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Until Then (Post TPM)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by imzadi, Jan 9, 2001.

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  1. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Hi everyone! This is just a very short piece set after TPM.

    WARNING: This is a dealing with grief piece.

    Author's notes: Thanks to Kalypso for beta-ing

    Disclaimer: All star wars characters and information belong to Mr. George Lucas.

    Feedback is appreciated!

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    I lie awake thinking back to that fateful day. The day I will never forget. The look on your face as you slipped away will remain with me forever. I continued to hold you; hoping that somehow I could bring you back; to have you by my side again. We shared so much, lived through so much; and I loved you so much.

    I will never forget the battle that took place that day. So much was lost; it hardly seemed like victory. I will never forget the days that followed. I was numb, too numb to accept what had happened that day, the day I was forever changed. I will no longer see your smile, hear your laugh, but I will remember them and you.

    As I lie here, I vow I will never forget. I will never forget your face, your smile, your laugh, or your love. You were my friend, but so much more, you were my Master. Together we fought. Together we lived. But alone, I grieved. I do not blame you. You are one with the Force. I know you are still here, watching over me. Smiling when I smile, laughing when I laugh, and crying when I cry.

    I can?t see you, but I know you are here, even if only in my heart and mind. I know I will see you again some day. But until then my Master, I will hold my memories close, and my love for you even closer.

    Until then?
     
  2. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Whoa!! Did you just write that? Wonderful!!!
     
  3. JediKnightZarc

    JediKnightZarc Jedi Youngling star 3

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    AAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! That was sooooo good! Oh, I can't get over that. That was just so good!
     
  4. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks Obi the Kid and Jedi Knight Zarc! I'm glad you liked it. I actually wrote that a few days ago, but only thought to post it now :)
     
  5. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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  6. Grieyls

    Grieyls Jedi Knight star 6

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    I don't know what to say, but that was just marvelous.
     
  7. Jane Jinn

    Jane Jinn Jedi Knight star 5

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    Oh, Imzadi, that was really really good! So sad and so true!
     
  8. jodiwent

    jodiwent Jedi Master star 4

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    Short, but sweet!
     
  9. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Even better the second read! Do you have any other short fics planned?
    *fingers crossed*
     
  10. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks for the replies everyone! I really appreciate feedback!

    More short fics? Um, I don't have any ideas at the moment, but I'll think about it.

    :)
     
  11. LadyVorgunby

    LadyVorgunby Jedi Youngling star 3

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    very sweet and sad...
     
  12. mouse2

    mouse2 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I must agree with everyone imzadi! That was sweet, sad, and wonderful!

    Hope you have more for us in the future!
     
  13. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks for the feedback Lady Vorgunby and Mouse2!

    Up!
     
  14. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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    :sniffle: That was wonderful!
     
  15. Sara_Kenobi

    Sara_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 7

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    That was fantastic!!! :)
     
  16. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks Mara Jadee and Sara Kenobi!
     
  17. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    this is to good to be on page 2! UP!
     
  18. princess-sari

    princess-sari Jedi Padawan star 4

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    <Wipes tears from her eyes.>
    That is really sweet, Imzadi.
    Poor Obi-Wan.
     
  19. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks! Up!
     
  20. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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  21. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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  22. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Beautifully written imzadi.

     
  23. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks :) Up!
     
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