Before - Legends The story of Durge

Title The story of Durge
Author Me
Characters Durge and a whole mess of other people
Genre A bit of everything

This is the story of Durge up to the Clone Wars, enjoy


Part 1 The Begining

A monster, a physical speciman, a furoius fighter. These were some of the words to describe Durge. The most physicaly powerful and aggresive Gen'Dai on his planet and he was only sixteenHe exceled at sports and hunting. He was especially good at jousting,an ancient sport created by the early Gen'Dai. He was a natural killer, he hunted and killed wild Animals at will. It was even said that at the age of 12 he killed an Ackley with his barte hands.

With all of his physical attributes he longed for one thing, not to sit around and be likethe people on his planet. He knew that if he were to live for three thousand yearsyearshe would not want to be on this planet. He wanted to do something, something that would be special and would beifit from his physical strength and aggresivness.

He sat in his hut and thought, he thought about what was next for him. He just finished his studies weeks ago, and was now free to do what he wanted. He knew his place was not on this planet, not with these native, kind, peaceful, loving Gen'Dai. He was plagued by anger, by hatred. At the age of 7 he was left to die by his parents. At his birth, he was born with a disease O.N.D. it stood for overactive nerve disease. Since a Gen'Dai was made out of oinly nerves and no organs. It took every ounce of Durges starengtyh to stay alive. For most of his first seven years he was in and out of hibernation, tryinmg to heal himself. His parents did not think og him to live. So they left, left him for dead. Finally a miracle Durge had fully recovered. Durge set out by himself to find someone. Someone to take care of him. He found proffesor Nerjo a proffesor at the acadamy he just graduated from. After he took him in he noticed Durge was diffrent. he was mean. powerful and very intimadating. Durge knew he could know leave this life, the life of being diffrenr=t, the life of being an outkast.

Well it would have to wait till morning, he was tired after a day of hunting and thinking, thinking of what was next.

The sun arose over the mountain and hit Durge in the face with a ray of light. Durge awoke and went outside. " What the". Two ships flew towards the ground onw was a Mon Calemari interceptor, followed by Mandelorian assult ship. Both crashed into the ground about two hundred yards a way. Durge ran into the forestb to see what was going on. He heard blaster fire and ran as fast as he could towards it.

END of Chapter 1

Thought, critasism is welcomed.

 

Very nice. The Gen'Dai are so brilliant, aren't they? My current story involves a young half-Gen'Dai Padawan named Jin.

This is very nicely written. More please!

-DS, the Gen'Dai lover.

 

Thank you darksaber ther will be an update soon.




Emporer Gerner Dark Lord of the Sith

 

I like it, but could you please use grammar check some of the words.