Tomb of Souls: A Jedi Apprentice Fanfic

Holy smokes JOWK you make us wait a long time between post, but then when you finally deliver WOWSERS. They were most disturbing!!! I will be waiting patiently untill next Sunday when we get more, lots more I hope...

 

Hooray! JOWK is back!

And what a way to return! Holy Frijoles! I can't wait until next Sun!

 

Great story, post more.

"have to read more, more posts more posts. Must read. Must must must read more.....posts......have more posts....must have must have read more posts....."

Relax, JediCandy, more posts will be coming soon.

"no....must have must have must have read more more more read more posts..."


JediCandy

ps. Great, now you have me talking to myself. Dare I sleep tonight?

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Oh man, this is creepy. What a way to get back into the story::shivers::: I wonder what has gotten into Obi-Wan?

 

Wow. Let me catch my breath here before continuing...

You know, JOWK, when you finished "Requiem," I thought topping that would be mission impossible. Yet, you just did it.
Reading the new posts all at once, I was struck by the wonderful way you use points-of-view. With Qui-Gon, we are lulled into a sense of false security, with a touch of growing anxiety. When we switch to Obi-Wan, however, we get dragged into a nightmare of h_llish proportions. Believe me, you did a GREAT job. The visual images are POWERFUL, the voice in Obi-Wan's head is very disturbing, and the repetition increases the nightmarish quality. I particularly love your delving into the psychological side of Obi-Wan's problems.

There is so much more to say. Let me sum it all up: Wow.

 

Says the Butler.

 

Wow, it right!!!

Obi-Wan is seriously disturbed. Is it the planet they're on???

I really wish he would at least try to talk with his master, explain the bizarre thoughts that keep coming to mind.

 

Holy Sith monkeys! That was weird!

Great job! I look forward to your next post!

 

Ya, me to...

 

Ya, me to...

 

Ya, me to...

 

Did JOWK update? No posts are showing up since the 14th. mad.gif

 

Well, I was going to post this weekend, but I'm going to hold off until the JC is moved over to Snowball. Frankly, I'm very concerned about this change. I don't know what to expect, and that scares me. I hope it's not too different or hard to use. And I hope my threads survive......

 

Well, JKOW, looks like it survived the move. Hope to see a new post soon. Too bad all our smileys and font effects are gone though.

 

Wow! This new set-up is really different! I'm having trouble getting around it.

Is it just me or have the story posts been abruptly cut off about half way through each post?
I was looking through the previous pages and found that the sentence would just stop. Often, half the word was missing!

Has anyone else noticed this?

I hope it's fixed...

Anyway, POST JOWK!

 

Up, up and away! (says the butler)

 

Please let there be a post soon! Pretty please! And yes, I also noticed that the story posts all cut off somewhere in the middle. It happened to mine too. I hope they can fix it. And please bring the smilies back!

 

Yay! It made it! <whew>

I throw in my vote as well for another installment.

 

Hmmm....how'd this get to page 19?

Up! More! Please!

 

Need to find out what's gonna happen.