Beyond ~*Tradewinds*~ A Collection of Songfiction *5/1* EVERY TIME

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  1. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    It's not really about anyone...I had to write a sonnet(ten syllables per line) and I wrote it off the top of my head.

    Go to poetry.com to see more of my work---type in my pen name Ambyr Vollenweider, and you'll find my under 20 line poetry.

    ~*Ambyr-Rose*~
  2. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    The Next Installment... Jaina to Jag.

    Lingering Love...Of Whom Could it Be?
    Read the Poem and Soon You'll See
    If my riddle you cannot guess
    I suppose it is for the best...
    ~*~
    The very last thing I want to do
    Ever, is to hurt, my love, you
    Yet I think it's for the best
    If now I get this off my chest
    I love another one, you see
    At this same I time, I love thee
    "Impossible!" you can shout
    "I never see you and he about!"
    But all the same, it is true
    My heart is sad and I feel blue
    I thought that he was forever gone
    Why do first loves linger long?
    I understand if you let me go
    I just thought that you should know
    It's not that I still love the other
    How could I ever love another?
    Forgive me now, loyal I ever will be
    I love you my dear, but do you love me?
    The very last thing I want to do
    Ever, is to hurt, my love, you.

    ~*Ambyr-Rose*~
  3. YodaKenobi VIP

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    awww, that was sweet Ambyr :D I enjoyed it.... now if its Jaina to Jag, who is this "other" she was speaking of [face_mischief]

    Anyway, a great poem, it was really cute ;)
  4. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    Thanks, Yoda. I've been wondering...does everyone on the boards want me gone? I feel neglected.

  5. YodaKenobi VIP

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    Why would everyone want you to leave? I haven't seen you around much though.
  6. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    Well, I was REALLY REALLY sick.
  7. Whitey Force Ghost

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    *raises hand* Oh! I know who it is! ZEKK! :D

    Wonderful as always, Ambyr. :D
  8. _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Master

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    Darn, Whitey beat me to it. I was gonna say Zekk too. Nice poem. You know how I love it. :D At first I thought it was Jag to jaina and I couldn't figure out who the "other" was. :p


    P.S. Why would we ever want you to leave?
  9. YodaKenobi VIP

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    i was thinking zekk too :p
  10. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    Hooray for ya'll who guessed Zekk! You win a prize.

    not.
  11. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    I have no idea what to do next in here! Any ideas?
  12. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    *sweeps the place out with a broom* *chokes on cloud of dust*

    I think we need some light in here! *opens curtains* I'm doing a bit of spring cleaning today, and I figured I'd give you guys a small snackeroo of songfiction to show you my line-up in here for the next few weeks...

    ~Every Time - Britney Spears
    ~Kiss From A Rose - Seal
    ~Only Heart - John Mayer
    ~Amazing - Josh Kelley

    Are you ready, readers?

    The Return of Ambyr's Tradewinds is coming!!!!!!

    ~Ambyr-Rose~
  13. Dev_Binks Jedi Grand Master

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    *starts to wipe off windows* Well it'll be nice to see another Tradewinds songfic! I can't wait!
  14. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    ~*Every Time*~

    (Every Time belongs to Britney Spears.)

    ~*~

    Notice me, take my hand

    Tahiri lingered in the battle?s haze for a few more seconds. He was dead. The impossible had been done. The unthinkable. Shock surfaced, making her impenetrable to reality for the time being.

    She bent down to lift his battle-scarred hands to her lips.


    Why are we strangers when
    Our love is strong


    Her tears were beginning to come at last.

    Sitting in the transport, surrounded by the dead and the dying, she dutifully held his hand. No one had been able to pry her from the hollow vessel that was once her beloved. It dawned on Tahiri that he?d never acknowledge her with his impish grin again. He?d never behold her with his eyes again. They?d just stare vacantly into the space that was now between them.


    Why carry on without me

    He?d had so much to live for?so much to look forward to?

    And everything that had meant anything to him?to her?to them was gone. Forever.


    Every time I try to fly, I fall

    Now she was on the stage of a small Tatooine cantina, scraping up the money thrown at her from every angle. Garish make-up smothered her gorgeous looks, and dyed red hair suffocated her ambience. No one saw the tears gathering at her green eyes.


    Without my wings, I feel so small

    The announcer declared when her next show was, and she received some uncouth calls from her weekly customers. Tahiri jumped off the stage, breaking one of the heels off her pumps. Muttering a swear word, she headed over to the bar.

    ?Tough night, Aris?? asked Roan. The bartender at the cantina, Roan was Tahiri?s only friend. He was always ready to comfort the girl. He?d seen so many just like her fall through the cracks.

    Tahiri sighed and set her bag on the table, pulling out a gray trench coat and throwing it around her costumed body. ?Just gimme the usual.?

    Sensing that the showgirl didn?t want to talk, he put down the glass he?d been cleaning and prepared her request. ?I?m just worried ?bout you, that?s all. You?re getting so skinny?all this can?t be good for a talented young lady like you, Aris. Is this all you really want? You could quit this crap about ?Aris Hilton: Exotic Dancer? and do something with your life!?

    Roan handed her the beverage and she drank it in one gulp. Tahiri set the glass down and motioned for another.

    ?You don?t need another, honey. I can?t stand to see you do this to yourself.?

    Tahiri clenched her fist, but pulled the money from her top and slammed it on the counter. Pulling out a mirror and using eyeliner to touch up her false facial mole, she stepped off the barstool and, removing her bag, began walking away. Roan shook his head and continued sorrowfully cleaning glasses.

    ?Aris, baby!,? A man with a blond ponytail in business attire surrounded by two blondes who were practically one with his body came rushing over to her. ?Can you come out tomorrow night and do the show again? That other girl I had booked called in sick. Besides, they love you here! It won?t be a problem, will it, baby??

    Tahiri, in her drunken state, vomited in response. The blondes giggled, then tried to soothe Tahiri?s boss when he began sobbing over the mess on his new shoes. When he was finished, he glared at her hatefully.

    ?I guess so.?

    ?I don?t like my girls drinking, Aris. I warned you about that. And Celia told me you ate an entire box of desserts last night. You know you can?t eat a week before a show! I can?t fight with you about this anymore, Aris. I?m letting you go.?

    Tahiri looked at him through her false eyelashes coated with mascara. Did he just fire her?

    ?You?ll want me back, Jerry! Just wait when you need a girl for some client and all your best girls are laid up! You?re gonna need me then, aren?t you? Well, I don?t need you! I don?t need any of you!?

    She violently grabbed a glass full of alcohol and smashed it on the floor. She began to sway back and forth, her drunkenness getting the best of her.


    I guess I need you
  15. Dev_Binks Jedi Grand Master

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    I got it! In my sleep deprived state I got it! That's so sad! Poor Tahiri, turning into nothing but a two-bit whore, and then to die like that. *cries* It's beautiful Ambyr.
  16. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    *Hands Dev tissues* Yeah, but Anakin caught her in the end.

    It was sort of sad, huh? *joins him in tears*

    ~*Ambyr-Rose*~
  17. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    Aris Hilton, eh? Wouldn't happen to be a multibillion credit hotel heiress, would she? ;) :p
  18. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    lol-I had something else for her last name, and then the computer corrected it. It was such a funny coincidence that I kept it!

  19. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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  21. Whitey Force Ghost

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    You know, Aris and Paris really do have a lot in common. They're both hookers with hearts of gold. 8-}

    Poor, poor Tahiri. :( But Anakin caught her in the end! :D And you even left on a cliffhanger. He he he. :D
  22. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    You know me too well, Whitey.

    Another soon!
  23. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    Ups for August! I think I will have another up very soon.
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