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Saga This is a fun story! Enjoy! (Contains probable spoilers!)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by DARTHJADO, Apr 29, 2005.

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  1. DARTHJADO

    DARTHJADO Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Apr 25, 2001
    From your friend and mine Obi-Nun; (Contains probably spoilers!)

    The morning suns shown brightly on the small farm in Mos Eisley as Anakin Skywalker walked out of the Lars homestead and attempted to repair the broken Moisture-Vaporator. His long black robe flowed gracefully in the wind as his thick black gloved mechanical-hand pulled the control panel off along with the moisture valve and watched as the old, soiled water poured out. He suddenly turned his head up, sensing a presence and watched as a Starfighter appeared in the morning sky. He stood and waited as the craft landed and noticed Republic markings on the side. As the hatch lowered, a small smile appeared on his lips as a familiar figure stepped out. ?Obi-Wan.? He chuckled as the Jedi-Knight stepped over to him. ?Anakin.? Obi-Wan smiled as the two shared an embrace. ?Master Obi-Wan Kenobi, what brings you to the outer-rim?? Anakin continued chuckling. Obi-Wan smiled and looked around, ?Hmm, there?s something about this planet you just can?t resist, isn?t there?? Anakin didn?t respond right away, he just smiled and escorted the older Jedi indoors with him.
    ?I contacted Padme, she told me you?d be here.? Obi-Wan said, unfolding his arms as the two stepped into the kitchen.
    ?I?m helping my step brother out with a few things since his father died. Local trouble mostly, seems the Hutts are bullying their way through the surrounding moisture farms. Thought he could use a rogue Jedi, since no one else seems to have a use for me.? Anakin said, losing his smile. Obi-Wan grabbed the glass Anakin was offering him and the two Jedi sat. ?You were expelled from the order Anakin, not forgotten!? Obi-Wan smiled. ?You?re the only one who?s not forgotten me Obi-Wan.? He continued, ?Well, you and the Chancellor.? Obi-Wan was taken aback by that comment. Although, it was his natural instinct to press for more information. ?Still offering you a job I take it?? The elder Jedi asked, taking a sip but keeping his eyes on the young Jedi. ?Yeah!? Anakin laughed. ?But, Bodyguard isn?t exactly what I had in mind!? He smiled taking a sip of his own drink. ?We need you back Anakin!? Anakin turned his head up and looked at Obi-Wan seriously.
    The hatchway to another door opened and Owen Lars appeared with a small creature in his hand. ?I found it, a kruut lizard. I should have known,? The farmer smiled, ?it?s the only thing small enough that could have fit in the?? Owen stopped when he saw Obi-Wan standing before him. ?Owen Lars, this is my former master, Obi-Wan Kenobi.? Anakin introduced the two. Obi-Wan reached and shook the man?s hand and offered a simple smile. ?Nice to meet you.? Owen said, although Obi-Wan sensed the man didn?t mean it! ?I?ll leave you two alone.? Owen said, walking to the sink to clean a few dishes. ?What?s happened?? Anakin asked, as Obi-Wan sat back down. ?It seems that Count Dooku is back.? Obi-Wan said. Anakin felt a slight sting in his right arm as the Count?s name was mentioned. He formed a half smile as he stared down at his drink. ?I thought he?d been killed in the battle of Krill d?Asheen.? ?Yes well, that?s what the senate believed as well,? The Jedi paused to take a sip from the cup, ?although no Jedi felt a tremor in the Force.? Obi-Wan continued. Owen was puzzled by Obi-Wan?s response as he intently listened, although he knew he probably shouldn?t! ?I knew he hadn?t been killed, but when I tried to explain that to the council I was silenced!? Anakin said, sipping his cup. ?Every Jedi felt that way Anakin, but it was up to the council to make that determination!? Obi-Wan said, defending the council, as always. ?Why? Why is it up to them when I am as capable as Master Yoda in deciphering the Force?? Anakin asked. Obi-Wan dropped his smile and stared up at Anakin. ?Besides, what does this have to do with me?? Anakin asked. ?You know I have been trying to have them reverse their decision in this expulsion.? Obi-Wan said, Anakin knodded. ?We lost Masters Koth and Tiin in the Battle of Solust. The council?s numbers are dwindling Anakin.? ?Now they?re desp
     
  2. SoggyBread

    SoggyBread Jedi Youngling

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    Apr 23, 2005
    hay i liked the story until it ran out of paragraphs
    it just got to hard to read after then

    p.s is Darth Vader going to become Anikin again
    Possible mush would be nice

    i like your story it just need paragraphs.
     
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