of second language accuracy. Sorry, I'm just not.

I have a good collection of Spanish words, for instance, and a smattering of phrases, and have used them on Spanish citizens, either in Spain or the UK, but do I understand, despite spending years on it, sentence construction? Male, female, casual, non-casual.

Kriff no.

Apologies in advance, if you are a native speaker of a secondary language that I choose to use to spice up my prose.

 

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I definitely agree. English is not my first language, but since I doubt there are many Norwegian fanfic readers out there I have chosen to write in English, which is a bit challenging when it comes to fiction actually. There are so many nuances in the language which we don't necessarily have in Norwegian. Thus googletranslate has become a very good friend lately. Still, I don't trust it. Sometimes the most weird suggestions come up and sometimes it actually suggests English words that are identical to the Norwegian word. Cross referencing with a dictionary in "the other language" is a good tip, just to get a confirmation that the translation isn't totally crazy.

 

@Raissa Baiard - you should never ask me this question because I wanna devour anything you write, pure self-indulgence.

Seriously, I think no more than 2-3 longish projects is ideal unless they include what I like to think of as a viggie collection so there's no set chronological order or tight plotting that needs to be done. So you can put that particular kind of thing to the side and work on that thread when you're stuck on the chaptered things.

I would at least plot out, write a rough draft of the first few chapters, maybe the first 2 or 3, just to see if it's really something you wanna go with after all. And then if another project stalls, you will have something to work on until the other things stir again.

As long as the burgeoning project has enough details in an outline or a few lines of narrative/dialogue that you can come back later to and expand on. If you just leave it to: "I'll remember without writing it down"

 

Start writing it but don't post it until one of your other projects is wrapped up? I'd definitely strike while the iron is hot.