Beyond - Legends The Terrible Reign of Lord Skywalker/Queen Leia. H/L/V.....AU......COMPLETED ON MAY 28, 2003

"Threepio is the gift that keeps on giving."


LOL! Good one, GreatOne.


J_Girl

 

This is quite an interesting plotline you have here. The style of short scenes is definitely a teaser to read more, which I intend to do.

I'm just a little surprised that Vader was willing to let the New Republic comeinto being at all, if he had control of the Empire. I'm also surprised that Leia would treat Han that badly, especially when in private. She sure fell fast - but that's what abuse does to you.

 

Lol, and I thought you were gonna make Han dress up in a golden bra and a skirt

 

Poor Han.....

And I know Mara's slightly psychotic!!! That's why I like her!!

GO GIRL!!!

KILL ISOLDER!!!!!

I have a feelin Han will be dead by the end of this fic.

*sigh*

Oh well.

You're the author.

I'm just a reader!!

More? ?

 

Oh dear. Mara beat Vader. Did he fall asleep or something?

 

Ooooooooooo.......

Of COURSE I like MAra.

GO MARA!!!!!!!!!!!

hehe.....



I REALLY like this fic..... I think it's a happy one!!!!

 

Aww, Leias being nice to Han.

 

I put in a little paragraph to explain what happened after Palpatine's death, just for you.

I saw and agree. Thanx!

I like the plot twist you added with Mara. Very true to the Dark Side!

It seems that Leia isn't as Dark as it seemed. Maybe because Luke still sort of believed that he was a real Jedi (based on what he said to Leia). Unfortunately, it looks like he's gone over completely now. But there's still hope with Leia - she's even starting to treat Han like a human. Will she be able to survive Jade? I suspect not, unless Han does her in with a blaster

 

MMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*clutches teddy and blanket*

*is in mommy's lap*

*eyes wide, is shaking*

 

This was ok. Although, I would hardly compare seeing Leia in a dancer's outfit for a total of five minutes, to full on BDSM scenes. Also, good job on completely contradicting the entire 6th episode of the Star Wars saga. I guess Vader's redemption wasn't a part of it after all. One last thing. Mara Jade taking out Darth Vader? Please. That was weak. Really weak. If the coolest villain of all time is going to be offed by a confused psychotic girl, at least a couple of details as to how it would even be possible, let alone plausible would be appropriate, especially if you are going to show her being so careless later on with Leia. The "chosen one" deserves a good duel scene if he's going to be killed during it, especially if he's going to be offed by such a third-rate character. Luke turning to the darkside was pretty cool though. Overall it was a good story, but only an ok Star Wars story.

Not that anybody asked me.

 

Great One, good story, but you have left it really unresolved. For all we know Luke kills Leia, finds Han, kills him too and rules over the galaxy forever. You should write a sequel at least.

 

Wow.

*is in shock*

Wow.

I liked that ending.



You killed all the bad guys and made the good guy's likable.



I prefer Dark Leia's over Polititian Leia's but this one was good.

Really good.

If you do decide to write more fanfic let me know.

I'd be intrested in anything you put out.

God Bless!

 

Pretty good story there GreatOne. For being your first one it was exceptional. Your fight scenes were kind of weak, but I don't think they were as bad as Sith_Merchant thought. I think that this story could really go somewhere if you ever wanted to do some revising on it.

It would be awesome to see a sequal to this. If you do end up doing one though, I would get a beta reader if I were you. That way you could have someone to help with fight scenes. Or you could even have someone co-write it with you, you doing the main posts and the other doing the fight scenes and other stuff you find boring. Whatever you decide to do though, be sure to let me know if/when you get a sequal up.

I'll beg one more time, please please please do a sequal! I really want to know what happens. What will Luke think when he gets back to Hapes? Will Leia succed in turning him back to the light side? Will Han be safe with the kids? What happens to the kids? Where do they live? Do they all get along or are there some emotional troubles? Do the twins become Jedi? What happens to Isabella? You know, I could go on and on with my questions. You said you needed ideas, well there's some. Just answer the questions!

I would love to see a sequal and if you need any help, just ask!

JB