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Beyond - Legends The Sickness of Love (Post LOTF - Original Characters/Daala)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by elelohesterling, May 30, 2008.

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  1. elelohesterling

    elelohesterling Jedi Youngling

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    (NOTE: For those unfamiliar with SW Canon Characters I use, I will link to wookie here in thier names

    CHAPTER 1: The Disease

    Crevil Jade stood in the antechamber to the Chief of State of the GFFA, at parade rest in his brand new Captain's Uniform. Though the newly minted Captain, Fresh out of his commission from the Galactic Alliance Defense Fleet Academy, looked calm, inside he was nervous, it was not every day that a new officer was called to the Chief of State's office by one of the most admired Admirals in the GFFA's History, Nek Bwua'tu. Upon his return to the academy this morning from his internship with the Fondor Shipyards Security Forces, the Commandant of the academy had given him his commission, informed him his graduation was postponed indefinelty, and gave him a holo-chip that the commandant said gave him direct orders, which he found when he had played it, was a personal communication from Admiral Bwuat'u to report to the Chief's office at 1800 hours. He was an hour early.

    Captain Jade began musing, he had been shocked to see how little activity Coruscant had, and further shocked to learn on his way over to the Chief's Palace that Coruscant was under martial law, and no one was allowed outside without orders or a military escort. He had even been stopped by Coruscant Security Force, who apologetically explained that they were working for Galactic Alliance Intelligence and Defense Forces, who explained that the Chief of State had been shipping fleets and placing planetary security forces across the galaxy under military control, after decimating thier ranks by 3/4 in some cases, and already instituted Martial Law on Coruscant, Corellia, Sluis Van, and multiple other planets.

    Bringing himself out of his reverie, the captain nopticed a droid signalling him, "Yes?"

    "Captain, the Chief said to send you in, the Admiral and she are ready for you."

    Captain Jade adjusted his uniform, tucked his cover under his arm, and marched briskly into the chief's office before coming to attention, "Captain Jade, Reporting as ordered, Chief." He stated, saluting and addressing the Chief as the Highest authority.

    Chief of State of the GFFA, and Ex-Imperial Admiral Natasi Daala replied, "At Ease Captain, and please have a seat."

    "Yes, Ma'am." Captain Jade responded.

    "Captain, looking at your record here, you double majored at the academy? Earning two degrees in just 5 years?"

    "Yes, Ma'am. I majored in, and earned a Bachalor's degree in Security and General Warfare Command, with a minor in Fleet Command. By Doubling Majoring I earned my Captain's rank instead of the normal Lieutenant." The captain responded, without an ounce of pride, just dry facts

    "Impressive, Admiral Bwua'tu, please brief our Captain here on the current sitation." The Chief of State responded while turning her attention to the Bothan Admiral standing nearby.

    "Yes, Ma'am," The admiral replied taking a step forward. "Captain, your assignment revolves why the entire GFFA will soon be under Martial Law, as Coruscant is already. Somehow a virus was release that targets creatures with a certain gene, that is found throughout the galaxy. This disease, labeled "the Virus" spreads rapidly by once a person is a affected, they begin to multiply this virus in thier lungs, breathing it out, contaminating the air. However the affected will show no symptons for 10-12 days. and will live for a month, spreading the disease before it overcomes them. 89% of those who contract the disease will die, the other 11% that don't die, the disease dies in them and they are no harm to themselves or others. Do you understand?"

    "Yes, Sir. But what does this have to do with my assignment, as my records no doubt show, I barely passed biology, just enough to get through the academy, and my other sciences except for Flight and Aerospace Enginerring and other like courses was fairly low."

    Admiral Bwua'tu addressed t
     
  2. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Interesting start. And poor guy has to show up at 2 a.m.?!

    PMs please?
     
  3. elelohesterling

    elelohesterling Jedi Youngling

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    The Assignment Begins

    Captain Crevil Jade returned to his apartment on the Academy Grounds by taxi, only to be met by the Academy's Assistant Director of Operations. "Captain Jade, we received word from the commandant that you would be assuming his position for some time. He has already packed his belongings and moved them to storage, and ordered us to move your belongings to the Commandant's Residence. It is ready for you. Would you like me to call a Academy taxi, or would you like me to have your personal transport from the academy called?"

    Captain Jade paused for a minute, taking the time to read the director's nameplate on the uniform, and compose himself over this slight discomfort he was feeling at being moved into the Commandant's residence. "No, Director Pace. Have the Commandants transport left at the Residence, however I will need the keycard for the residence and the transport. Walk with me."

    "Yes, Sir." Director Pace responded.

    Captain Jade took a moment to look at his watch, it was only 1845. "Director, how does Commandant.. I mean General... Ecans feel about the change in assignment?"

    "I think he feels good about it, sir. He has enjoyed the last few years, but was ready for an assignment with the Science Corp again for some time. He requested it twice already."

    "Good. Anything else I should be aware of?" Captain Jade asked.

    "No, sir, though I did take the luxury of pressing and preparing all of your uniforms and adding the Commandant's bars on the shoulders, and chestplate, except your current uniform." The Director responded.

    As they neared the Commandant's Residence, Captain Jade turned to the Director. "Director, return to your quarters, get some rest, you have to be up at 500 hours if I remember correctly."

    The director snapped to attention, saluted, and walked off to staff housing.

    As Captain Jade approached his new residence, he saw a Coruscant Security Force and Galactic Alliance Defense Force Officer standing at the door. "May I help you, Gentlemen?" Captain Jade said as he saluted the GADF Colonel.

    The GADF Colonel responded. "No, Captain, we are reporting as ordered by our respective commands, we are the ranking members of our appropriate departments assigned under your command, so no need to salute me."

    "Very well, are your troops housed?" The Captain looked at the CSF Commander and the Colonel.

    "Yes sir, almost all are stationed in Senior Housing now that it is empty due to all the seniors being on training assignment or Final exam assignment." The commander of the CSF forces said.

    "Very Good. Colonel Selchu, I want 6 of your best men, and Commander.." He began looking at the commanders namebar, "Commander Turs, 6 of yours, to escort me tomorrow at 0800."

    Both responded with affirmatives, "Is that all, Captain?" the CSF Commander asked.

    "Yes, get some rest, I need you and your teams fully rested. And I need to get mine." Captain Jade Responded. before entering his residence and mounting the stairs to the bedchamber. He set his chrono for 0045, and looked, it was 1930 already, however he soon fell asleep after fixing his dress uniform with the Commandant's bars.

    **12:45 the next Morning**

    Captain Jade awoke to the sound of an alarm, Jumping out of bed, then noticing were he was. He was no longer a student, he was the commandant of the academy. No need to jump, he reminded himself. But it's only an hour before I have to report he thought to himself, gotta move fast.

    He began to prepare, eating a small breakfast of fruit and oats and then beginning a 1 mile run around the academy grounds, before taking a shower, completing exactly at 1:30 am.

    He took his speeder to the Commandants office, arriving at exactly 0155. He began Knocking.

    "Enter." He heard from the other side, so he opened the door and stood at attention.

    "Captain Crevil Jade reporting as ordered, Commandant."

    "At ease, my boy." The commandant and General Said. "I told you, you were destined for greatness,
     
  4. elelohesterling

    elelohesterling Jedi Youngling

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    Updated some Minor text issues, changed the name of the main character for better usage, and changed other minor details for realism.

    Thanks all.
     
  5. elelohesterling

    elelohesterling Jedi Youngling

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    Here is the next chapter, I'll prolly get another short one up tommorow, sorry for the wait guys, I've been quite busy.


     
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