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Beyond - Legends The Sith Insurrection (Post-NJO: Skywalkers, Solos, Surprises) *UPDATED* 6/5 - Chapter 68

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by JDH3, Jun 27, 2004.

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  1. Pelranius

    Pelranius Jedi Master star 5

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    Well, that's explained where Vader's money went, at least. How very interesting. Lord Martel.... it sounds nice, at least.
     
  2. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    YodaKenobi: Yeah, a scary galaxy

    You think so too, huh. [face_worried]

    ?Resistance?? Anakin inquired, praying that the slaughter had not been complete.
    ?Was futile,? Goran replied simply.
    Anakin?s face twitched in irritation, and his eyes narrowed.


    [face_worried]

    You and me both, my friend. You and me both.

    I hope that's not Alema Rar you're making a Dug Sex slave...

    Would I do something like that? [face_innocent] [face_whistling]


    I wonder who this mystery man Trill and Seera were speaking of

    I?m not! [face_laugh] You?ll find out soon enough, I promise.

    Jar Jar?

    :eek: [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Stepping out onto the balcony, the dark Jedi Azrakel acknowledged the admiral with a curt nod.

    :eek:

    You?re not afraid of the power of the darkside, are you? :confused: [face_devil]

    Tarq? This is getting convoluted

    Hopefully not too much so! It will make sense eventually.

    Looks like there's some dissension in Lumyia's empire

    You know Imperials, always looking to knock each other off.

    Why aren't Azrakel or Lord Martel listed in the Dramatis? I want to know more about these guys!

    Lord Martel is Anakin?s Sith name. I?m actually going to put it in the D.P now. [face_blush] It was Thrawn?s suggestion, so until recently, I couldn?t put it in the D.P because I hadn?t decided on it yet lol! As for our new dark Jedi...

    Great post, I really like all the characters. The plot seems very rich, and the scope keeps growing. Nicely done. I look forward to more

    Thanks! [face_blush] :D There is one more bit of setup, and then the plot really get?s rolling, woohoo!!


    Pelranius: Well, that's explained where Vader's money went, at least. How very interesting. Lord Martel.... it sounds nice, at least.

    Yep, you know that much money didn?t just evaporate into thin air; it had to be somewhere! Thanks! I was hoping it would raise an eyebrow or two. True, Lord Martel does have a nice ring to it, that?s something. Just too bad it has to be a Sith?s name, let alone Anakin?s! :_|


    JD.
     
  3. YodaKenobi

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    Lord Martel is Anakin?s Sith name. I?m actually going to put it in the D.P now. It was Thrawn?s suggestion, so until recently, I couldn?t put it in the D.P because I hadn?t decided on it yet lol! As for our new dark Jedi...

    ahh, that's what I thought at first, but something made me think Goran was talking to another person [face_blush] anyway, makes sense now.
     
  4. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    YodaKenobi: ahh, that's what I thought at first, but something made me think Goran was talking to another person anyway, makes sense now.

    Glad things are cleared up for you now. :D


    JD.
     
  5. Thrawn McEwok

    Thrawn McEwok Co-Author: Essential Guide to Warfare star 6 VIP

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    JD: First off, my thanks to Thrawn McEwok for his contribution to this story.

    Yub yub!

    In no particular order...

    Interesting Jacen-POV stuff. And good point about quite how emphatically Anakin died in SbS... or is that just you messing with our heads? [face_mischief]

    Excellent characterization all around - that is Alema Rar, isn't it? [face_mischief]

    Poor Leia!

    Azrakel?

    Lord Martel? :D Heh...

    And Anakin Solo isn't all he seems? Hmm... something involving Tarc? And Tahiri?

    You were making a joke about those two the other day, in another thread... :p

    - The Imperial Ewok
     
  6. NYCitygurl

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    Wonderful post!!! Can't wait to see what's going to happen to Tarc, and the Tahiri thing was creepy.

    NYC
     
  7. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thrawn McEwok: Yub yub!

    *Salutes Grand Admiral Ewok* :p

    Interesting Jacen-POV stuff. And good point about quite how emphatically Anakin died in SbS... or is that just you messing with our heads?

    I have been known to mess with people's heads quite a bit, but, no, I'm not doing so here. I always found that line about Jacen not being able to perceive Anakin fascinating.

    Excellent characterization all around - that is Alema Rar, isn't it?

    Why thank you. :) Hmm, you'll have to wait a few chapters to be sure, but it does sound reasonable, FACPOV.

    Poor Leia!

    Yeah, I feel bad for her, too! Although, what's going to happen in her future is not as obvious as it might seem. [face_devil]

    Azrakel?

    I'll sum him up with a simple disclaimer, and leave you to puzzle over the rest. He does not appear in the D.P for a reason, and I'll leave it at that.

    Lord Martel? Heh...

    Thanks again, Thrawn! :D

    And Anakin Solo isn't all he seems? Hmm... something involving Tarc? And Tahiri?\

    If I was going to have Anakin in this story, I was going to try and hold to canon, FACPOV. As for Tarc... His role is limited, but important, and I really can't say more.

    You were making a joke about those two the other day, in another thread...

    Half joking, my friend. I was only half joking...


    NYCitygurl: Wonderful post!!! Can't wait to see what's going to happen to Tarc, and the Tahiri thing was creepy.

    Thanks! :D As I said above, Tarc's role is important, but not very long. Yes, I agree. Tahiri's mention does make one's stomach tighten rather uncomfortably, doesn't it.


    JD.
     
  8. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Author Note: Since people seem curious about Azrakel, I'll provide an official image for all of you to enjoy. :D Click the link below to see TSI's latest villain.

    Azrakel


    JD.
     
  9. Tahi

    Tahi Jedi Knight star 5

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    I love the little echoes of the movies you keep bringing in. :) Here it was in that line of Anakin's about the Wookiee "yet proving useful". :)

    Behind her, Leia could hear Han curse as the Falcon?s newly rebuilt engines sputtered before going off-line. She couldn?t hide her smile; some things would never change, and she was glad of that. She greeted Moff Balbri?s attendant diplomatically, her thoughts suddenly becoming scattered. The Force was crying out to her, but what was it saying?
    That was a terrific paragraph: humour, typical SW scene and characters behaving the way we love and then . . .wham! Drama and tension. Good work. :)

    Methinks that Shrack might be in for a soprano-making experience soon. LOL

    Awww. Poor Ru. What a sweetie he is.

    Lumiya sounds like a good strategist conserving her forces like that.

    The female Jedi, the one shaped by the Vong during the war. It is whispered that she is the key to Lord Martel?s ultimate rebirth. He is said to be but a shadow without her strength to anchor him here
    Aha! So this is their evil plan is it!

    Great chapter, JD. :)
     
  10. YodaKenobi

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    Author Note: Since people seem curious about Azrakel, I'll provide an official image for all of you to enjoy. Click the link below to see TSI's latest villain.
    Azrakel


    That's cool. I've got to start reading those sourcebooks [face_thinking]
     
  11. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Tahi: I love the little echoes of the movies you keep bringing in. Here it was in that line of Anakin's about the Wookiee "yet proving useful".

    Something told me that you would be the one who would really appreciate that line. ;) :D

    That was a terrific paragraph: humour, typical SW scene and characters behaving the way we love and then . . .wham! Drama and tension. Good work.

    Wow, thanks for that. :D I was actually worried about how that paragraph came out.

    Methinks that Shrack might be in for a soprano-making experience soon. LOL

    [face_laugh] Sounds reasonable to me, but Doral may have something to say about things...

    Awww. Poor Ru. What a sweetie he is.

    Yep, that's Ru for you. However, he better brush up on his scoundrel tendencies soon, considering what's to come. [face_devil]

    Lumiya sounds like a good strategist conserving her forces like that.

    Indeed she is.

    Aha! So this is their evil plan is it!

    Part of it, yes. As for the rest...

    Great chapter, JD.

    Thanks! As you know, I aim to please, Tahi. :)


    YodaKenobi: That's cool. I've got to start reading those sourcebooks

    I wouldn't worry, I don't even own that sourcebook! [face_blush] I found the image first, then I did some research and realized that I could use him as my newest villain. :p Anyhow, I'm glad you liked it.


    JD.
     
  12. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Teaser for Chapter 7:

    Sakiyan tracker, Ral Komad entered the Corusca Gem casino cautiously. Sakiyan?s were known throughout the galaxy for their keen senses, and Ral was no exception. A thin layer of sweat covered his deep, red skin, and his pointed ears twitched slightly. He hated the fact that he had been forced to take this job, but he owed the man a favor. Damn his sense of honor and all the trouble it had brought him, he cursed.


    BTW: After viewing a new official image earlier tonight, I've developed a heck on an idea for later in this story. [face_devil] And here you folks were worried about Azrakel... [face_laugh] [face_devil]


    JD.
     
  13. Pelranius

    Pelranius Jedi Master star 5

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    Looks a bit Vongish.
     
  14. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    cool new species of pointy earred red people [face_thinking] Look forward to the post :D
     
  15. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Pelranius: Looks a bit Vongish.

    I did notice that. Strange, isn?t it. [face_thinking]


    YodaKenobi: cool new species of pointy earred red people Look forward to the post

    Yep, although they can be several other colors, as well. However, considering his eventual role, red seemed like the right choice. At some point, I?ll provide a link so people can get a better idea of what a Sakiyan looks like. As to the next post... :D


    Author Note: Okay, it has been a while since I?ve written any serious action scenes, so my apologies if this first one is a bit rough. Feel free to make constructive criticism concerning the scene, as I?ll be doing MANY more action oriented posts later on. Anyhow, I?m still adjusting to writing action scenes again, (too many vignettes of late), so please be patient as I get back into the swing of things. Also, I do know the fate of a certain planet, but it will be explained in a later chapter. With my personal disclaimers out of the way, I?ll be quiet and let you read now.


    Chapter 7
    Intersecting paths


    What is Lady Lumiya waiting for? Why am I being told not to act against the Princess yet? Vaj Balbri wondered, his frustration growing with each passing minute. Leia Solo was under his very roof, yet he had been sternly ordered not to act. It made no sense to him. This had been his Master?s desire, her plan, so why the sudden delays? And there was another issue that troubled him, as well. He only had a limited window of opportunity in which to arrange her death at the hands of her son. He had to be off the planet as quickly as possible, that was a must.

    Vaj had reminded Lumiya of just that fact when they had spoken last, but she had been unconcerned. Her assurances of his continued safety, however, rang hollow in the Force. That had frightened him more than he cared to think about now. Had he somehow made himself into a liability? Or had he simply overestimated his own inherent value from the start? Either way, the answer was sure to be distressing.

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    She could feel the coarse sand against her bare feet, its grains rubbing between her toes as she walked. The late afternoon suns were blazing in the sky above, and she couldn?t help but smile at the warmth they provided. It had been so long since she had been back on Tatooine, but it felt right. Even though many of the memories from this place were painful, as they reminded her of Anakin, it was still good to be back to a place that was still, in a sense, her home.

    Tahiri hadn?t planned to stop off on Tatooine, but the Force just seemed to guide her here. Coming to Tatooine had taken her out of her way, yet it was where she needed to be. Why did she need to be here though? The question haunted her as she made her way through Mos Eisley. Three hours after first arriving, she reached the entrance of a seedy cantina that?s name had long since worn off the sign above the door. Under normal conditions, Tahiri would simply walk on by, but this time...

    Her bare feet had just stepped across the threshold, when she sensed something amiss. From out of the crowd, a Rodian in a dirty, yellow jumpsuit stumbled towards her. The dazed Rodian fell into Tahiri?s arms, his body limp and breath coming in short gasps. She quickly lay him down, her senses stretching out for any sign of immediate danger. Her eyes locked with his, but the Rodian?s eyes closed only a moment later. He was dying, and there was nothing that could stop it now.

    ?Beeda and Lum...,? he gasped. The unfinished words were forced out an instant before he succumbed to his injuries.

    Tahiri was still processing the, now dead, Rodian?s words when she felt danger approaching. She raised her emerald gaze from the dead Rodian to survey the cantina. Beings of various species were gazing at her quizzically as she knelt on the floor, but none made a move towards her. Still, there was something very wrong.

    Standing up slowly, she intended to inquire ab
     
  16. YodaKenobi

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    Yep, although they can be several other colors, as well. However, considering his eventual role, red seemed like the right choice. At some point, I?ll provide a link so people can get a better idea of what a Sakiyan looks like. As to the next post...

    aren't they your original creation?

    on to the story...

    Yay, Tahiri! :D

    . Two Rodian males and a feline, female Cathar managed to avoid a similar fate.

    cool, first time I've seen a Cathar in a fic :) NIce action scene as well. Tahiri is kicking butt!

    I think I know who Doral's ex-wife is [face_mischief] 8-} Ru is in for a surprise.

    ?I was wondering when you were gonna get around to asking me that. Her name is Melanah, Melanah Drea.?

    I knew it! :D

    And Zekk... so Zekk and Jacen are going to team up in the greatest combination of wussy-Jedi the galaxy has ever seen :p jkjk! Anyway, great post, I really enjoyed it. I love all the different factions at work, very enjoyable. :)
     
  17. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    YodaKenobi: aren't they your original creation?

    Ral is an OC, but the Sakiyans actually exist in the GFFA. I believe one was in the cantina in ANH, but I think that one was silver-gray.

    Yay, Tahiri!

    :D

    cool, first time I've seen a Cathar in a fic NIce action scene as well. Tahiri is kicking butt!

    Yep, I like the Cathars, too, and you?ll be seeing more of them. Whew! I?m glad the action wasn?t terrible. And, yes, Tahiri did live up to her warrior nature, didn?t she. :D

    I think I know who Doral's ex-wife is Ru is in for a surprise.

    Yeah, and not the ?happy birthday!? kind either. [face_worried]

    I knew it!

    Two points! [face_laugh]

    And Zekk... so Zekk and Jacen are going to team up in the greatest combination of wussy-Jedi the galaxy has ever seen jkjk! Anyway, great post, I really enjoyed it. I love all the different factions at work, very enjoyable.

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] Actually, I pretty much agree with you there. However, I?m gonna infuse them with a little backbone so they won?t be sooo bad. Plus Ru will be there too, and a certain Twi?lek sex slave...

    I?m glad you liked the post; no kidding, right. Yes, there are a lot of factions, but they all have one thing in common... And that is NOT a good thing. [face_devil]
     
  18. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ral is an OC, but the Sakiyans actually exist in the GFFA. I believe one was in the cantina in ANH, but I think that one was silver-gray.

    ahhh [face_blush]

    Yep, I like the Cathars, too, and you?ll be seeing more of them. Whew! I?m glad the action wasn?t terrible. And, yes, Tahiri did live up to her warrior nature, didn?t she.

    Juhani was awesome in KOTOR :-B

    I think I know who Doral's ex-wife is Ru is in for a surprise.

    Actually, I pretty much agree with you there. However, I?m gonna infuse them with a little backbone so they won?t be sooo bad. Plus Ru will be there too, and a certain Twi?lek sex slave...

    I can't believe you're making Alema Rar a sex slave :mad:

    I?m glad you liked the post; no kidding, right. Yes, there are a lot of factions, but they all have one thing in common... And that is NOT a good thing.

    hmmm [face_thinking] they're all under the control of the dark lord, Jacen Solo? :confused:
     
  20. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    YodaKenobi: ahhh [face_blush]

    Hey, it happens to all of us at some point. :)

    Juhani was awesome in KOTOR

    Yep, I'd agree with that. And I found a cool pic of a male Cathar that gave me a good idea for later, too. ;)

    I can't believe you're making Alema Rar a sex slave

    Easy, my friend. Just relax, and remember to breathe. All I can say is check the DP, and wait and see...

    hmmm they're all under the control of the dark lord, Jacen Solo?

    Ack! You're starting to sound like Thrawn! LOL!! Fascinating as a certain Lit board thread makes it, I'd have to say no. Actually, I'd rather have Jacen running things... I mean, how hard would it be to beat Jacen "I don't wanna use the Force" Solo? Unless you're talking about a certain Ewok fic, of course? :D [face_laugh]


    JD.
     
  21. Thrawn McEwok

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    JD: Yeah, I'm here. Full reply will follow!

    - The Imperial Ewok
     
  22. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thrawn McEwok: JD: Yeah, I'm here. Full reply will follow!

    Woohoo!! Glad to hear it, Thrawn. I look forward to the full reply.


    Author Note: Here are a couple links I was able to hunt down today. Just some tidbits to help you visualize two of the key players in this story. Enjoy. :)

    Sakiyan

    Lumiya with Stormtroopers


    JD.
     
  23. JDH3

    JDH3 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Author Note: Two new images are posted above, and the teaser for chapter eight is here. :D


    Teaser for Chapter 8:

    From her throne, Lumiya looked down at the grotesque form of Beeda the Hutt. If he wasn?t such a valuable ally, she would happily gut the slug without preamble. He was, however, a very necessary part of her plans for conquest. And so it was for that singular reason that Beeda the Hutt was allowed to breathe the same air she was.


    JD.
     
  24. NYCitygurl

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    ?Beeda and Lum...,? he gasped. The unfinished words were forced out an instant before he succumbed to his injuries.

    :eek:

    And Zekk... so Zekk and Jacen are going to team up in the greatest combination of wussy-Jedi the galaxy has ever seen

    [face_laugh]

    Actually, I pretty much agree with you there. However, I?m gonna infuse them with a little backbone so they won?t be sooo bad.

    Good!! ;)

    Great post!!

    NYC
     
  25. YodaKenobi

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    ahhh, yeah, I recognize the Sekiyan now! That's Djas Puhr :p

    The teaser: How can Lumiya hate the Hutts? They're the best! So attractive and righteous :D
     
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