Beyond ~*Tradewinds*~ A Collection of Songfiction *5/1* EVERY TIME

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  1. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    *Gasps* Oh my gosh! These are like, the nicest replies ever!!!!

    Whitey: Yay! I got a [face_love] ! I have a gift? [face_blush]

    Midnight: (Go read her story! I love it!) Feel free to plug stuff in my thread, everyone does. You almost cried!? I'm touched! Thank you!

    YK: Long time no see! Glad you're back. OMG, Aymbr!!!!!!!! that is one of the best poems I've ever read in my life! It would make a good song if you could set it to music too really amazing, and great thoughts on materialism. Great all the way around *Blows him a kiss* You are so sweet!!! Maybe I should keep at this poetry thing...

    Thanks so, so, so much everyone!!

    Love, ~*Ambyr-Rose*~
  2. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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    Nice! :D

    Grrrr. You took my next choice for my icon! [face_plain] :p At least I can still have Faith! :D [face_love]
  3. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    Glad you enjoyed it, JMK!!! I'm working on an Intuition Sneak Preview for Tradewinds readers only. Then again, most of you read both anyway. 8-} Not that that's a bad thing!

    ~*Ambyr-Rose*~
  4. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    COME ON OVER (The exclusive sneak-peek of things to come in Intuition)
    By Christina Aguilera EDITED FOR CONTENT

    Come on over, Come on over baby
    Come on over, Come on over baby


    Aadie and Jag disappeared behind the beaded curtain that led to the three bedrooms of the Lightning Rod .

    Jag?s light switched out first, then Aadie?s. Zekk adjusted the ship on autopilot after making certain that there weren?t any dangers ahead. It would be awhile before they got to Mon Calamari, six days at the least. Six more sleepless nights without a chocolate haired beauty to keep him warm.

    Zekk sighed and took a sip of cold caf as Erika Kino walked in with a red silk gown on that came to her knees. Her bare feet made a soft sound on the metal floor, and Zekk turned around.

    ?Jaina??

    Hey boy, don?t you know
    I?ve got something goin on


    ?No. How many more times are you going to call me that? And what is it about her that?s so?attractive to you??

    Erika tilted her head to listen and looked into Zekk?s eyes as he said, ?Well, I really?err, she?s??

    Zekk couldn?t seem to find the right words. He searched his mind, but Erika?s violet eyes were tempting him.

    I?ve got an invitation
    Don?t you keep me waiting all night long
    I know you know
    So baby, don?t keep me guessing
    If ya will or ya won?t


    ?Erika, I,?

    Don?t wanna play that game with you baby
    So listen to me


    The problem for Zekk was quite simple. Opportunity knocks. Temptation?well, temptation kicks the door in.

    All I want is you
    Come over here baby


    Before Zekk knew what had happened, Erika was in his lap, kissing his neck and lips, her ruby red nails caressing his face. Zekk was in heaven.

    All I want is you
    You know you make me go crazy


    Zekk, pressed into the leather chair, was being romanced by a dancer, and his shields were down. Erika was unbuttoning his shirt, but he didn?t stop her.

    Oh baby, don?t be shy
    You better cross the line


    Erika was moving, but Zekk had his hands placed firmly on her swaying hips, and he was entranced by her violet eyes. He thought he wanted to stop her, but he didn?t. The thing was, he was enjoying himself immensely, and couldn?t. But what was love anyway? Jaina wasn?t all his. Jag had told him so. So what was he wasting his time on some kidnapped girl for? Especially when he could have someone who was more readily available, and that didn?t know anything of his past.

    I?m gonna love you right
    All I want is you
    I?m not just talking about your individuality
    But I can?t help myself when you put your hands on me


    Zekk let go of Erika and tried to push her away.

    She brushed her dark hair aside. ?What??

    ?Erika, I,? he stopped, just as before.

    Sweat blurred his vision. How long had this gone on?

    He tried to grab the sides of the chair, but it was Erika?s thighs he was moving up.

    ?Oh, so that?s the game we?re playing.?

    Zekk?s tongue was caught in his throat. He wanted to say, ?No, no! Erika, we?re done here, as I?ve told you before, I love Jaina Solo.?

    But we don?t always get what we want.

    It?s paradise
    When you and I get close and tight
    One on one I wanna go all night
    I wanna play that game with you baby
    Don?t you wanna be the one tonight


    Zekk?s eyes gave him away.

    Erika pulled him out of the chair and past the beaded curtain, into the third bedroom with the twin beds they?d been sharing due to lack of space. Then she shoved him onto his bed.

    We can do exactly what you like
    Don?t you wanna be just you and me
    We can do what comes so naturally


    Erika climbed all over him, and he followed her lead. She was incredible, and hard to keep track of.

    Got a thing for you

    No, this wasn?t the girl for him! What was he doing? This was wrong, so wrong?

    Got my mind made up
    And I?m serious
    Never been more
    Baby, I?m sure that it?s real


    ?Erika, we really shouldn?t be doing this,? he finally gasped.

    She kissed him, and he kissed her bac
  5. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    Ok, what gives, you guys? Where is everyone?
  6. Whitey Force Ghost

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    I think everyone else may have already seen it at Intuition. ( :confused:)
  7. Dev_Binks Jedi Grand Master

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    Yub yub, Ambyr, Whitey's right we've all said our replies. Now why don't you make a nice HAPPY Anakin and Tahiri. Set in that year between Rebirth and SbS.
  8. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    A happy A/T? Oh, well, I had a J/T cooked up but I guess ya'll don't want that. It's sad for Tahiri, kind of. But still, it's one of the best.
  9. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    Oh, shoot! I wrote another sad one. I hope you guys like it.

    Return to Me - Crystal Lewis J/T/TK w/ Anakin

    ~ I remember when you first loved me
    And with me was all you wanted to be ~

    "Anakin!"

    "Hey, Tahiri! Come on, we're going to the river!"

    ~

    "No...for that you have to come back."

    ~ Now you've fallen into the lie within
    Seems you're too far to come back to me ~

    Tahiri rested her hand on Han's shoulder. It had been five full years since the tragedy of Anakin's death.

    "I want him back, Uncle Han."

    "Me, too, Tahiri. Me, too."

    ~ Don't be discouraged ~

    "He's not coming back, though, is he?"

    ~ Dear One ~

    Jacen patted her hand gently, lifting her chin up with his other hand. "No, Tahi, I think not."

    Tahiri turned to her husband. "No! Don't ever tell me that!"

    "I'm sorry, darling. I didn't mean to upset you. I love you."

    ~ For my forgiveness awaits you here ~

    But all Tahiri could ever hear was Anakin speaking those three words.

    ~ Return to me
    Return to me
    I'm longing for the day when you will
    Return to me
    I love you still ~

    "Jasa, I'm going to bed now. Talk to your dad; I'll but Aevine to bed."

    Jacen scowled at the mention of the red-haired child. The child that was not of he and his wife.

    ~ Our sacred vow was broken with another choice
    As you're running ~

    Tahiri felt badly about the little girl being a part of their lives. Tenel Ka was not a part of their marriage; Why should her child be? Jacen had wanted his daughter to stay with her mother, but a queen has no time for her own.

    ~ I'm still loving you ~

    Yet she cared for Aevine Danni Djo as if she was the product of she and Jacen. But Tahiri would never sleep in the same bed as her husband. Their love had died before their marriage. She'd cried all the way down the aisle. It was all a facade.

    "Karana Remyra Solo," she murmured to the baby with green eyes and fiery red hair.

    But the baby did not acknowledge her caretaker who had called her Myra since her birth, where she had pretended the little babe was hers.

    ~ Seems that you don't recognize my voice
    I will continue crying, calling
    Until you hear me say ~

    Tahiri wrapped Aevine/Myra in a blanket and left her in the crib, ignoring her cries of anguish, shutting the door, and leaving the baby in a dark room. Alone.

    She was so miserable. Tahiri cried and cried, her sobs mingling with the cries of her so-called daughter.

    ~ Return to me
    Come back to me
    Come back ~

    ~*Ambyr-Rose*~
  10. Dev_Binks Jedi Grand Master

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    *sniffles a bit* Okay that was good, a bit too sad for me. Oh well beggers can't be choosers.
  11. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    True. Happy one for Dev next! I wonder if I can write happy ones...Oh yeah, my J/J was happy. How bout I do the sequel to it as my happy one?

    ~*Ambyr-Rose*~
  12. Dev_Binks Jedi Grand Master

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    Nah, a happy Anakin Tahiri, I'm sure I could write one if I took the time and decided to do that, you know I will do that I'll write a happy vignette.
  13. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    You're welcome to post it in here, Dev! I'd love to add it to the collection. Oh, and when are we going to be starting our co-authored fic?

    ~*Ambyr-Rose*~
  14. Whitey Force Ghost

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    *sniff* *whipes tear from eye* Poor Tahiri! :(

    *begs to Del Rey*

    MAKE IT RIGHT!!! :_|
  15. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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  16. Dev_Binks Jedi Grand Master

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    I'll get back to you on the viggy, adn the co-author I'll PM you some ideas... again. :p
  17. Star-Lead Jedi Knight

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  18. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    Star_Lead! I've never seen you cry!!! *Hugs him tight* It'll be okay...

    ~*Ambyr-Rose*~
  19. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    :( owch (understatement :p) *pats tahiri on the head :(* *gives tk a weird look* *glowers at jacen (never did like the guy much, anyway [face_plain] :p)

    as you can see, i'm just picking and choosing my moments :p *rolls eyes* *tapes an "idiot" sign on her back* anyway....

    though very angsty....sometimes the story seemed to fragmented, because you pick/chose your moments, and then added songs in, but it made sense :) ;)

    good job Ambryr-Rose :D

    ~TJF
  20. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    Ah, I see you kind of missed my point...that one was supposed to be fragmented. Most of mine aren't. That was how it made me feel, so I made it that way. It was an idea that I was torn over writing or not. So in a way, ya just misunderstood. My writing often takes on a life of its own...and if it came out any other way, I wouldn't be pleased with it.
  21. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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  22. alpha_red Jedi Youngling

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    Dear God...that was sad.
  23. The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose Jedi Master

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    Sorrowful Shower

    Rain falls in a steady, endless shower
    And my broad, black umbrella, I have not
    I hear the clock in the sqaure toll the hour
    My deep despair I have not yet forgot
    It's the same time she slipped away and died
    And the rain bringeth back that emotion
    Symbolizing the heartfelt tears I cried
    The torrential drops, the salty ocean
    Absent, yes, is the salt, I do agree
    But it still stings on this new open wound
    For I have nothing left of hers but me
    My true heart I see and fear shall portrude
    As I go down, drowning in endless pain
    And I hear nothing but the pouring rain
  24. Whitey Force Ghost

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    Who's that about?! [face_shocked]

    Wonderful, Ambyr! :D

    *tries to hide his tears*
  25. Dev_Binks Jedi Grand Master

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    *blinks away tears* wonderful Amby. Just beautiful.
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