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Saga Two Lukes - viggie

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by PonyTricks, Jan 28, 2006.

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  1. jackyyy17

    jackyyy17 Jedi Master star 4

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    Master Skywalker gets to talk to Farmboy Skywalker...

    [face_thinking] Humm, so Luke can Literally get to help himself. *[I wonder what my future self would say to me...* Sorry daydreaming:D

    Anyway, Good story.

    jacky[face_alien_1]
     
  2. JadeSolo

    JadeSolo Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    "This ship seems to be trapped in time - it always looks exactly the same."

    I hope not exactly the same - that means all the grease stains are still there! Ewwwww. [face_laugh]

    Cool vig! Loved the line about the reward being worth the effort. :D
     
  3. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    That was a great vignette, very inventive. I especially liked:

    "Your destinies are intertwined."

    "You like that sentence, don't you?"
     
  4. brodiew

    brodiew Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Oct 11, 2005
    This dialogue is quite refreshing considering the drivel we experience in profic. I like you older, wiser Luke very much.:cool: I took away a sense that Luke was a bit melancholy in the future, but a peace and he still had a sense of humor.

    I liked this exchange the most:

    That comment made the older man laugh. "Han liked to play the mercenary-cynic, didn't he?"
    "So you're saying he's not?"
    "He's a good friend."
    Luke thought about that, then concluded, "He stays, right?"
    "Your destinies are intertwined."


    Reading this was not only refreshing, but peaceful. Great work, ponytricks. =D=
     
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