Before - Legends To Save a Jedi- JA- Obi angst Complete 5/04!

awwwww, glad they are doing so much better. Now when obi shows up in full jedi gear and thanks them, the mush factor will go off the scale.

or if obi is up to his usual stunts, he'll get stolen and they will have to get with quigon to find him. grins.

 

Glad to see Paraq and Gregor doing so well.

Nodding,he turned and left.A knowing grin curved Paraq's lips before she returned to her work.

Sounds like Paraq might know a little more than she let on.

 

I'm glad everything's all right with Paraq, Gregor and Wookie.

But what about Obi-Wan? Did he, Force forbid, lose his memory

 

Ack! How is Obi-Wan???? Please hurry and post! This insomniac is dying of boredom!

 

PS Yup! That was their moment of closure!

astro Be afraid! Be very... Just kidding!

froggy Have you been sneeking peeks at my notebook?

Sheila Kinda like you hum?

Jedi_Nifet Obi-Wan? Yikes did I forget about him?

JessicaKenobi Don't die on me! We're about done here!

authors note Well I hope this doesn't dissappoint.I wanted to stick as close as possible to the original story and this is where and how that ended.Want to say thanks to all of you for reading and replying to this little story.I truly never meant or even hoped it would get the response it did!That was such a wonderful surprise!Special thanks to Padawan_Kitara for encouraging me to go back and re-work this! I'm glad I took her advice! Hope to see you all at some of my future works! You're the best!

EPILOGUE

Gregor nervously adjusted his new uniform and turned to eye his new ship proudly. He and the Wookiee had followed the Jedi?s instructions and went to meet with Master Dallia.The female Jedi Master turned out to be Corellian also and had heard of the former pilot over the years. In the beginning, she had given the two minor supply runs but after several months had turned over a battered freighter to them and allowed them to play escort to several Jedi teams.

Over the course of the last year, Gregor had tried to garner any information he could about the young Jedi, Obi-Wan ,but had always run into dead ends. For some reason the Jedi were being very tight lipped about what the young man?s fate had been. Eventually he had given up and stopped asking, knowing he would never see the young man again.

Still, a part of him continued to be saddened by the thought of the young man locked away somewhere in a room. The light that had been Obi-Wan Kenobi lost to the galaxy.

Pulling his thoughts back to the present, he concentrated on his current job. The Wookiee was readying the ship for their first official mission. Escorting a Jedi team to the planet Alderaan for important discussions.

The sound of approaching booted feet drew his attention. Two Jedi were rapidly moving toward him, both hidden behind the hoods that were pulled low over their faces. The taller of the two stopped before him, while the smaller Jedi appeared to hesitate briefly before continuing up the ramp and into the ship.

" Captain Gregor I presume?" the Jedi asked.

Bowing quickly, Gregor offered the man his hand.

"That?s correct Sir. It is an honor to serve you," he replied.

A large hand engulfed his briefly, before the Jedi once again pulled the robe around himself.

"My Padawan and I are ..... overjoyed to be your passengers Captain. Shall we board?" the deep voice asked before the Jedi spun around and followed the smaller man into the ship.

A little disconcerted by the Jedi?s reluctance to show themselves, Gregor shrugged and activated the ramp. Making his way into the cockpit, he dropped down into his chair beside the Wookiee and smiled with glee.

"Let?s see what this baby can do!" he urged his friend.

Grumbling happily, the hairy creature pulled back on the lever and pulled the sleek vessel smoothly into space.

Once they were safely on the way to Alderaan, Gregor clapped his co-pilot on the back.

"I?m going to go check on our guests," he informed him.

Moving into the hold, he found it occupied by only the shorter of the two Jedi. The brown hood was still pulled down over the figures face and the Jedi made no move to speak. Visibly confused, Gregor broke the awkward silence.

"Have you looked around the ship yet? She?s top of the line if you enjoy that type of thing," he prodded the silent figure.

"No," was the low and faint reply.

"Don?t talk much for a Jedi do you? Come on, I?ll show you around," Gregor said as he started for the rec area.

The Jedi didn?t move but rather stood and appeared to be studying the pilot from beneath the hood. Uncertain what exactly was going on, Gregor merely remained w

 

Okay, I really liked the end. The fact that Gregor's not exactly sure if Obi-Wan is alright, but finally gets to understand is good. Why exactly were the Jedi worried about exposing their identities? Gregor was simply over joy, nothing else. Although it did make the suspense greater. You almost had me thinking it wasn't going to be them!

I liked this story in general because it seemed to fit Obi-Wan. Even when he didn't remember you had his persona down really well. Also, as much as I dislike Qui-Gon, his worries and fears in the story really seemed realistic to me.

Gregor and company was also very nicely done. They didn't know the boy, but they helped him. Paraq being connected with the Jedi was a nice twist as well. And the Wookie is Chewie??

Great Job, so glad you reworked it into this nice creation!

_PSK_

 

Chewie???

Vadey

 

wonderful!

chewy!!!!

yay!

 

Wonderful, wonderful, ending, obi-ew!!

I loved that Obi-Wan remembered the kindness of Gregor and... [face_shocked]

Chewie!!!

What a great twist, I loved it!!

This story was such a treat, and I, for one, am so glad that you decided to share it with us!

If PK encouraged you, then she has my thanks, as well!

You go, girl!

Oh, and you know I'll be following your other stories!!

Congrats on a great piece!!

 

I loved the ending even better the second time around. Splendid as always. I am so glad you took your original idea and added all of your considerable talent to flesh out this story. It turned out wonderfully.

Chewie!

 

Neato!!! I loved it.

 

Now that's a surprise. Chewie!

Excellent ending, obi_ew!

 

I also really liked the ending. Chewie, indeed. I'm glad there was closure for Gregor so that he could see that all had ended well and Obi-Wan was back where he belonged.

Good job!

 

YEAH!!!!!! HAPPY ENDING!!! i'm soooo pleased it all worked out. well done!

 

PS They hid themselves so that they could surprise him once they were on their way.

Vadey Yup, Chewie!

froggy Thanks!

astro Aw!

Sheila I'm glad I re-worked it also! I was kinda ashamed of the original version!

Jacen I'm glad! Thanks for reading!

Jedi_Nifet Glad you enjoyed!

dianethx I had to bring them together again!

RJK I love happy endings!

 

Chewie

Hah- I was right! It was just too coincidental to find a hotshot Corellian pilot (with no last name) and a wookie as a co-pilot on a fancy new ship. I loved it!!!

Thank you so much for going along with my nagging and seeing this little gem through to the end

 

No Thank you!For the prodding and the excellant suggestion!

 

woooooohooooooo! I almost missed this gem's ending......blame it on sithly finals....

WONDERFUL !!!!!! Ending obi_we yippee for Chewie - gotta luv that Wookiee

That was so sweet that Gregor finally got to see what happened to Obi

Very nice job! Thank you

......Flash

 

Aww its over...thats not fair....

Great story OE...and i look forward to reading more of your works...

PT

 

Aww at last I can site down with out pain in my back. What a funny and cozy ending to
come back to.
Thank you

 

JFW Glad you liked and found your way back for the ending! Knew you would appreciate the Chewie part!

PT I always look forward to seeing you at my work!

Aquas Hope all is well with you? It is lovely having you around!

 

Aww, what a good ending. Not overly mushy, but just enough. And it was Chewie! Ooooh!

 

Jessica Kenobi I'm glad the story pleased!Thanks for reading and replying!