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Discussion in 'Archive: Winston-Salem, NC' started by STARDOG-D-JEDI, Apr 22, 2004.

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  1. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Spooky, Loved this line!

    "Gya's revenge- Come forth-This desperate time
    Before it's too ****ed up"

    Very hard core.

    Sith_Wench- I believe that poem could have been about my daughter as well. LOL!!

    Here is a song I wrote in 2003. It was written right after my Grandmother passed away. I was sitting in a bar in a very nice hotel while all these people were rushing around me trying to accomplish something. And I was just drinking and not trying to accomplish a thing.

    01=WHO DO YOU PRAY 2?

    SO MANY PRETTY PEOPLE WALKING STAIRS
    FILING LINES AND I?M WASTING TIME
    HEARD YOU LOST YOUR LIFE AND WHAT YOU GONNA DO NOW
    I?M JUST BIDING MY TIME MAYBE THE NEXT IN LINE

    I?VE BEEN DEAD, TO BED, IN YOUR HEAD
    BUT I HAVEN?T SEEN A THING LIKE YOU
    TO THE MOON, IN JUNE
    CLOSE TO YOU, NOT A THING,
    WHO DO YOU PRAY 2?

    ONE DOZEN THOUGHTS KEEP INVADING MY MIND
    PSYCHOTIC PEOPLE, FAMILY TIES
    NO ONE SAID A WORD WHEN I LOST YOU IN DECEMBER
    BUT IT WAS THE SADDEST TIME, THAT I CAN REMEMBER

    I?VE BEEN DOWN, REAL DOWN, ALL THE WAY
    BUT I HAVEN?T SEEN A THING LIKE YOU
    I?VE BEEN LOST AND SAVED, THROWN AWAY
    CLOSE TO YOU, WHO DO YOU PRAY 2?

    ALWAYS TOO MUCH GOING ON
    IF I KNEW HOW TO PLAY, I WOULD PLAY ON
    SOMEONE SAID THEY WOULD SAVE ME, I SAID JUST SAVE HER
    I HATE MYSELF FOR EVERY TIME THAT I HURT HER
    SO MANY PRETTY PEOPLE, HEARD YOU LOST YOUR LIFE
    MAYBE THE NEXT IN LINE, INVADING MY MIND
    NO ONE SAID A WORD BUT THE FEELING IS HURT, WHO DO YOU PRAY 2?
    WHO IS CLOSE TO YOU?

    I?VE BEEN DEAD, TO BED, IN YOUR HEAD
    BUT I HAVEN?T SEEN A THING LIKE YOU
    TO THE MOON, IN JUNE
    CLOSE TO YOU, NOT A THING,
    WHO DO YOU PRAY 2?

    by: STARDOG-D-JEDI

    p.s. If you check my profile and hit the link to my IUMA page you can download this song...and Enjoy!:)

     
  2. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Feb 28, 2004
    AAAAAHHHHH!!!! I already downloaded this and it is very cool! :D

    Rock on!
     
  3. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Perfection

    Perfection
    What is it?
    Is there a perfect place on this earth?
    Is there a perfect thing that exists?
    Or has existed?
    The perfect sunset? (its really just dust and pollution reflecting the sunlight)
    A perfect rock? (really how can you tell it is perfect)
    A perfect rose? (it is going to die in a few days)
    A perfect person? (please, none exist although one existed
    but even he was not truly human)

    There is no perfection
    Why can?t you understand that
    Perfection is unattainable
    You will never be perfect

    This world is imperfect
    It is fallen, laid to waste
    Abandoned by its creator

    However . . . if you look closely you will find that
    Despite imperfection there is beauty in the flawed


    ~Sith Wench
     
  4. spooky-kid

    spooky-kid Jedi Knight star 5

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    Jun 17, 2003
    that was awesome. :D
     
  5. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Kicked around in a universe
    That doesn?t really care
    Slapped and punched for being dumb and
    For not being prepared

    You knew the consequences going in
    You knew all of the risks
    You knew to keep your heart to yourself
    Not to let anyone in

    It doesn?t matter what you want
    You are never going to get it
    They?ll tell you everything you want to hear
    And then you?ll be left the next minute

    Know your role
    You are their whore
    Nobody will never stay
    Know your role
    And bend over
    And let them have their way
     
  6. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Now that was truly awesome. Very...I can't say the truth of the emotion for the moderater of the south will surely lock me out. But I believe breathtaking!! Will have to do.

    Here is a little trip into my mind...

    FREAK

    If I were destined to jump off a 10 mile bridge would you join me in my fortress of solitude.
    Lazy times my friend. 10 thousand ways to say.

    "What time is it in Fiji?"

    While drinking lemonade with a mermaid. And yes she was blonde.

    Then ought of nowhere there was a fly. Trespassing in the house that I had at least 22 years left to purchase.
    MY GOD! what was he thinking!
    In due time, there was no physical way he could survive.
    Now I was on the hunt.

    But first...Wait a second, where was I?

    Ok, Try to imagine this next part as if I were screaming.
    Are you ready?...Well?
    No... Not like that...Like this!
    Yes, that's it... better... Ok here we go.

    I PUSHED A GREEN BUTTON AND SAW A COWBOY WRESTLING A BEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    And now all the laws have been broken.
    I was fleeing from the scene of the crime.

    Yesterday was just another day of lots of rain on top of the sunshine.
    Frank Sinatra was playing oh so gently in the back ground.
    Where this came from, I have no idea.

    But ghost riders were approaching from the east. And we were running out of time for what some would say is.

    That last sip from the bottle.
    The last draw from the smoke.

    And the sweet kiss good night on the false reality which is this moment.

    I just had a vision...
    of James Brown.

    by: STARDOG-D-JEDI
     
  7. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Now I feel like just pouring my words onto this little white space that will soon be black and much larger.

    SEE WHAT I MEAN!!!

    What is a good title?

    I shall name thee...

    THE HATE OF THE CLOCK'S FACE

    Well now mister board... What is your pleasure for my words?

    Do you see them as unkind? Or maybe just a little absurd.

    I like to think of them as reflections. Things that I must have known long ago and have merely begun to imagine that they are real.

    The sweet taste of amber ale that I know all too well.

    Did the bottle in front of me know of it's destiny? That it would wind up in my grasp.

    This bottle in front of me is plain to see, and looking through my past.

    Where?

    Maybe about 5 seconds ago. That's when it became my soul.

    Part of me that shall forever be...and never be too slow.

    define the meaning: The meaning is the truth. The truth that we search for through boards and silence and typing keys scorned.

    Yes that will do...That will do nicely.

    by:STARDOG-D-JEDI at this moment in time.
     
  8. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    To Quote myself from the post before last.

    "Now that was truly awesome. Very...I can't say the truth of the emotion for the moderater of the south will surely lock me out. But I believe breathtaking!! Will have to do."

    Well it just wont do! I feel more explanation is needed. That poem seem to convey all the anger towards the world around the writer. It was like climbing to the mountain top and holding your middle finger up high in the sky. Screaming at the top of your lungs. F*#K YOU!!!! and for me that would be breath taking. This fit of rage is so F*#cking cool, that it doesn't even have a title! That to me is saying that even though the writer took the time to write it. In the end the hateful world isn't worth giving a title. It shall remain nameless. And there is nothing that the control freaks can do about it.

    Yeah!!! Now that sounds better. Hope I didn't offend anyone. If so I'm sorry and perhaps you should think twice before dealing with the SITH!

    Live long and prosper... LOL!
     
  9. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    STARDOG

    Unfortunately that poem also hurt someone and for that I apologize. :(
     
  10. spooky-kid

    spooky-kid Jedi Knight star 5

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    I don't think it hurt him. He just felt like he was the reason you felt that way. With some talking I bet you two will be back to normal. ;)
     
  11. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Ya think? ;)
     
  12. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Here is a song I wrote back in the day, of good old 2002. Man...that's old!

    08-stuttering in space

    into this den of thieves
    through my chamber she will creep
    and i count the days on endless sleep
    and it won?t be long
    No it won't be very long
    stuttering in space
    that look on her face
    my little girl she looks so fine
    my little girl she?s all
    she?s all mine

    long way back
    back as far as i can remember
    into her arms i shall wither
    and it won?t be long
    No it won't be very long
    a sprinkle of dust and a poetic trip
    my lover crosses oceans
    even on sinking ships...
    even on sinking ships...
    i lost my soul and lost my mind
    my heart no one could ever find
    cause she stole it all away
    she?s saving for a rainy day

    then i saw her clear in late september
    a pair of drinks to make nimble
    my little heart stealing doll
    and with a wink that will be all

    by:STARDOG-D-JEDI
    For: my wife
     
  13. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Whoa! That was beautiful man!

    Really like this part:

    i lost my soul and lost my mind
    my heart no one could ever find
    cause she stole it all away
    she?s saving for a rainy day


    Do you think she'll let you have it back on that rainy day????
     
  14. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Feb 28, 2004
    Longing


    Come to me my lover and make love to me
    End this tireless torment and set me free
    My one desire is to be with you
    To know the feel of your touch
    The taste of your kisses

    How much longer is fate going to keep us apart
    When is the day that we will be together
    My every waking moment is a thought of you
    My longing to have you near me brings tears to my eyes

    So, come to me my lover
    Come and make love to me
    And rest in my garden.


    by Hope Grififn aka Sith Wench
     
  15. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    A Mother's Day

    Entering a state of numbness
    My mind is frozen in time
    I cannot believe the betrayal
    I cannot fathom evil of this kind

    A dagger plunged deep into my heart
    And twisted cruel round
    Making sure to finally kill me
    My blood pours into the ground

    How young and seemingly innocent
    How precious and naïve
    My killer fools them all
    As my soul she rips from me
     
  16. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Once again Sith Wench...Breathless...

    The amount of passion for lack of another word is amazing. You are by far one of the best poets I have ever encountered. Your words are like candy to my eyes. I take the good with the bad and leave the rest on the battle field. It's the emotion that drives it on!!!! Never stop.

    Here is another song I wrote back in 1996. What is funny about it is two years later the town I was writing about was hit by a tornado. I swear! Well it wasn't funny at all. But it made me say MMMMMM!

    VACUUM CL3AN3R=8

    Well Madison has left today
    One mile long, blown away
    A shinning star decsending hell
    The contracts are all up for sale

    And I?ll lift it up
    So you can see
    My words removed
    It?s vacuum clean

    Well I?m sitting back watching your skill
    Deadly super stainless steel
    A shinning star decsending hell
    Another invitation as well

    And I?ll lift it up
    So you can see
    My words removed
    It?s vacuum clean

    by: your friendly neighborhood STARDOG-D-JEDI!

    freaky huh!
     
  17. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Your words are like candy to my eyes.

    So what you are saying, STARDOG, is that I'm eyecandy??? 8-}

    Freaky that you wrote that and then the place was hit by a tornado.
     
  18. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Tell me about it!

    But I was refering to your WORDS as candy. Meaning a delite to read. I was not refering to you as a person or a sith.

    Sorry about that...

     
  19. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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  20. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Here is a song from my NUMB3R5 CD that I released in 2003.

    10=5OM3

    STATESIDE CLOTHES LINE EVERYTHING WAS FEELING FINE
    UNTIL THE EMACULATE COME ON
    KNOCKED ME BACK LIKE THE HIROSHIMA BOMB
    I DROPPED BACK HELD OUT COULDN?T STAND THE FEELING
    MY HANDS WERE DIRTY, I HAD TAKEN THE BEATING
    I WAS RAISED WITH THE THOUGHT THAT I COULD DO WHAT I WISH
    AND I WISH TO MYSELF SOME THAT SOME CALL BLISS, BUT I COULDN?T SEEM TO GET MYSELF OFF THE FLOOR. IT LOOKED SO DIFFERENT, NOT LIKE IT DID BEFORE

    SOME SAY WHISPERS, SOME SAY REWARDS,SOME SAY WHAT YOU WANT,
    SOME SEEM BORED,SOME LOAF A JOURNEY, SOME ESCAPE A PLAN
    SOME ARE HOSTILE AND WISE, SOME I JUST CAN?T STAND

    I WAS RECYCLING MYSELF AND TRYING TO CATCH MY
    BREATH. UNTIL THE SUMMER LEFT RISE
    AND THE MESSAGE WAS ON EVERY PAGE AND IT CAUGHT MY EYE
    I WAS BACK UP AGAINST THE WALL, KNOCKED OUT COLD
    SCARED TO DEATH, I HELD COMPOSURE, I WAS BOLD
    MY NERVOUS SIDE LITE A CANDLE FOR A PRAYER
    AND IT WAS BLOWN OUT, THE SMOKE TO THE AIR
    I SHOULD HAVE SEEN THESE THINGS COMING, I SHOULD HAVE BUILT UP THE WALL, BUT SOME SIMPLE THINGS ARE JUST DESTINED TO FALL

    SOME SAY EVENTS, SOME LOVE TO CONSPIRE, SOME PRIMAL IMAGES
    SOME WITH BARBED WIRE, SOME LIKE A STORY, SOME WILL CUT OFF YOUR HAND
    SOME FITS SOME, SOME I JUST CAN?T STAND

    by:STARDOG-D-JEDI
     
  21. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    tHe SpUr

    lonely, in my wooden room
    soundly, thinking of you
    woman, i walk the floor
    darling, i?ll walk some more

    cause i feel
    the needle pressing , down hard
    the mind
    it starts to wonder
    to where all things are

    i seem, to notice more and slightly
    the colors that enlight me
    are in my backyard

    reality , comes cloudy on cartoon eyes
    benevolently, she cries
    hopelessly, i can?t do a thing for her
    sanity, rains down the spur

    i find
    the simple life of what i want
    is to simply come into sight
    my mind
    it?s coming closer, it?s getting clearer
    to a bright sunny day

    by:STARDOG-D-JEDI
     
  22. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    08=THI5

    I JUST REWIND THE THOUGHTS ARE MINE
    NO NEED TO BLOCK THEM OUT
    IT ONLY OPENS ANOTHER DOOR
    DEATH, LOVE AND PAIN ARE WORTH LIVING FOR

    NOBODY TO DIS THIS
    CAN?T SEEM TO CONTROL THIS
    JUST WANT TO ABSORB THIS
    CAN?T POSSIABLE IGNORE THIS
    FOUND LIFE IN THIS
    SOME REMORSE FLOWS IN THIS
    I ONLY LIVE FOR THIS
    TO RECALL PICTURES OF THIS

    PICTURE OF DOPE AND ALL THE HELL IT PAYS
    WHISPERING, CONSUMING MY LIFE
    JUST ONE MORE THRILL
    AND IT WILL BE ALRIGHT

    AH YEAH WE CAN DO THIS
    JUST ONE MORE STEP IN THIS
    MY ONLY WISH IS THIS
    CAUSE ONLY YOU MAKE THIS
    THE SPIRIT IT LIVES THROUGH THIS
    IT LIVES AND BREATHES THROUGH THIS
    LIKE A PARASITE HOOKED ON THIS
    OPEN UP YOUR EYES TO THIS

    by: STARDOG-D-JEDI
     
  23. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Breeze

    Sitting outside being caressed by the breeze
    Wishing instead that it
    was you caressing me.

    The seashell wind chimes sing softly
    As the breeze moves them.
    A sound more genuine as the tiny
    Shells collide.

    Looking toward the mountains
    The sunset paints them purple,
    Pink, and blue.

    I drink my wine, red and sweet.
    It kisses my lips and reminds
    Me that I have not tasted yours.

    The telephone rings and
    I answer it knowing
    It is you. My day is complete.


    By Sith Wench
     
  24. STARDOG-D-JEDI

    STARDOG-D-JEDI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Now that was sweet. Nice Wench...

    YOU'VE GOT TO HIDE YOU LOVE AWAY

    Here I stand head in hand
    turn my face to the wall
    If she's gone I can't go on
    Feeling two foot small

    Every where people stare
    each and every day
    I can see them laugh at me
    and I hear them say

    Hey! You've got to hide your love away
    Hey! You've got to hide your love away

    How can I even try
    I can never win
    Hearing them seeing them
    in the state I'm in...

    How could she say to me
    Love will find a way
    gather round all you clowns
    Let me hear you say...

    Hey! You've got to hide your love away
    Hey! You've got to hide your love away

    by:JOHN LENNON
    not the: stardog / wished it was

    But I thought it was nice...
     
  25. Sith_Wench

    Sith_Wench Jedi Knight star 5

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    Cool John Lennon stuff Stardog!

    nice Wench]/i]

    That's an oxymoron! 8-}
     
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