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Saga Thoughts of a Darth Sidious, at a Battle of Endor, A Poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Sinrebirth , May 10, 2006.

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  1. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Thoughts


    I have thought,
    Of this meeting,
    Longer than you know,
    Memories; fleeting


    I have wondered,
    What gift I would bring,
    To break your body,
    So the wounds sing,


    Despair?
    That rare treat,
    Choking your spirit,
    Never fully freed,


    Should I tear your throat?
    Or sink in steel?
    Fingers plucking at your sight,
    Make the nightmare real?


    A promise of death?
    Or a coven of End?
    Touch of destruction,
    Upon your friends?


    Torture embellished,
    Upon your tongue?
    Truths apparent,
    Making sweat run?


    I let you choose,
    Your demise,
    May you cry?
    May you die?


    Tell me what you need,
    So I may steal it from your grasp.
    Tell me your love,
    On a tongue?s rasp,


    Let me have,
    Vengeance sharp,
    Upon your eyes,
    Upon your heart,


    We will dine,
    On darkness tonight,
    Agony sublime,
    I feast on light,


    You will break?
    Swooned by power,
    Flesh stroked by fear,
    For at this very hour?


    Is the galaxies final act...
     
  2. The Great No One

    The Great No One Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    Jun 4, 2005
    wow... that is indeed a great poem ryan. i loved it.

    i'm at something of a loss for words. that does describe sidious incredibly well. it reaches well into his psyche. being able to get into palps head is a scary thing... you did it well.

    look forward to more of your poetry ryan.
     
  3. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Jul 7, 2000
    Whoa! Very nicely done. Reeks of Sidious through and through.
     
  4. Meredith_Kenobi

    Meredith_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 20, 2005
    That was wonderfully diturbing! Very Sidious. =D= Loved it.
     
  5. delta-7starfighter

    delta-7starfighter Jedi Master star 4

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    Nov 12, 2005
    Mesa like! Mesa like!=D=
    nice work![face_peace]
     
  6. Handmaiden_Rabe

    Handmaiden_Rabe Jedi Master star 5

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    Nov 2, 2003
    Well... aren't we morose? :p So much said using so few words... not many people can do that at all, and you did it perfectly. =D=
     
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