Hmm... IIRC, 'Granicus' & a 'sea planet' were mentioned in Rinzler's Making of ESB. I think Hoth might have originally been a name for Bespin, too. I'll have crack at the page using Photoshop tomorrow & see if I can decipher anything else. Interesting that he carries on grouping eps 6-8 as 'Star Wars Trilogy (es)', but doesn't group the further episodes. I suppose it implies that there would be another 'Star Wars Trilogy', but maybe he hadn't settled on exactly which episodes? Maybe Episode 12 - the 'conclusion' - as a standalone film somehow? What the new page does confirm is that the one we saw in Rinzler's Making of ESB was part of the 12-film plan (rather than a longer or shorter one). I'm inclined to believe that this is GL's first real attempt at planning just what those 12 films would be about, and most likely that attaching a figure of 12 was originally somewhat arbitrary. It's also possible that he never intended for there to be only one prequel film as a part of this plan (the 'Young Ben Kenobi' adventure), apart from his 1975 '3 episodes plus one' plan. Or, rather, that once he sat down & started filling in these 12 episodes, he realised the backstory could & should be expanded, simply for story material. Still not sure if this is pre-Father Vader or not. Something about there being a 'Clone Wars Trilogy' plus an 'Epilogue' suggests to me that it's before the Father Vader storyline was settled upon. That's just my own opinion, though. No info in the Episode 7 slot (i.e. ESB), also suggests it's before GL had even finished his first outline, but not necessarily.