Thor VS Vader, my remix video of Thor 2's Trailer

Hope you guys like it, this is the first video I've made.

 

I want a slow poking. thx

 

I got a kick out of it.

I got a kick out of that too.

 

Losing...will...to live.

 

Makes little narrative sense and the intercutting is sloppy and ill-timed.

 

Take it to fanfilms.

 

Seems more appropriate for this forum.

 

Thx, was not sure about which subforum should I post.

 

There is Darkness and it survives, that fit Vader quite well.

 

No it didn't.

 

Vader is a shroud of darkness, the will of the Force and he did survive from horrible incident.

During the 2nd narration it is showing the strength of the Imperial fleet.

 

Nonetheless my criticism holds. The video makes little narrative sense because shots of Vader are inserted jerkily into the Thor narrative with little understanding of pacing or story-telling. Then suddenly Anakin -- not Vader, Anakin -- is kissing Padme/Natalie, and we've been thrown into a time loop. It's bad. I've made bad art in the past and I've owned up to it. I've acknowledged my mistakes and thereby grew as a person and an artist.

Your turn.

 

Vader showed up because he's the enemy, the "darkness" and he noticed "Padme".

That wedding scene is in brown color, obviously it is flashback.

 

You know the old adage about explaining a joke?

 

I'm surprised you didn't ask about Sidious' smile after Sif's jealous face.

 

This is the improved version.