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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, Jan 18, 2013.

  1. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Master star 5

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    May 15, 2005
    When Mara saw him in swim trunks, something tingled in her veins ...

    =P~

    Got tag, am also wondering what happened... ;)
     
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  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Funny take on Luke and Mara coming together with all the delicious moments
     
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  3. Jedi_Liz

    Jedi_Liz Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Unexpected....hmmm...please don't tell me an ex g.f. Showed up!
     
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  4. EmeraldJediFire

    EmeraldJediFire Jedi Master star 4

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    Feb 23, 2012
    Don't leave it at cliffhangers! That's mean! lol Oh, wait I do that all the time (suddenly is embarrassed)
     
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  5. EmeraldJediFire

    EmeraldJediFire Jedi Master star 4

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    That is totally me too! I always say...cliffhangers...they leave 'em coming back for more.
     
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  6. serendipityaey

    serendipityaey Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 24, 2004
    On no! Intriguing! Love how they all get along as a family [face_love] Great love between them all. And swim trunks! Yes! :D
     
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  7. smash128

    smash128 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Now I don't read that many Luke/Mara fics, but you seem to write them just right. I enjoyed every word, sentence, paragraph of it. Good job.
     
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  8. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Force Ghost star 7

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    Aug 31, 2004
    smash128 :blush: [:D] Thanks, I'm honored, considering who I attempt to follow in the L/M grandness department :) [:D] !!!!!!
     
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  9. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Master star 4

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    May 25, 2005
    The swim trunks fell off, that's what happened, yes??

    At least, in MY version that would be it... [face_devil]
     
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  10. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Force Ghost star 5

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    Nov 1, 2004
    Is she sure the tingling was only in her veins?:p
     
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  11. EmeraldJediFire

    EmeraldJediFire Jedi Master star 4

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    Feb 23, 2012
    *Starts laughing hyserically*
     
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  12. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Force Ghost star 7

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    Mara was in a speeder accident. Tryna stayed with Mara's friends while Mara was laid up. Luke came to visit her the 5 days she was in bacta, encouraged her through the month's-worth of physical therapy. It hadn't been her fault; someone had crossed illegally into the air-lane, and the accident had been unavoidable. The protection device had deployed, but Mara had still suffered some internal bruising and serious shoulder sprain.


    **

    Luke sent her a rose, one for each day of the week, until by week's end, she had 7. "I wanted to ask you out before this all happened, and I still do."

    Mara frowned. "I'm not sure when or if I'm ready for dating again. But ... I feel comfortable with you, like I can be myself, without fuss or bother. If I could see myself growing old with someone, it would probably be you." She finished with a smile.

    "Just try it." He grinned. "We're just testing things out, I won't lie and say I wouldn't be disappointed if we stayed just friends, but I'd never forgive myself if we didn't work to see what could be between us."

    **

    So they dated and grew closer for 18 months. Mara's heart warmed & melted & she fell in love, gradually as Luke had, more quickly ...

    Until what could be said of them held true to that old gorgeous expression:

    "Love is one soul inhabiting two bodies."

    +++++

    Fini & Squee!

    Jedi_Liz Jedi_Lover Hazel Briannakin DaenaBenjen42 Lady_Misty mayo_durron_666 serendipityaey ..... [:D] !!!!
     
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  13. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Poor Mara but she is getting all the care from Luke with flowvers and dating[:D]
    Bonds of the soul;)

    And a nice drawing of Mara for you
    [​IMG]
     
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  14. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Force Ghost star 7

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    earlybird-obi-wan -- thanks for the Mara pic & the comment; @};- [:D] Bonds of the soul ... ^:)^ This is them all right. [face_sigh] It would take a very special lady to follow after Mara. ;) to EmeraldJediFire. LOL [face_love]
     
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  15. Briannakin

    Briannakin Grand Moff Darth Fanfic & Costuming/Props Manager star 6 Staff Member Manager

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    Feb 25, 2010
    Daw! Wonderful ending :)
     
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  16. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Nov 9, 2010
    What a sweet tale you told us, Jade :) [face_love]
     
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  17. EmeraldJediFire

    EmeraldJediFire Jedi Master star 4

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    Feb 23, 2012
    that was beautiful
     
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  18. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 21, 2007
    Very sweet!

    Part of me wishes that it was longer but sometimes sort is sweet.
     
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  19. mayo_durron_666

    mayo_durron_666 Jedi Master star 1

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    Nov 26, 2005
    Beautiful line [face_blush]
    Very cute! Loved it!;)
     
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  20. serendipityaey

    serendipityaey Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 24, 2004
    A beautiful ending! So lovely Luke could be there and be patient for her. True love!!
     
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  21. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Master star 5

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    May 15, 2005
    [face_love] Loved it. :)
     
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  22. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Master star 4

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    May 25, 2005
    Oh, very sweet! A slow burn romance is always nice!
     
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  23. Demendora

    Demendora Jedi Knight star 2

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    Apr 9, 2010
    —Éeaaaah, in veins)))):p If I were Mara I would have tingle not only in there)))
     
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  24. Gemma

    Gemma Jedi Master star 4

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    Dec 25, 2013
    Loved your last line --- romantic!
     
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  25. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Force Ghost star 7

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    LOL at the commentary around the swimtrunks [face_dancing] Woot! And the last line fits them and other soul-bonded pairs [face_love] They remain themselves but are also one in a lovely, unique way. [face_sigh]
     
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