Saga "Training Day" - Mara, Palpatine, Pre-ANH Vignette

Oh my goodness!

Found it interesting how Mara wanted to deal with the situation as she was found ...
Liked when she hesitated to kill the moff how she argued with Palpy and then the realisation why she is in his service in the first place, why she was trained

Well done, Red


~Mags~

 

Sorry, didn't notice the replies... Forgive me?

Maggy - Found it interesting how Mara wanted to deal with the situation as she was found ...
What works, works...

Liked when she hesitated to kill the moff how she argued with Palpy and then the realisation why she is in his service in the first place, why she was trained
There is always more when it comes to Palps... ggrrr

Healer Leona - That was really superb! I never realize she was so young when she started killing. poor girl to be stuck with Palpatine's voice in her head.
Well, I'm just kinda guessing on age and stuff here, but it sets about right with what has been told to us in various fics.

And yeah, it really messed her up... but she is able to work past it eventually.

 

that was... incredible! I really wish I could write as good as you, RedGold....