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Discussion in 'Archive: Winston-Salem, NC' started by STARDOG-D-JEDI, Apr 22, 2004.

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  1. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    The SITH HOLOCRON...of poetry

    In this Holocron you can feel free to express yourself. Through poetry or songs or just random deep darkside fury. This can be Star Wars in nature or anything that fuels the soul...

    This holocron shall tell the history of each sith.
    Big, Small, Short, or Tall...

    Words are forever...in the eye of the beholder.


     
  2. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ALL TH3 WRONG THING5
    (the ballad of anakin skywalker)

    I?M WAITING NOW, WONDERING HOW
    HOW I?LL EVER UNDERSTAND THE THINGS I DO
    WONDERING HOW, WAITING NOW
    WAITING TO SEE IF YOUR STILL HATING ME TO

    IT WAS EASY BEFORE, WHEN IT WAS JUST YOU
    IT WAS LIKE NOTHING BEFORE, WHEN IT WAS JUST YOU
    IT WAS EASY TO BE ME, WHEN IT WAS JUST YOU
    NOW I CAN?T EVEN THINK TO SEE

    UNDERSTANDING THINGS, ALL THE WRONG THINGS
    ALL THE THINGS I MADE MYSELF SAY
    ALL THE WRONG THINGS, UNDERSTANDING THINGS
    THINGS I LEFT BEHIND THINGS THAT WERE YOU

    BUT IT WAS SO REAL, WHEN IT WAS JUST YOU
    IT WAS YOU I FEEL, WHEN IT WAS JUST YOU
    I LAUGHED OUT LOUD, WHEN HE CUT ME DOWN
    AND FORGOT EVERYONE?S NAME I KNEW

    by: STARDOG-D-JEDI
     
  3. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Well, I wrote this poem a few years ago. While it is not about a specific Sith character, I believe it would be the beginning of someone turning to the darkside:


    Alone again diseased heart

    Why did you bother again to start?

    Go back, go back to your frozen state

    You know the only thing out there

    is angst and hate.



    You?ll be crushed again,

    shattered til no more.

    You?ll be beaten and bruised

    treated no less than a whore.



    You are not wanted

    You are not loved

    Not here on earth

    nor in heaven above.



    So go away, go away

    leave me alone.

    Go away, go away heart . . .

    you have no home.
     
  4. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That was outstanding Sith_Wench! This is a song I wrote in 2002.

    <frozen 4 - 5 hours>

    i dream alone in the day
    the redlight, sunlights the same
    and i?ve been thinking on a new situation
    how much of life that i miss
    stolen to fill a wish
    and i?ve been thinking on a new confrontation

    a night to sleep
    a face that breath?s
    a separate soul on the pillow, next to me
    you see it my way
    we are alone but not today
    today?s the day
    when nothing else matters to
    me

    through my view finder
    i trace the lace and find her
    and she?s staring back with eyes of penetration
    the digital image is mine
    the skin is frozen in time
    forgotten 5 hours without hesitation

    a night to sleep
    a face that breath?s
    a separate soul on the pillow, next to me
    you see it my way
    we are alone but not today
    today?s the day
    when nothing else matters to
    me

    by:STARDOG-D-JEDI
     
  5. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Don't Stare

    Black angel wings
    Soft as the devil's kiss
    Under a glass tree
    Me and my unforgettable prime

    And I'm driving so close, I can see the lines become one
    And with fits of rage the cars becoming one

    I reached out to touch this smooth obession
    Gleaming fresh paint streaked to suppresant
    I watched it stalk it's prey
    Seemed I watched it more and more as it passed by everyday

    I could tell the engine was hot
    The years of abuse I could smell from afar
    But it really didn't phase me that much
    Those wings like velvet soft to the touch

    NEVER COULD I GET ENOUGH
    NEVER DID I EVER TOUCH

    Such delicate street lights in my mind
    And the air seemed more like a friend
    Something that you know, one day you'll have
    I can see the paint stare back at me
    When ever I can't help myself and brood
    I want the scene to come alive
    Somewhere else, somewhere I have never been
    Something primitive and very slow

    I'M TALKING HOURS AND DAYS SLOW

    Where every prayer is answered
    And every curve is taken blindly
    For the road is long
    And I would not see an end in sight.

    by: STARDOG-D-JEDI
     
  6. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Where in the name of the Maker do you pull these incredible poems out of your soul, StarDog? I'm totally blown away!
     
  7. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Put this one thru the beta reader and got the go ahead on it . . .

    My soul belongs to me

    Your stare cannot penetrate my head
    Your hatred will not seep into my being

    I will not yield, I will not bend
    You cannot make me into your image

    For years you?ve tried to beat me down
    Drain my essence, rape my mind

    You are like an abuser
    Yet you seem so innocent

    Your methods are subtle
    As crafty as a serpent

    But I stand firm now
    I hold my ground

    I am impenetrable
    My soul belongs to me


    ~Sith_Wench
     
  8. spooky-kid

    spooky-kid Jedi Knight star 5

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    that's some cool fodder you two.... // thinks of something he can add..... hmmmmm
     
  9. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    This line was like.... Man it was just too cool

    "For years you?ve tried to beat me down
    Drain my essence, rape my mind"

    Another word would be imaculate!!

    Thanks Spooky Kid!! Pour out some of those lyrics you've been working on dude!!!!

    Sith_Wench keep it going!!!!


     
  10. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    OK, not my stuff but I just found two sites that are awesome for Shakespeare's sonnets and Keat's poetry


    Here is the one from Shakespeare that I really like:

    LVIII
    That god forbid, that made me first your slave,
    I should in thought control your times of pleasure,
    Or at your hand the account of hours to crave,
    Being your vassal, bound to stay your leisure!
    O! let me suffer, being at your beck,
    The imprison'd absence of your liberty;
    And patience, tame to sufferance, bide each check,
    Without accusing you of injury.
    Be where you list, your charter is so strong
    That you yourself may privilege your time
    To what you will; to you it doth belong
    Yourself to pardon of self-doing crime.
    I am to wait, though waiting so be hell,
    Not blame your pleasure be it ill or well.


     
  11. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Very nice indeed. I've always really dug Shakespear. Here is another poem.

    25 MINUTES

    The sad thing about 5 o'clock
    is the time alone
    If it were 4 maybe this would all be different

    Lazy hands follow me where ever I go
    I just want to pet them like a dog
    to see them on their way
    and try to become something else

    Watching and waiting but the truth it fears.
    5 o'clock is coming over the mountain to play

    I DIDN'T WANT TO SEE IT...
    DIDN'T WANT TO KNOW IT...

    Kind of cut myself off from it
    Can't quite keep myself from eating these visions

    and seeing in silence other thoughts
    and seeing in silence other parts
    and hearing in blackness. I miss you...
    and it gets hot. then it gets cold.
    and nobody notices but I can't stop it

    I BLOCK THE WALL...

    I call people and say crazy things.
    People answer with crazier things.
    Things of hope that make you happy.

    BUT IT ALL COMES DOWN TO 5 O'CLOCK

    And I'm still waiting.
    It's like life in monochrome
    Blacks and nasty yellows
    Are the colors of the spectrum I believe

    I must fix this techno-color before I die

    Accuracy is something you just can't buy
    And in the span of 25 minutes I'm lost
    Nothing to show...

    What's for sale today?

    by: STARDOG-D-JEDI
     
  12. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Accuracy is something you just can't buy
    And in the span of 25 minutes I'm lost
    Nothing to show...


    Something about this rings just so true. Accuracy is not only a talent but also a commitment to being accurate.

    Well, I think some extremely sithly verses are about to spout off of me in a minute or two. If they do, you'll see them . . .






    And here it is . . .

    Your ignorance is not my bliss
    You blindly try to incited conflict
    While claiming to be a victim
    You have no idea what a victim is
    You dwell on your pitiful little hurts
    While there are those who live
    With terror day after day
    With no end it sight

    You trifle on in the wrong place
    The wrong space
    You act coy but wait with
    Sharpened teeth to sink
    Them into a passerby
    Like a hungry dog on
    The street

    Your pattern is becoming
    Clearer and clearer
    Your welcome is
    Wearing thin
    Soon you will not be tolerated
    Your stupidity will forever
    Entrap you away into a
    Chasm of nothingness.

    ~Sith Wench

     
  13. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ok...Now that was heavy! Very heavy indeed.

    Out of sight!
     
  14. spooky-kid

    spooky-kid Jedi Knight star 5

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    bravo bravo


    I need to participate in this. I'll put up some of my lyrics by the end of the day. ;)
     
  15. spooky-kid

    spooky-kid Jedi Knight star 5

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    Stardog here's you one to lay down some guitar tracks to....

    Suppressed Race

    Convulsion and Strife
    The hate in their eyes
    Aggression / Disgression
    Decipher the Lies
    Deprived of the Truth
    The answers we sought
    Hidden beneath
    The war being fought

    Back in the line
    your falling behind
    Lash from the Whip
    Be sure not to slip
    Rights have been sold
    Now do as your told
    Useless to resist
    They've taken control

    Clouded our minds
    Crushed our sublime
    Your freedom has reached
    The end of the line

    Fear to anger / Anger to hate
    Hate leads to suffering / Determine your fate

    Break from their chains
    Break from the heard
    Forgetting the Wounds
    A lesson is learned


    What do ya think?
     
  16. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    That totally rocked Spooky

    Back in the line
    your falling behind
    Lash from the Whip
    Be sure not to slip
    Rights have been sold
    Now do as your told
    Useless to resist
    They've taken control


    Unbelievably realistic! Well, not that I don't believe it but what the words convey . . . well done!
     
  17. spooky-kid

    spooky-kid Jedi Knight star 5

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    [face_blush] Thank you



    //bows to the Sith Wench


    you want me to post another one, Wench?
     
  18. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Absolutely! I may even let you all see one of the Wench's mushy poems . . . maybe ;)

    Meh . . . here it is . . . complete mush . . .


    I gave you my heart
    When you packed your bags
    I hid my heart in between
    Your socks and slacks
    Drove you to the airport
    Dropped you off curbside
    Tears in my eyes
    Cried and cried
    You held me and kissed me
    And made me go
    You walked away
    Without letting me know
    Do you love me
    Do you care
    Should I have left
    My heart in your care
     
  19. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Very Cool stuff guys!!

    Spooky I will take you up on that offer for making some music for it. But you have to sing it!!! Actually I've been thinking of coming up with some music for you to put some vocals on. I'll work on it soon. And get you a copy to work on. I promise.

    Sith_Wench- I would not call that mushy. I call that what it simply is. Poetry. There is cause and effect for every action. And for that one, it seemed to me there was a great loss.

    Keep it rolling!!

     
  20. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    This is a song that I wrote in 2003 after reading the headlines from a news paper and throwing the different stories all together. To create a song.

    EXPEDITION 6 AND THE JOBLESS VIRUS FAULT CASE STATE

    The first sign was a light that flashed 5 seconds early.
    And suddenly all the screens gave an unexpected reading.
    Back in the real world the nightmare flashed before their eyes.
    As we strapped ourselves into the fireball for one hell of a ride.

    Unemployment is always on the rise.
    The jobless race jumped to 6 percent this time.
    "I don't think there are any surprises in the numbers." said Mr. Davis.
    Walden agreed, "The outlook was brighter." and reflected.

    Scientist altered a cold virus genetically.
    The research worked so well the mice took it aggressively.
    The scientist euthanized the mice to see inside their brains.
    Everyone got excited and agreed the times were on the change.

    Then Captain Scott said he would look into why they failed to release the information.
    He contacted three people in the neighborhood to keep up the observation.
    Two men broke into an apartment on Mayflower Drive.
    People don't really care to hear about the miscommunication of what happened inside.

    by: STARDOG-D-JEDI
     
  21. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Very creative. For some reason I thought it was going towards a headline from 9/11.

    I have to admit, I actually read the dictionary. Embarassing, how embarassing! [face_blush]
     
  22. spooky-kid

    spooky-kid Jedi Knight star 5

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    great stuff you two, will add something new later.
     
  23. spooky-kid

    spooky-kid Jedi Knight star 5

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    here's another ......

    Back to the Earths' Womb-We must be reborn

    Are we destined to destroy the earth?
    Priority should be Earth comes first!
    Not the greedy (money hungry) industries.
    Technologies (Killing nature with it's) destructive tendencies.
    Killing every (plant and) tree in sight.
    Till our existence becomes forever night.

    Degredation of the Land
    Tainted by our human Hands
    Perpetual Unity-For the sake of Humanity!
    Ecological Ideology - Despite our insignificancies

    Our enviroment we must sustain
    Peace and Love we must obtain

    Do you not care? About your childrens future.
    Consuming all there is. Not thinking of consequence.

    Do not succumb to the mainstream
    Change begins with you and me.

    A green Earth it was meant to be.
    Do you not want air and water that's clean?
    Millions of birthrights taken away
    As out Mother Nature deteriorates
    Technology spreads like a cancerous disease
    Eventually effecting you and me.

    Enviromental Domination
    ****ed situation
    Massive population- Contibuting to the equation
    Eco-Revolution Solution for Pollution
    Gya's revenge- Come forth-This desperate time
    Before it's too ****ed up


    What ya think about this one.... you can put some guitar to it also.....
     
  24. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Do you not care? About your childrens future.
    Consuming all there is. Not thinking of consequence.


    Amen to that! Keep it clean for the kids!
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  25. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    And speaking of children, those wonderful darling little creations . . . here is one inspired by my very own wenchette:



    So small so fragile
    And yet so hostile
    So innocent and pure
    And yet so dangerous

    So precious and kind
    And yet so hateful
    So beautiful and wise
    And yet so frustrating

    How can a mere child
    Make so many emotions
    Surface within you
    In a course of just a day?

    ~Sith Wench
     
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