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Underneath a Sky of Dust-COMPLETE !!!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by obi_ew, Sep 30, 2002.

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  1. Padawan_Travina

    Padawan_Travina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wonderful Post once again OE...

    Loved the talk with Obi and Qui...but I hope they get out soon before Sidious catches on...

    Cant wait to read more

    PT
     
  2. obi_ew

    obi_ew Jedi Master star 5

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    Shaindl big mushy scene How about a little mushy scene between Obi and Xan tomorrow? :)

    Well missy! I read your teaser and all I can say is.... :eek: Girls if you haven't checked it out run and do so! Who knew Garen could rival my Xan for sexiness? :p

    VadeyFan Thank you my friend! :) I will check them out!

    Cas Are you busy writing my dear? * hopeful face *

    sabercrazy Sorry! Glad my Xan has such good company! Don't do anything I wouldn't! [face_love]

    PT Soon? We are closer then ever! :(
     
  3. Jedi_Knight_Hunter

    Jedi_Knight_Hunter Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Obi! I know a way the two of ya'll could bond...but telling you would get me kicked off the boards [face_pout]

    Excellent as allways!
     
  4. obi_ew

    obi_ew Jedi Master star 5

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    JKH :D The images that come to mind with that one! :p

    Shaindl Okay first post on your new fic was amazing! Hope everyone takes a minute to check it out! Garen! Who knew? :)
     
  5. Jedi_Suzuran

    Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Knight star 5

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    Yay, a Qui/Obi talk. [face_love]

    Easily pleased. :p

    Now, it's time to free Xani. :)
     
  6. obi_ew

    obi_ew Jedi Master star 5

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    Padawan :) Glad you enjoyed having Qui alive in one of my fics!

    :( * counts on fingers and toes * Looks like I may wrap this up Saturday. * runs off of thread sobbing *
     
  7. Jedi_Suzuran

    Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Knight star 5

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    Saturday? Say it ain't so! :_|

    *runs off also*
     
  8. Sheila

    Sheila Jedi Master star 4

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    Blue-grey eyes met Qui-Gon's steadily and the young man allowed his mentor to view the depths of pain and weariness that he felt for a brief moment.

    "I want to finish this Master and go home." Obi-Wan admitted in an unsteady voice.
    :_|

    Okay, Obi-Wan has had enough. This bit made me want to gather an army and launch an attack on the Sith's stronghold myself to free Obi-Wan. Can you imagine hundreds of fans storming the doors wielding keyboards. The Sith wouldn't stand a chance? :p

    Lovely interaction between Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon. I was happy until I read...

    counts on fingers and toes * Looks like I may wrap this up Saturday. * runs off of thread sobbing * :_|

    * follows OE off the boards sobbing *

    I know every story has to have an end but I surely will miss this one. I will have to move it to my "favorites" bookmark so that I can reread it in the future. You just keep on writing and I will be right there reading. :D
     
  9. -Ulic_Qel-Droma-

    -Ulic_Qel-Droma- Jedi Youngling star 1

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    i love your detail and description of the bonds between Obi and Qui, its so touching. Excellent job Obi-ew. keep our boys safe.

    -Joe

    P.S. i wish Ulic were still here...maybe i can find his body and his spirit and put him back together! aha!
     
  10. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 18, 2002
    *decides to de-lurk* Great story! :D *fades into the mist*
     
  11. PadawanKitara

    PadawanKitara Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    I want to finish this Master and go home." Obi-Wan admitted in an unsteady voice.

    Ohhh- Kitara will make it all better ;)
     
  12. sabercrazy

    sabercrazy Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Don't do anything I wouldn't!

    Don't you mean don't do anything you would? :p

    [face_love]

     
  13. Jedi_Knight_Hunter

    Jedi_Knight_Hunter Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Over?!? Say it ain't so? There will be a sequel? right...

    :p
     
  14. Amy21

    Amy21 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Whew! I never thought it can rain so much in California. I had an umbralla and my legs still got soaked. I hate walking home.
    Great posts. As always. ;)
    I hope Obi knows what he is doing. Maybe Palpy is just playing with him and pretending that he does not know....I wouldn't put it past him.
    Now I got to take a hot shower before my fingers freeze up on the keyboard.
    Uppy! :D
     
  15. obi_ew

    obi_ew Jedi Master star 5

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    Padawan I know! :_|

    Sheila [face_laugh] Wielding keyboards! I will miss not only this fic but my readers! * begins to sob again *

    Joe I will! I promise! ;)

    obaona :eek: Lurker alert! Seriously.Thanks for making your presence known. :)

    Padawan_Kitara Wouldn't we all just love to comfort him? [face_love]

    sabercrazy EXACTLY! :p

    JKH Sequel? I don't think one will be necessary. :D

    Amy21 Cold in California? It's going to snow here Saturday! :(

    CHAPTER SEVENTY-FIVE

    Xanatos quickly glanced up as his cell door opened.When he saw it was Obi-Wan a warm smile lit up his face.

    "Little shadow!" He said in greeting.

    Obi-Wan grinned impishly before leveling the guards who stood outside the cell a warning glare.

    "Don't interrupt me!" He ordered coldly.

    "Yes Sir!" One of them responded quickly.

    Activating the door,Obi-Wan turned back to study his friend.Xanatos was chained to the wall with the hated electrical binders.Any attempt to access the Force would result in a painful jolt.

    "If I were smart I would leave you hanging,grab Qui-Gon and go." He teased.

    Xanatos frowned in mock hurt.

    "But just think how boring your life would be without me in it little shadow." He advised.

    Giving him a brief bark of laughter,Obi-Wan took a device off of his belt and pointed it at the binders.A loud popping sound echoed through the room before the manacles opened.Once the older man was free,Obi-Wan turned a serious look on him.

    "I've been ordered to escort you to Sidious.He wants an answer from you."He explained.

    "Then we better hurry and fix our bond." Xanatos replied.

    They studied eachother silently for several seconds before Xanatos moved to stand toe to toe with the younger man.

    "Remember one thing little shadow." He advised. "Any thoughts or emotions you may have felt were perfectly normal."

    Obi-Wan nodded and held himself still as Xanatos reached out and clasped the russet head between his hands.Closing his eyes the Knight emersed himself in the Force and entered the younger man's mind.

    Although he had thought himself prepared,the cloudy and dark presence that slithered in the normally radiant mind was disturbing to encounter.The young man had somehow managed to construct shielding that rivaled any Xanatos had ever seen,even through the drugs.

    His repeated attempts to break through them were brutally rebuffed.Forcing back his frustration he frantically searched for a way to reassure the skittish Padawan.

    Suddenly recalling something he reached into a compartment on his belt and pulled out the pendant.Grasping Obi-Wan's hand he placed it in his palm and closed his hand over the younger man's.He could feel the long slim fingers moving under his hand as Obi-Wan fingered the object curiously.

    The fingers suddenly stilled before tightening almost desperately.Xanatos gave the hand within his a hard squeeze before once again pressing against the iron clad shields.

    Without warning the young man released his tight grip and the shields came crashing down.The dark cloud that had seemed to hover over the bond vanished like mist on the air.

    Both men gasped as the reassuring presence of their Force bond suddenly shone brightly.The feeling of strength and power that enfused them both was a much welcome change from what they had been living with over the last week.

    Opening his eyes,Xanatos found the luminous blue-grey orbs staring at him with the pure essence that was Obi-Wan Kenobi.

    They shared a slow peaceful smile before stepping back and releasing eachother.Xanatos slipped the pendant over Obi-Wan's head and winked.

    "Let's go trap ourselves a Sith little shadow!" He urged the younger man.
     
  16. Padawan_Travina

    Padawan_Travina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    YES!!!!!!!!!!

    They Fixed it...NOW Sidious is going down...

    WHOO!!!


    Cant wait to read more...Good job OE...

    PT
     
  17. Jedi_Suzuran

    Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Knight star 5

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    I loved the post!

    Nice imagery, which just makes me think of things that I have no business in thinking. :p :p

    Now, what happens to Palpy? ;)
     
  18. CYNICAL21

    CYNICAL21 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    OE - OK - you've got me convinced. You definitely need to pay a visit to a little site, which I will NOT name out loud - but it goes by the initials M_A. You're just an inch away from qualifying to post there. :D

    Well done - and visually . . . . think I'll settle for gripping, and not say a single word about what might be grippable. Gotta preserve that G rating, ya know.

    Nevertheless, I am now in desperate need of a good, stinging cold shower.

    Wow!

    Still reading - mostly lurking, cause I have NO time to respond. But this? I could NOT resist.

    CYN
     
  19. obi_ew

    obi_ew Jedi Master star 5

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    PT Poor old Palpy is going to have his hands full! :D

    Jedi_Suzuran [face_plain] I don't have a clue what you are talking about Padawan!

    * laughs uncontrollably * I think my slash fic has put too many ideas in my head! :p

    Cyn I finished my Obi/Xan fic and sent it to PT . She may use it on her new site .I'll be sure to let you all know if she does! ;)

    Thank you for finding the time to read! :)

    * goes back and re-reads last post * :eek: Holy Monkeys! If you have a dirty mind that can certainly be taken another way! Bad author! :p
     
  20. astroanna

    astroanna Jedi Master star 4

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    [face_shocked]

    :)

    :D

    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    They did it!!

    Woo-hoo!!!

    Yes, indeed, go trap yourselves a Sith, Xan and Obi!

    Great post, obi-ew, really engaging!

    (Oh, and J-S, I know I'm a bad lurker, but I can't help it! Your story's still wonderfully enthralling, and that teaser was great!)

    :)
     
  21. Cascadia

    Cascadia Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm staying out of that.

    But anyway, I'm glad Xani and Obi have reestablished their bond. And, yes, I've been busy writing. ;) :)

    Now, let's go hunt some Sith! :D
     
  22. obi_ew

    obi_ew Jedi Master star 5

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    astroanna [face_blush] Why do you always make me blush like a little school girl?

    Cas :p Chicken! Glad you are busy writting! After Saturday I'll need you guys to keep me occupied. :(
     
  23. sabercrazy

    sabercrazy Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOOK OUT PERV BOY!!!!! HERE THEY COME!!!!!!!!!!!!

    :D :D :D

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]
     
  24. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    wew... Finally, it took almost 5 days to ketch up and all for a thread that only started a few months ago. You got one heck of a popular and spectacular story going on here. I am in awe of your charactization of Xanatos. But then again I am a little biased. I love Linkin Park but more importantlly I love Xan stories. Too bad there aren't as many as I would like.

    Though I am suprised, this is one of the few threads that actually admits slash fiction exists. Most just ignore it and turn a blind eye.
     
  25. PadawanKitara

    PadawanKitara Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    I am so tired tonight that I read that chapter and said to myself "that's luscious"

    Then I read Cyn's comments and wondered what I missed. So I crawled back into the gutter where my mind usually lives and re-read it. OHHH truly luscious. I was thinking of a hot tub tonight, then I changed my mind to a cold shower instead.

    If I promise that I am old enough to read slash (I am- really) then will you pm me with a site where I can read your story?

    Amy21 - It hasn't rained in S. Calif since Tuesday- where are you so I know when to expect the next storm?
     
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