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Saga ~The Thoughts of an OC Jedi~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by LittleMissNightsaber, May 2, 2009.

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  1. LittleMissNightsaber

    LittleMissNightsaber Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Title: The Thoughts of an OC Jedi
    Author: LittleMissNightsaber
    Genre: Vignette
    Summary: Before her death, a young Jedi Knight thinks.


    Long ago I was respected. Now I am spat upon by everyone. My friends gone. My enemies rule. I sit in this cell awaiting my death at the hands of a cutthroat. I cry when I feel the pain of my trusted allies, and I smile faintly when I feel they are at peace. Soon this galaxy will be liberated. Soon this Empire shall fall. Soon I will be at peace.

    When I dream, I see images of a widow dying, babies crying. An old Jedi sitting in sand, an older one living in a swamp land. Then I see the babies growing up and destroying the Empire. And then I sense great joy coming from... a monster, and I hear the screams of a tyrant, calling upon the force.

    When this comes true, I will be at peace, knowing that the galaxy is free.

    I know it's short, but hey, I just signed up
     
  2. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Backpacking One Pack a Day Mod of New Films star 6 Staff Member Manager

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    Hey, I know it's short, too :D but it's very well done. Sometimes (points to self) long and overblown dilutes the story; sometimes short and succinct, like many of the drabbles, tell volumes in a few well-chosen words.
     
  3. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Very nicely done! I like the vision of Obi-Wan and Yoda. Good job!
     
  4. LittleMissNightsaber

    LittleMissNightsaber Jedi Youngling star 3

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  5. mujapple-juicey

    mujapple-juicey Jedi Master star 4

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    Absolute masterpiece... perfect emotional expressions!
     
  6. LittleMissNightsaber

    LittleMissNightsaber Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I've got another fic called I scream You scream. BTW thanks.
     
  7. GuNgAnFaN3090

    GuNgAnFaN3090 Jedi Knight star 5

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    Short and sweet. Very nice. I liked the last line. Keep up the great work!

    =D= =D=
     
  8. LittleMissNightsaber

    LittleMissNightsaber Jedi Youngling star 3

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  9. LittleMissNightsaber

    LittleMissNightsaber Jedi Youngling star 3

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    For anyone who reads this in the future: Thank you:D

     
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