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Before - Legends Unlucky ... ~(Vignette)~ ... An OC encounters Xanatos escaping from the Temple

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Happy_Hobbit_Padawan, Sep 16, 2003.

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  1. Happy_Hobbit_Padawan

    Happy_Hobbit_Padawan Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Title: Unlucky
    Author: Happy_Hobbit_Padawan
    Timeframe: pre-TPM
    Characters: OC, Xanatos, Qui-Gon
    Genre: Vignette; humor (well, an attempt at it, anyway!)
    Keywords: ?
    Summary: Xanatos? escape from the Temple in JA #7 from the eyes of an OC.
    Notes: ?
    Feedback: Much appreciated! :)

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    All right. This vignette is inspired by the hardly-mentioned character who unwittingly helped Xanatos escape the Temple in JA #7 (The Captive Temple). Jude Watson, author of the series, does not mention this character?s fate after Xanatos shoved him out of his speeder and stole it. I?ve attempted to fill in his story, short though it may be. :)

    Enjoy!
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    Unlucky

    Temporarily off-exhibit during the JC server switch, in the event the moving van breaks or loses something. :p Check back later, hopefully with edits and changes to improve the exhibit. :D

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  2. lili-Skywalker

    lili-Skywalker Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Sep 16, 2003
    Nice story. made me laugh.
     
  3. PatttyB0123

    PatttyB0123 Former RSA star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Apr 2, 2003
    Hey this story is so funny. poor guy. Xanatos in trouble.
     
  4. obi_ew

    obi_ew Jedi Master star 5

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    Apr 14, 2002
    Excellent! :D I loved this! Warn me next time you post over here missy! :mad: The image of Xan was lovely! :)
     
  5. Phoenix_Reborn

    Phoenix_Reborn Jedi Master star 4

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    Feb 23, 2003
    *snickers in public*

    You made me laugh, I'm normally a very reserved bird.

    very very good!!!

     
  6. Mistress_Renata

    Mistress_Renata Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    LOL! I love these sorts of vignettes, showing what's happening day-to-day while the Big Heroes are doing their thing...

    Hope the poor guy finds a new job! Somewhere far away from crazed Jedi... ;)
     
  7. Happy_Hobbit_Padawan

    Happy_Hobbit_Padawan Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    lili-Skywalker: Thanks! :)

    PatttyB0123: Thanks. :) Yup, this guy had a tough day!

    obi_ew: Thanks. I figured you'd like Xan. ;)

    Phoenix_Reborn: Glad I made you laugh! :)

    Mistress_Renata: Thanks. :) And this character will probably want to stay away from any and all kooky Jedis, lol!
     
  8. JediKlea

    JediKlea Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jun 19, 2002
    LOL, very amusing!
     
  9. female_obi_wan

    female_obi_wan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Aug 1, 2002
    [face_laugh] That was brilliant!
     
  10. tatooinewizard

    tatooinewizard Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 13, 2003
    Good vignette, HHP.

    I felt sort of sorry for that guy, but it looks like he's going to have a happy ending to his bad day :)
     
  11. Jane Jinn

    Jane Jinn Jedi Knight star 5

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    Jan 12, 2000
    That was a fun vignette! Like Renata, I also love looking into the lives of people behind the scenes, so to speak.

    I really had to laugh at this line: They had lightsabers, so they weren?t window washers, and at this one: There?ll be something left of me to bury. That?s a plus. :)
     
  12. Darth_Leia_6669

    Darth_Leia_6669 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Apr 26, 2003
    I've had days like those! Well, except for the crazy Jedi speederjacking me! And it doesn't surprise me at all that he would try for a job. That was just the perfect ending!

    --later--
     
  13. PatttyB0123

    PatttyB0123 Former RSA star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Do you have another post soon? I loved this one lol
     
  14. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 18, 2002
    That was simply wonderful! :D

    We don't often think of the fates of such characters, so it's interesting to see - and then you did it so wonderfully! :p Not only humorous, but you give insight into this poor random fellow that came upon Xan with such ease. The story is quite short, yet you get some knowledge of his character.

    You're very talented, I can see by this - I'll have to go read more of your works!

    And, as a sidenote, I found this through your sig . . . see, it does work to do that! :p
     
  15. Happy_Hobbit_Padawan

    Happy_Hobbit_Padawan Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    JediKlea: Thanks. :)

    female_obi_wan: Thank you. :)

    tatooinewizard: Thanks. I think he deserved a happy ending! :)

    Jane Jinn: Thanks. I'm glad my attempt at humor worked! :D

    Darth_Leia_6669: Thanks. :) I've had days like those! Yeah, they're called Mondays! 8-}

    PatttyB0123: I'm glad you enjoyed it. But so far I had only planned on making this a one-post vignette. Although, I must admit that this vignette has unleashed a few plot bunnies nipping at my heels ... ;)

    obaona: Thank you. [face_blush] And I'm glad that advertising in my signature worked! :)
     
  16. PatttyB0123

    PatttyB0123 Former RSA star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I must admit that this vignette has unleashed a few plot bunnies nipping at my heels ... mind too :D
     
  17. Xanatos_son_of_Crion

    Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Youngling star 2

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    LOLLOLOLO
    [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Awsome.

     
  18. JadeSolo

    JadeSolo Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    HAHA!!! Aw, poor guy!
     
  19. obi_ew

    obi_ew Jedi Master star 5

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  20. Happy_Hobbit_Padawan

    Happy_Hobbit_Padawan Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    PatttyB0123: Good! :D

    Xanatos_son_of_Crion: Thanks! :)

    JadeSolo: Thanks for reading! :D

    obi_ew: Thanks for the up! :)
     
  21. Lucky_Hobbit_Padawan

    Lucky_Hobbit_Padawan Jedi Master

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    Mar 16, 2004
    Well, since it's St. Patrick's Day - you know, lucky 4-leaf clovers and talk of the luck of the Irish and all - I thought it would be a good time to UP this guy. ;) And I also want to send out e-hugs to you guys who nominated this silly little viggie in the past awards. :)
     
  22. Laine_Snowtrekker

    Laine_Snowtrekker Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Jul 8, 2003
    This is cool. Quite funny, too.
     
  23. Happy_Hobbit_Padawan

    Happy_Hobbit_Padawan Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Laine_Snowtrekker: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :D
     
  24. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I absolutely loved this! It was hilarious and moved at a nice pace. Superb work! VaderLVR gives you a bow...
     
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