Saga The Threat of Waking--Sequel to 'If I Were..." 7.13

Kynstar Awww...

Shaindl Yes, this scene was in my head for awhile before I actually wrote it. It was very vital in linking his perspective to Qui-Gon's. So glad you enjoyed.

 

Wow! What a great couple of posts. I somehow missed the previous one! You are painting a wonderful picture of how things had progressed and gotten out of hand in the the first story! Beautifully done!

 

jm2 Thank you!

 

I'm starting to understand why Qui-Gon acted the way he did in the other story

 

This is beautiful L_E! Everything flows so beautifully, I love the way your writing feels like poetry. (Even when you're torturing poor Obi-Wan!)

Great job, I was so relieved when he was rescued from that awful place and back in Qui-Gon's arms.

?If this weren?t real, I wouldn?t be feeling the rapture of seeing you again. And if this weren?t real, I wouldn?t be sitting at your side all these silent hours while you sleep, taking your hand when you look troubled, pulling up your blankets when you kick them down.? He swallows and takes a breath, ?And if all this wasn?t real, I wouldn?t be one step away from taking you in my arms and never letting you go?I wouldn?t be dead afraid that I might, somehow, lose you still.?

This is beautiful! Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan reunited at last

 

I really like the way this is coming together LE. I can start to see how Qui-Gon got the way he was after having to witness this kind of reaction from Obi-Wan after his return. And I like how he silences Obi-Wan which starts them on the road from your original story. Wonderful as always.

 

Yikes! You almost have me feeling sorry for old Jinn!

 

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....

that was sooooo sweet! poor obi- all scared that he's back in his prison.

 

This story is to good. It needs an up

 

LE come back and finish this. I know i dont need this to know what happens, but i what to know what obi went throught, with Qui being over protective.

Please come back.

 

Ditto..

Please finish it!

 

I think the story is dead!!

 

It's not dead. It's just...resting.

 

resting
Any idea how long it will rest?

 

Ya its not dead its just resting that made my day. Thanks LE

 

Up!