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TIS - Chapter Seven The Battle for the Galaxy Continues

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  1. Ty-gon Jinn

    Ty-gon Jinn Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 12, 2000
    Obi-wan was pushed into a cell with electric bars, and from where he could see he was across the hall from Kendrick and Jaren- Homer must be right next to him.
    "What are you in for?" Kendrick said sluggishly.
    "Two counts of murder and thirty-six counts of involuntary manslaughter."
    "Holy cow," Jaren said. "How was that lowlife able to make that number belivable?"
    "I blew up Kafal's palace, remember?"
    "Ouch," Homer mused.
    "There's really only one thing that bugs me. With the squad falling apart and me in jail- will Mara still want to marry me?"

    Mara heard every word with the Force.

    Ty-gon sat with Kevin Ski, listening to the plan now before them.
    "Great idea," he said.
    Kevin stood up and said, "Let's go get ready right away."
    His former crew members saluted and replied "Yes, sir."

    Darth Greywolfe sat with Lord Mulder, watching the recordings of the council meetings and trials.
    An evil grin crossed his face.
    "Lord Mulder, congratulations. You have managed to eliminate the biggest thorn in our side."
    Mulder beamed.
    "Now for the entire bush," Greywolfe said, and he let Mulder in on all the details of his capturing the Skywalkers.
  2. Darth Homer 327

    Darth Homer 327 Jedi Master star 4

    Dec 24, 1999
    Homer sat in his cell, trying to come up with a plan to get them out of there. Trika said she needed something electronic. Homer looked down at his wrist watch. He made a rumble in the Force, causing the guards to become distracted for a moment. He slipped off his watch and tossed it across to Trika's cell. She caught it and looked at him.

    //It's linked to my personal computer, it has voice command, so you might be able to hack into the computer here.// Homer said telepathicly to Trika.

    //This is good, I'll see what I can do.// Trika replied.

    Homer raised his eyebrows with a smile.

    //Great!// Homer said.

    [This message has been edited by Darth Homer 327 (edited 05-09-2000).]
  3. Trika_Kenobi

    Trika_Kenobi Jedi Master star 6

    Nov 4, 1999
    How is it that hackers are overlooked until people really need them?
    Trika smiled wryly to herself as she caught Homer's watch and started to mess around with the functions. Reversing several commands and getting into the system, she frowned.
    //Anyone know where exactly we are, as in location according to the building?//
    General Ski thought for a moment. //East wing, second sector, I believe.//
    Trika nodded mentally back, punching in several different commands and backtracking about ten different times. She was, though, one of the first to come up with the whole New Republic security system, therefore knowing the codes. She was very surprised the Council didn't think of that first.
    Homer's computer was doing something weird, stalling her for a moment, but in fifteen minutes, something clicked.
    A door!
    //Ty-gon? Mara? Check your door.//
    The others Force-checked their doors, not wanting to draw any attention, finding the cell to be unlocked and practically open.
    //Okay, here's how this works,// Trika began to explain the situation to the rest of the squad. //I can only open the first door on either side because the electronic wiring prevents all the cells from opening at once. That means that Jaren and Mara's cells are open, and theirs are the only ones open.// Everyone seemed to understand. //The rest is up to them.//

    [This message has been edited by Trika_Kenobi (edited 05-11-2000).]
  4. Darth Agent Mulder

    Darth Agent Mulder Jedi Youngling star 2

    Feb 14, 2000
    Greywolfe was thoroughly impressed with the way he had gotten rid of the Talons. "But you see," Mulder said, pointing out the window at the small blue planet, "without the Talons, I can do whatever I please, and," he gave the signal to fire. The SSDs pounded the planet with laser fire, leaving it a barren wasteland in a matter of minutes. "I think I'm starting to enjoy myself."

    [This message has been edited by Darth Agent Mulder (edited 05-10-2000).]
  5. Ty-gon Jinn

    Ty-gon Jinn Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 12, 2000
    Talon Intelligence Squadron writers-I hope this post is to everyone's satisfaction- I tried to keep with the story but tie up a few loose threads.
    Darth Greywolfe smiled. "You were right, Lord Mulder. I am impressed."
    Mulder gave another signal and the firing stopped abruptly, leaving the planet a charred shell, a barren wasteland, a smoking heap of what it used to be.
    "I shall enjoy this as well. But what of Illusion Squadron?"
    "I've been watching that boy that calls himself Darth Ash. He's young, and has much to learn, but he hopes to win my appreciation by destroying Illusion Squadron and presenting the dead as a surprise."
    "Sounds horrendous. But I'm really astonished about how well your plan to destroy the Talons went. And you said those who have been court-martialed are either in prison or dishonorably discharged?"
    Darth Mulder just sat back and smiled. The evil glint in his eyes reflected of the slight blue tint in his skin.
    "I'll take that as a yes."
    It was then that the Lady Carre walked in, followed by Reyanna, who was begging Sondara to let her know what the stirring in the Force was.
    "Ask Lord Greywolfe."
    Greywolfe stood up. "Thank you, Lady Carre. Reyanna, I have already told Darth Mulder about this, and Sondara witnissed it firsthand. I have captured Luke and Mara Skywalker. They are aboard seperate ships under close guard. Lord Mulder?"
    Now it was Mulder's turn. "I have managed to plant false information in the hands of the New Republic Council. Each tidbit is based on obscure events from the Talons' pasts. The entire squad is either in jail, discharged, or pending a court-martial."
    Now Carre spoke. "And the only man who could help both the Skywalkers or the Talons- Malek Jade has been killed."
    Reyanna remembered- Malek had spied on the Dark Stars for some time. He had seen the codes for the ships, where they kept the weapons- anything he needed to free the Skywalkers- and all the evidence that could clear the Talons, as this plan had been unfolding for some time. And since being Force sensitive ran in the family, he was very close to both Mara Jades. He was a liability, but she was still surprised Sondara took the initiative to do the killing herself.
    Suddenly a voice penetrated the room. "My Lord Mulder," said Darth Ash, appearing at the door. "Illusion Squadron has been located. My troops are in place to capture and kill them. I thought you would like to be there."
    "We would all like to be there," said Carre.

    Obi-wan saw what Trika was doing. He had a hunch, and figured out what would work.
    "Trika-" he whispered, unable to use the Force, "I'll help."
    She nodded, showing she heard him.
    Obi-wan motioned to the guard. "Every prisoner gets one comm call, right?"
    "Yeah," the guard said hesitantly.
    "Then I'd like to make mine."
    "Fine," the guard said. handing him a commlink.
    "Could I have some privacy? I'm calling my fiancee."
    "Well, I don't think I can leave you-"
    "Where are we going to go?"
    The guard huffed, turned on his heel, and left the room.
    Hurrying, Obi-wan used the commlink to hack into the system. "And Mara's out?" he called to Trika.
    "Yeah, and I've almost got Jaren."
    Obi-wan made a quick adjustment and he heard the bars in Kendrick's cell stop buzzing. Then a click. Ken was free.

    Ty-gon, CiCi, and Kevin made it to the Nest's hangar, followed by Stumpy, H9, and Shorty the pitdroid. All the Talons' stuff was in crates on the lawn. And inside the hangar, they found nothing.
    "They figured we'd come, and confiscated the ships."
    A thought struck Kevin. "What about Salvo Squadron?"
    "Salvo?" CiCi asked.
    "The B-wing fleet we were controlling while aboard the Heron."
    "We could get B-wings from them and they could escort us," Ty-gon suggested.
    "They'd be be court-martialed, too," CiCi pointed out.
    "We're facing disciplinaray action for being affiliated with you anyway," came the voice of Colonel Jik Hawk.
    "Die all, die merrily," said Major Roshe.
    The other three members of Salvo stood behind the officers, ready to take the Talons to the B-wings.

    The three Sith lords, the two Dark Stars, and hundred
  6. Darth McClain

    Darth McClain Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Feb 5, 2000
    Thank you, Ty-Gon! It makes alot more sence now!
  7. LeiaB

    LeiaB Jedi Youngling star 2

    May 30, 1999
    <<Thanks Ty-Gon! Good summary. I do want to point out that Reyanna is fully aware that Carre killed Malek Jade, in fact, she captured him and brought him to her to dispose of. And, from what I understand in your post, the 5 Salvo Squadron members are working for Mulder? - need clarification on this pls>>
  8. Ty-gon Jinn

    Ty-gon Jinn Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 12, 2000
    I know you brought Malek to Carre. I was just reviewing.
    Also, no, Salvo is not working for Mulder in what I wrote. He was telling Frohike what charges could be brought against Salvo Squadron, and Greywolfe's messenger observed them from a distance, seeing them conversing with Kevin, CiCi and me, hearing "Die all, die merrily," knowing they were going to the hangar.
  9. Ty-gon Jinn

    Ty-gon Jinn Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 12, 2000
    Sondara looked at the progress of the fleet of bounty hunters.
    Suddenly, Jek Thosan veered away from the fleet.
    "Lord Greywolfe!" she bellowed. "Your bounty hunter is unreliable!"

    Jek Thosan sat in his Z-95 Headhunter. Never in his 21 years had he heard an ordeal with so many sordid details. He was going to disobey Carre and Greywolfe amd attack Salvo Squadron himself.

    On Coruscant, Salvo Squadron was prepping to escort the dismissed Talons to Mulder.
    Colonel Jack Thosan (No Relation) was sitting on the bed, folding his flight suit. There was a sound. He got up.
    A blaster rifle appeared from nowhere. A green bolt shattered the picture frame hanging on the wall. He blaster raised at the assassin. Jack and Jek Thosan had their weapons drawn at each other.

    Ty-gon put on his flight suit, throwing his Jedi robe and his normal clothes in his cargo case, along with his lightsaber and Shorty the pit droid. He felt a disturbance in the Force- but it was the light side- something good was happening. "Kevin!" he yelled.

    Obi-wan motioned to the guard. "I'm done with the commlink."
    When the guard came back, he took the commlink, then heard a creak. He turned around only to see Kendrick's fist crash into his face. He saw blackness as his eyes swelled shut. He felt another blow, this time to the back of his head. He collapsed to the floor, feeling himself reeling, then feeling the sweet escape of uncontiousness.
    The guard didn't know that his gun went off- shooting the generator, and freeing the Talons.
    Obi-wan pushed his door open. "Thanks Ken." He took the guard's weapon and they ran down the hall.

    Greywolfe saw Jek Thosan's ship on Coruscant. He was enraged. "I thought I could trust him."

    Jek felt a Force-choking on his throat. Fine, he thought. I'll betray Greywolfe again for this lack of trust.
    He gave a small chip- after pulling off a dark-side miracle to get it- to Jack Thosan, saying "This explains your connection to Illusion Squadron. This information could bring down the New Empire- if you can translate it."
    In that instant, Jek's mind was on the chip, and Jack shot, bringing down his assassin.
    The ID showed Jek's name as Jek Darklighter. Jek's last words- "Sorry for using your name."

    Greywolfe saw- through the Dark Side that ID. "He betrayed me and he LIED to me!" he fumed.

    Jack Thosan could feel something coarsing through him. Was it the Force? He didn't know. But if it was the Force, it was the Dark Side. He hated the feeling.

    Thosan left the room with his cargo case, and ran into Ty-gon. "You ready?"

    Ladies and Gentlemen, meet my real new fourth character, Jack Thosan (I'm no good with names, so I gave the bounty hunter a fake name so I could use the good one)! Can he get on the Salvo roster?
  10. Jedi-Jade

    Jedi-Jade Jedi Master star 4

    Nov 21, 1999
    Word had gotten out amoung the ex-Talons that a prison break was underway. Telia was relieved beyond words, maybe the stress would lessen once Jaren was back with her.

    While the prisoners worked on their escape, the remaining members still had work to do. Telia planed to speak to the Provisonal Council about the inner heart of the Talon Squadron. She knew with so many high leaders, they had just as much bad dirt buried over by good dirt, than any of the Talons. Maybe even more.

    Visiting Jaren earlier in the morning had given her a sense of renewal for her goal. With one last rub around her stomach, and a deep breath, Telia walked into the room.

    All members looked up in shock. They had finished with all the members, and were not expecting any visitors that early in the morning. Mon Mothma was the first to recover from the surprise and speak.

    "Ms. Aris, is there anything we can help you with?"

    "Maybe she's lost." A Bothan said with what Telia interpreted as a snicker.

    She set her head high, determined not to let his comments get to her. "Actually Mon Mothma, I came to talk with everyone." She quickly added, "If I am able to."

    Mon Mothma simply nodded and sat back down. "Please, continue. What brings you here today?"

    "Well," Telia looked at each of them in the eyes. "I'm pregnant." She saw the looks of confusion in many eyes. "I know that that means nothing to you all, but it means a lot to me. My husband is in jail, for who knows how long, What will happen if he is in there when the baby is born?"

    The Bothan stood and spoke once more. "That's lovely, but that has nothing to do with your ex-squadmates being in jail."

    "If you beg my pardon, sir, it does. The Talons are my friends, my family. Who they are defines our actions and personalities. And I can't think of any group of people that I want influencing my child then them. Maybe they have shaddy pasts, but don't we all?"

    She turned. "Princess Leia Organa Solo. Your choose to add the name of your husband to the end of your name. But, yet, your husband has done quite a bit of things I am sure the New Republic would like to forget. He was even once an Imperial Lt. Yet you wear the name with pride."

    Once again Telia faced the Bothan. "Senator, your people claime to be the ones responsible for retreving the plans for the third Death Star, but, there is something you keep from the public. You sent in others to do the dirty work. People who did not survive, and still you tell everyone that it was the Bothans who risked it all. Even while, in your heart, you know that it is not true."

    Telia took another deep breath and her stomach tightened forcefully. "And Mon Mothma. You lead the New Republic, but did you not cast away one of our own because you were jealous? Because you thought another could do something you could not. What kind you message is that sending to the people." She saw Mon Mothma pale slightly.

    Telia took in the whole room. "You think that the "common folk" don't know about these mistakes, because you choose to not see that we do. I am here to tell you that we know. Yet, we still put our blind faith in your hands. We know that the past is the past, and the future is wide open. Our actions do not excuse our mistakes, but they define what makes us up. Your can either choose to continue down the shady path, or strive from it. My friends, the ex-Talons choose the last route. Hopefully you did too. But why should they be punished and not you?"

    With that, Telia grimiced at her stomach pain once more, and left the room to stunned silence.
  11. Trika_Kenobi

    Trika_Kenobi Jedi Master star 6

    Nov 4, 1999
    Obi-Wan and Jaren's little plan seemed to have pulled off real well. Trika let out a breath she hadn't remembered taking in as the cells were open.
    The Talons were free.
    "Homer," she called his attention, tossing him his watch back. "Thanks."
    Homer nodded, catching the watch. "No problem."
    Trika smiled to the rest of her squadmates. "Okay, I'm ready to get out of here."
  12. Darth McClain

    Darth McClain Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Feb 5, 2000
    (Salvo Squad is supposedly with the Galactic Voyager, Ty-GOn. I guess he can be a B-wing pilot)
  13. Darth Homer 327

    Darth Homer 327 Jedi Master star 4

    Dec 24, 1999
    Homer was puting his watch back on, as he ran to catch up with his comrades.

    "How will we get out of here? This place is swarming with guards." Homer asked.

    Just then the guard returned to his station, to see the group out of their cells. He raised his blaster pistol, and fired. The shot hit Homer, who was at the back of the group, in the shoulder. Homer went sprawling into the floor. Alarms began to sound. Mara Force pushed the guard into the wall, knocking him unconsious. Jaren kneeled down to help Homer.


    Darth Ash stared out the viewport, commlink in hand, ready to give the command to destroy Illusion Squadron.

    A message appeared on the holo-link, one of the Admiral's face was viewable, and he began to speak.

    "Your excellency, we have signals showing that the Talons are escaping from prison, the alarms are going off, and their cells have been disabled." The Admiral said.

    "Have them seal off the building! Dont let one of those Talons escape! If they get out, they will come to the aid of Illusion Sqadron during the battle. Hold my troops at bay, I'm going down to the planet to take care of these Talons myself. Ready my shuttle immediatly." Ash said.

    "Yes Sir." The Admiral said.

    Darth Ash rushed to his shuttle, to get to the prison, before the Talons were able to get away.


    Homer looked at his shoulder and gritted his teeth. Blood poured out of the wound. Homer tore off his shirt and stopped up the wound.

    "Your hurt bad, Homer, we need to get you to a medic." Kendrick said.

    "I'll be fine, lets just get out of here." Homer said.

    Suddenly the lights in the building went dead, and the blast door at the end of the hallway began to close slowly.

    "They've cut the power, we'll be locked in!" Trika said.

    The blast door continued to get a smaller and smaller opening. The Talons didnt move, as they all looked at Homer. Kendrick began to try to help Homer up.

    "You guys go on!" Homer said

    "We cant leave you behind!" Mara said.

    "It's almost closed, go! The Force is trying to keep me here, its my destiny, go on! I'll catch up another way!" Homer shouted.

    "I dont know...its too risky!" Jaren said.

    "Go." Homer said.

    "Alright, but we'll be back." Trika said.

    "And if I dont make it out, tell CiCi I love her." Homer said.

    "We'll try and restore the power." Trika said.

    Homer nodded.

    The Talons looked at eachother, then ran relunctantly to the almost sealed blast door. They all slipped throught the small opening, as Homer watched them go.


    Darth Ash was already on his way down to Corruscant, in his mock Republic shuttle, so not to bring attention to himself. After a short flight, he landed on the hangar bay of the detainment center. He would stop these Talons, and then he would destroy Illusion Squadron. He pulled his lightsaber out of his black robes, and walked to the East wing, second sector. He could sense trouble ahead.


    Homer reached out with the Force, he could sense danger comming his way. He slowly got up, and began to search the area for his lightsaber. He would need it, and soon.
  14. LeiaB

    LeiaB Jedi Youngling star 2

    May 30, 1999
    <<Hope this fits in with everyones plans. I also apologize if I missed mentioning anyone who was escaping the prision area>>

    CiCi, Ty-Gon and the General had board the Salvo Squadron shuttle. They need to reach the B-Wings as soon as possible. CiCi glanced at Ty-Gon and Kevin, who were both pacing the floor of the ship nervously. Although she was was not force sensitive, she knew there was trouble. Mulder obviously wanted the Talons out of the way for a reason, and it appeared obvious that he was sending waves of death and destruction through the Republic.

    "We can't wait much longer." Ty-gon finally spoke, "We're going to have to leave without them and fly the ships back here. This waiting around is too dangerous."

    "Wait," CiCi stood up and walked down the open hatch into the battered hanger of The Nest. "They will be here, I know it."

    Then, she heard beeping coming from the darkness outside the hanger. R2-DZ rolled up to her, beeping frantically. "Calm down R2, we wouldn't leave without you!" The droid coutinued to chatter, "Oh no" CiCi frowned and looked back at Kevin, "It appears that all systems have been alerted to the Talons escape."

    Immediately, several of her squadmates came running into the hanger...Mara, Trika, Jaren, Obi-Wan, Kendrick..they appeared to all be there except one.

    Mara walked up to CiCi and put her hand on her shoulder. CiCi closed her eyes, "Tell me he is not dead."

    "No CiCi, he is alive," Mara gave her a thin smile, "He was injured and didn't make it out. We had no choice, he wanted it this way."

    "Mara, CiCi - move it!" Obi-Wan called to them, motioning with his hand for them to enter the shuttle. The engines had already started and the hatchway was slowly closing.

    "He is strong Mara, he'll make it. I have to stay and help him." CiCi pushed her friend away. "We'll meet up with you in 12 hours, one way or another..." she looked into Mara's eyes "He would do it for me."

    With that she smiled as the shuttle took off. She stood with R2-DZ in the empty hanger of her abandoned home. Homer had said he had friends here, perhaps they could help. But first, she had to find a way into the prision area.
  15. Darth Homer 327

    Darth Homer 327 Jedi Master star 4

    Dec 24, 1999
    Homer walked around the detention area slowly. His shoulder hurt like hell. He could sense trouble comming, so he searched to no avail for his lightsaber. He called out to the Force even stronger. He sensed something else.

    "CiCi." Homer said out loud.

    Oh no. She had stayed behind to look for him. This wasnt good. Now he was endangering his teammates again, now the one he loved. He would make sure no harm came to her, but there wasnt much he could do without a lightsaber.

    He called out to the Force even stronger. He felt something. He walks over to an empty wall. His lightsaber was on the other side of this wall. He looked around for a way to get into the room. there was no other way besides the door, and it was locked shut. He would not let CiCi down, he would get that saber no matter what.

    He envisioned the saber. It was laying in a crate with his name written on it, along with all his other consfincated belongings. He used the Force to make the saber hover in the air. He activated it. He plunged it into the wall, where Homer saw its orange blade penetrate his side of the wall. After it had melted a good portion of the wall, and left a fairly large hole, Homer called the saber to his hand, and caught it.

    Just as he had the saber in his grasp, a red blade could be seen cutting through the blast door at the far end. Trouble was here, and now he was ready. He hoped his injury wouldnt slow him down.... no.... he wouldnt let it.
  16. Mekial

    Mekial Jedi Master star 1

    Dec 9, 1999
    Mekial had thought jail would have been bad. Nothing could have been worse than this. Her guard was the most annoying person in the entire New Republic.

    "So, Meki, what are ya plannin' on doin' tuh-day?"

    Mekial held in a groan. "I'd appreciate it if you referred to me as Ms. Yrisar."

    "Sure thing, Meki." Mekial rolled her eyes.

    Suddenly she heard a bleep. Her commlink. She couldn't take it here, not in front of her guard. He'd get suspicious. She headed for the restrooms.

    "Where do you think you're going?"

    "To the women's room."

    The guard seemed at a loss of what to do. He was under orders not to let her out of his sight, but...he nodded briefly. Mekial nearly grinned. She headed for the restroom, and once in she switched on her commlink. Ty-gon stood there, a wide smile on his face.

    "They did it."

    "Did what?"

    "They broke out!" he caught himself. "Um, you aren't around your..."


    "Good. Can you get to us? We're leaving on the Salvo shuttle."

    "I'll be there."

    Mekial switched off her commlink and glanced around briefly. The window. It was a couple of feet higher than her, but she jumped up to it easily. Now to get it open. The wondows locked from the inside, so she had no trouble prying them open.

    "What's taking so long?" her guard demanded.

    She ignored him. "Are you in there?" he demanded.


    "Well hurry up!"

    Mekial swung out the window and tried not to look down. She was five stories up, but getting down wouldn't be too much of a problem if she could reach the ledge. SHe slowly lowered herself out until her foot found the ledge. From there it was easy climbing.

    When her feet finally landed on the ground, she took off in a dead run towards where she knew the ship would be. She could hear her guard screaming for her to come out of the bathroom.
  17. Trika_Kenobi

    Trika_Kenobi Jedi Master star 6

    Nov 4, 1999
    Trika had stayed behind to see what she could do about the power. Without power, Homer was useless against the door that held him.
    But why in the world would the New Republic cut the power and then let the rest of the Talons freely make their way to the outside? Shouldn't there be something more to it?
    Trika felt a cold brush of a wind gust at her red braided hair. Something wasn't right. She shivered. It wasn't just the temperature, either. There was a disturbance in the Force.
    Power. Must look for the power source. It had to be around here somewhere.
    Trika searched long and hard, through crevices, inside closets, around the building, practically all over the place, searching for one single bloody power source!
    What if somebody sees you? You're not exactly on good terms with the Republic, Trika...
    That warning gave her just the right amount of time to duck into an indentation in the wall, avoiding several Republic guards and saving herself. But before she could regain her balance, she tripped over the exact thing she was looking for. Her joy was interrupted momentarily while she fell flat on her face and into the dirt.
    Way to be graceful, Kenobi...
    Sometimes she wished her thoughts and the Force would just shut up...
    Trika sat up, brushing the majority of the dirt out of her face. It proved futile; she looked like she had gotten into a fight with a Sand Person. Trika grasped the two ends of the wires into her hands, wishing she had something of use on her.
    I told you all to get me a new necklace, but no, no, wouldn't listen.
    Think. Gotta think.
    The little lightbulb went on and Trika reached in her hair, undoing several of the braids and using the bands to tie the ends together. Once fused, the power was restored.
    Gosh, Trika. You're so resourceful and practical. Now you look like a complete mess; your hair's half-way done, and you're covered in dirt.
    Shut up!
  18. Darth Agent Mulder

    Darth Agent Mulder Jedi Youngling star 2

    Feb 14, 2000
    Darth Agent Mulder shook his head in disgust as he watched the tapes of the rebels escaping from the New Republic prison. He knew the Republic was run by idiots, but was it really that bad? Perhaps he should make an attack specifically on Coruscant one day.
    "Fire when ready, Captain."
    Eugene Tooms nodded, saluting crisply. "Yes, my Lord." He began barking orders on the bridge of the Unnatural.
    Mulder watched in satisfied silence. The weak planetary shields were no match for Mulder's arsenal of weapons. Their stubborn refusal to yield to the Empire had cost them. They were all dead.
    "Excellent, Tooms," he stood. "I think I will go to my room to meditate. Continue to destroy those planets on the list."

    [This message has been edited by Darth Agent Mulder (edited 05-12-2000).]
  19. Darth Homer 327

    Darth Homer 327 Jedi Master star 4

    Dec 24, 1999
    Homer walked closer to the blast door, that a lightsaber on the other side was cutting through. Homer ignighted his saber, and took a defensive stance. The lightsaber on the other side had now cut a complete large circle in the blast door now.




    Darth Ash kicked the center of the circle he had cut out of the door, and knocked it through to Homer's side. Ash jumped through the hole and was already swinging his saber at Homer. Homer deflected and stayed on the defensive. Whenever Homer blocked or swung his saber, pain shot into his shoulder. Ash continued his assult.


    CiCi and R2-DZ made their way towards the East wing, second sector, where Homer was supposed to be. Just then, the power flicked back to life. All the blast doors and locks opened. CiCi looked at the little astromech droid.

    "C'mon, we have to hurry." She said.

    They continued on their way, getting closer.


    "What is going on over their???" Mon Mothma exclaimed, after learning of what was going on in the detainment center.

    "We had orders to cut the power, when we learned that the Talons had escaped." The Captain said.

    "Is anyone in the building?" Mon Mothma said.

    "We evacuated everyone there, the Talons are gone, and there seems to be some kind of activity going on, on the level the Talons were being kept. We fear it could be Imperial, there's an unmarked ship that has landed at the detainment center." The Captain reported.

    "What do you suggest we do Captain?" Mon Mothma asked.

    "Since the building is evacuated, I would suggest bombing the floor remotly, just to make sure anyone still in there, including those under Imperial order do not escape." the Captain said.

    "Very well, proceed with that course of action." Mon Mothma said.

    The Captain spoke into his commlink.

    "Bomb the East wing, second sector of the detainment center."


    Homer and Ash continued their battle. Ash was winning, and Homer was nearly defeated, he couldnt fight with an injury like this. Homer began to lose his strength. He began to slow down. Ash took atvantage of this, by bringing his saber up, severing Homer's right arm completly. Homer fell to the floor, his lightsaber clattering across the floor, deactivating itself. Ash held the end of his blade to Homer's throat.

    "I have gotten my revenge for the hand you severed. Now I will get my revenge for the Sith." Ash said preparing to kill Homer.

    Just then, CiCi brought Homer's saber down on Ash. It struck him in the shoulder, severing his arm, and part of his side. Ash screamed. He swung his other fist around, slugging CiCi across the face. CiCi fell to the floor. Homer was now on his feet. He force pushed Ash away, and out the transparisteel window. Ash could be heard screaming on his way down the side of the building.

    Homer lost his balance, and fell to the floor again. CiCi got up and knelt next to him.

    "Homer, Force, your hurt." CiCi said, tears running down her face.

    "I'll be alright." Homer winced.

    "I'll get you to a medic, you'll be fine." CiCi said trying to calm even herself down.

    Then they heard the distinced sound. Concussion missile. They were bombing the floor. Homer gave CiCi a helpless look.

    "I love you." Homer said.

    And with that, Homer Force pushed CiCi as far away as possible, out the door, as the explosion eveloped him. CiCi landed in the next room. She saw the walls of the room Homer was in, crumple around him. She screamed.


    CiCi watched as the smoke cleared, and saw that if anything was left of Homer, it was now crushed and gone.
  20. Darth Homer 327

    Darth Homer 327 Jedi Master star 4

    Dec 24, 1999
    Testing, my last post wont show up! mad.gif
  21. Trika_Kenobi

    Trika_Kenobi Jedi Master star 6

    Nov 4, 1999
    Just bringing posts up...give me a few minutes...
  22. Darth Homer 327

    Darth Homer 327 Jedi Master star 4

    Dec 24, 1999
    Darth Ash tumbled down the side of the building, gaining speed as he fell. He reached out with his robotic hand, and let his fingers dig into the side of the building, slowy stopping his fall. He dangled precariously, and took a moment to catch his breath.

    "Computer 5769. Depart landing bay, and trace my signal, pick me up immediatly." Darth Ash choked into the comm attached to his shirt collar.

    Ash looked up, to see his shuttle hover down from the landing bay, and come to a stop right below him.

    "Hatch open." Ash said into the comm.

    The hatch located on top of the shuttle opened, and Ash dropped into the ship. Ash limped over to the cockpit, and sat down.

    "Computer 5769, return to the Unnatural." Ash said.

    The ship took off into the sunset.

  23. Darth Homer 327

    Darth Homer 327 Jedi Master star 4

    Dec 24, 1999
    I think we need to start a new thread soon, none of my posts will show up for me until someone else posts after it. mad.gif
  24. Ty-gon Jinn

    Ty-gon Jinn Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 12, 2000
    Ty-gon appeared through the window behind Mekial, and they took off.
    "How far to the shuttle?" she asked.
    "It's just over there in the main hangar," he replied.
    As they got to the hangar, they were greeted by the five members of Salvo and several Talons.
    "Lt. Yrisar, Capt. Jinn," the man standing there said. "Come aboard quickly, we'll take off right away."
    The Force gave Jinn a notion. "No, wait. CiCi Draven isn't aboard."
    Suddenly, CiCi came running through the hangar, and on to the ramp.
    Mekial spoke up. "Where's Homer?"
    CiCi looked, up, revealing a tear-stained face. "He was in an explosion."
    "Oh, my..." the man said. "Is he all right?"
    "I don't know," CiCi said, repressing a sob. "I don't know."
    Kevin Ski appeared in the doorway. "We have to take off or we'll never get this opportunity again."
    Ty-gon and Mekial led the crying CiCi in, and the man closed the ramp.
    Obi-wan Jinn greeted them as he came in. "CiCi, are you okay? What is it?"
    "Ask me again sometime," she said, quoting Luke Skywalker.
    He led CiCi to Mara, figuring an old friend might be a comfort.
    Obi-wan walked up to the cockpit, where the man from Salvo had taken the controls. "Hi," the man said. "I'm Colonel Jack Thosan."
    "Obi-wan Jinn," the hacker said, "And this is my brother, Ty-gon."
    "Hi," Jack said. He looked back at Obi-wan. "You're engaged to Mara?"
    "Yeah," Obi-wan replied.
    The shuttle lifted off, and as they cleared the planet, Jik Hawk's voice said "Prepare for light speed."
    Major Rosche pushed a lever, and the stars turned to the long lines and blurred bright lines of hyperspace.
    Thosan got up- he had to analyze the data he got from the bounty hunter.
    Obi-wan was comparing stories with all the other Talons who had been court-martialed. "That's why we all court-martialed seperately," he realized. "Was it Frohike who brought that up against you?"
    That caused quite a commotion as all the Talons answered the affirmitive.

    Darth Greywolfe now stood on the bridge of the Unnatural with Darth Mulder. They stood with several criminals- the hacker who authored the Deamonsfire Virus and the Llantris episode, the assassin who murdered the people supposedly killed by Jaren or Kendrick and bombed the obscure musuem opening hosted by Kafal the Hutt, the arsonist who set fire to the Republic hangar the day of the Nest fire, the spy who leaked information to the Empire under names such as "Yrisar" or "Heartilly," as well as a host of others. "I must commend you all," Greywolfe said.
    Mulder took over. "You excel in not being detected, in framing the Talons. But now that they have all escaped from jail, I no longer need you. You will find a transport waiting for you in the hangar."
    They all thanked the Sith Lords, and left.
    "And the transport will explode on departure?" Greywolfe asked.
    Mulder nodded.
    Only two minutes later, a bright flash filled the windows and the sound of an explosion could be heard through the fleets.
  25. LeiaB

    LeiaB Jedi Youngling star 2

    May 30, 1999
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