Before - Legends The Vigil (Obi/Qui, JA) -- Updated July 13 --

Oh, that was so sad! Poor Obi and Bant to be in such a horrible situation, and all those poor people. And now someone's attacked Bant! Aahh! I'm assuming because this is a memory about Obi that he's going to rescue her, right? Can't wait for more!!

 

Well... I was a little slower this time. But that's okay! Chin up.

I'm quite taken by this story. Wonder why Bant didn't sense impending danger? Perhaps she was a little too caught up in being Miss Angry-Head. You know what? Somehow I sense a Fluff Invasion approaching. Don't worry, though--stand behind me, and I'll protect you. They don't call me The Fluff-Slayer for nothing.

<<?Bant, you have to stop,? he said seriously. ?I?ve watched you give out over half of your ration packs. I know you want to help them, but you have to eat too.?

?I noticed you gave out just as many as I did,? she challenged, her silver eyes flashing.

?That?s different,? he argued.>>

Typical Obi-Wan. I'm allowed to do whatever I want, but you aren't allowed to get yourself into any situation that might make me worry! Very nice, Jedi. Eagerly awaiting the next bit!

 

Always the Knight in shinning armor our Obi
the vigil has to help them come back or I'll cry

 

Why isn't there more of the story? Don't leave Qui and Obi hanging!

 

Update soon?

 

It's been two weeks! WHERE ARE YOU!!! Please update soon, your killing me with cliffhangers.

 

This is great!

I loved that Qui-Gon was continuously kidnapping Padawans to prove a point - I can just see him doing it! And you have everyone's characters just perfect. It must be difficult to write about these characters from so many different people's perspectives and yet you do it without any struggle and without producing an overlap of personalities that could lead to repetitiveness. This is is still, after many readings, fresh and a joy to read.

Well written and very innovative. Great job

 

I like this a lot! I really like how we're seeing these memories from different people's points of view. Loved Qui-Gon kidnapping the padawan to make a point. He would do something like that. Great job with the characterizations!

I hope to see more soon! Could you pm me when you update?

 

This is such a good story! Please, please, please post more soon, and PM me when you do!

 

*Pokes head in and looks around*

What?! Still no update?

SIGH!

*Departs to find mischief to get into*

 

Uh, Jedi Obi-Wan, you haven't forgotten about this story have you?

Please update soon.

 

update please??

 

Oh, oh! Still no updates...

*leaves cake and ice cream*

More, please!

 

Where are the updates? Soon?

 

Yes, I agree, we need more! What happened to Bant in her memory?

Will Qui and Obi be alright? Don't leave them in the hands of such horrible people forever! Aaahhh!!

More soon please!

 

99 bottles of milk on the wall, 99 bottles of milk! take on down and pass it around, 98 bottles of milk!!

 

98 bottles of milk on the wall, 98 bottles of milk! take on down and pass it around, 97 bottles of milk on the wall!

Is that blue milk?

 

97 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 97 bottles of blue milk! Take one down, and pass it around, 96 bottles of blue milk on the wall.



it isss blue milk.

 

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Is this story dead???

 

I sure hope not!