Lol. Great job! Good Janson humor. Everyone should include Janson in their Fanfics. Wanna see some of mine? This is just parts of something I wrote when really bored and mad that there weren't anymore Wraith books. Beautiful, as always, Wes thought, trailing the young commander. He wondered if what he was doing could be considered stalking, but dismissed the idea. There was a reason he was headed to the section of the Mon Eulydice assigned to New Republic Intellegence. The caf was better there. Possibly. Wes held a datapad just a little too close to his face and watched the way she walked. Smooth and graceful. Like... Like a... He frowned. Well, something smooth and graceful. Her silky brown hair was tied up in a knot at the back of her head. She wore a standard NRI uniform and carried a small box on her left hip. Wes wished there was some way to walk backwards in front of her inconspiculously, so he could gaze at her face. Not that this is a bad view. He couldn't help from grinning. She certainly has a nice- "Are you planning on following me all the way to the Intellegence Section, Lieutenant Janson?" That scene goes on and gets funnier, in my opinion, anyway, with him totally embarressing himself. There's some funny Rogue Squadron banter in other parts. I've been having trouble with the actual plot, though. I guess the reason for that would be that any plot I think of would just be an excuse to write some funny Janson lines.