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Oregon The Words In My Heart

Discussion in 'Pacific Regional Discussion' started by Larena_Jade, Aug 21, 2005.

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  1. Larena_Jade

    Larena_Jade Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey all, i've dedicated this thread to any original pieces of work! I was very much inspired. I become inspired through passion and feelings, so here it is.

    I wrote this off the top of my head tonight. I geuss you can say it's about how i am feeling. And remember, i'm NOT AN EXPERT. I just write to express my soul. So I humbly give myself just the benefit of the fact taht i enjoy writing what comes out.



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    Perfected Tears



    Inner death, to myself.
    Leaves me shaking quivering waking,
    To the cause of imperfection, this feeling I have ironically perfected well.
    What drives me to this place? Of unforgotten disgrace.
    Why does it torchur my soul, this deep passion of humanity.
    My efforts are begotton,
    And what once was a happy place is now pictured as
    Vanity.
    Vanity of vanities, all is vanity.
    Perfection of this only comes from imperfected years.
    This life unruly, from such creates the bitterness of long
    Perfected Tears.


    @};- Melanie

     
  2. medfordforcemaster

    medfordforcemaster Jedi Youngling star 1

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    May 3, 2005
    wow.....that was deep.
     
  3. Larena_Jade

    Larena_Jade Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nov 19, 2002
    lol, well thanks for at least REPLYING. I guess people around here don't write.
     
  4. medfordforcemaster

    medfordforcemaster Jedi Youngling star 1

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    May 3, 2005
    cuz were from oregon. takes a while to figure out how to do it, lol
     
  5. Bowen

    Bowen Force Ghost star 5

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    Sep 6, 1999
    I write, but I don't write poetry or fiction, just non fiction, essays, histories, etc. ;)
     
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