Until Then (Post TPM)

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  1. imzadi Jedi Master

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    Hi everyone! This is just a very short piece set after TPM.

    WARNING: This is a dealing with grief piece.

    Author's notes: Thanks to Kalypso for beta-ing

    Disclaimer: All star wars characters and information belong to Mr. George Lucas.

    Feedback is appreciated!

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    I lie awake thinking back to that fateful day. The day I will never forget. The look on your face as you slipped away will remain with me forever. I continued to hold you; hoping that somehow I could bring you back; to have you by my side again. We shared so much, lived through so much; and I loved you so much.

    I will never forget the battle that took place that day. So much was lost; it hardly seemed like victory. I will never forget the days that followed. I was numb, too numb to accept what had happened that day, the day I was forever changed. I will no longer see your smile, hear your laugh, but I will remember them and you.

    As I lie here, I vow I will never forget. I will never forget your face, your smile, your laugh, or your love. You were my friend, but so much more, you were my Master. Together we fought. Together we lived. But alone, I grieved. I do not blame you. You are one with the Force. I know you are still here, watching over me. Smiling when I smile, laughing when I laugh, and crying when I cry.

    I can?t see you, but I know you are here, even if only in my heart and mind. I know I will see you again some day. But until then my Master, I will hold my memories close, and my love for you even closer.

    Until then?
  2. Obi the Kid Jedi Master

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    Whoa!! Did you just write that? Wonderful!!!
  3. JediKnightZarc Jedi Master

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    AAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! That was sooooo good! Oh, I can't get over that. That was just so good!
  4. imzadi Jedi Master

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    Thanks Obi the Kid and Jedi Knight Zarc! I'm glad you liked it. I actually wrote that a few days ago, but only thought to post it now :)
  5. imzadi Jedi Master

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  6. Grieyls FanForce Chapter Rep

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    I don't know what to say, but that was just marvelous.
  7. Jane Jinn Jedi Grand Master

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    Oh, Imzadi, that was really really good! So sad and so true!
  8. jodiwent Force Ghost

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  9. Obi the Kid Jedi Master

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    Even better the second read! Do you have any other short fics planned?
    *fingers crossed*
  10. imzadi Jedi Master

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    Thanks for the replies everyone! I really appreciate feedback!

    More short fics? Um, I don't have any ideas at the moment, but I'll think about it.

    :)
  11. LadyVorgunby Jedi Knight

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  12. mouse2 Jedi Master

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    I must agree with everyone imzadi! That was sweet, sad, and wonderful!

    Hope you have more for us in the future!
  13. imzadi Jedi Master

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    Thanks for the feedback Lady Vorgunby and Mouse2!

    Up!
  14. MaraJadee Jedi Knight

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    :sniffle: That was wonderful!
  15. Sara_Kenobi Force Ghost

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  16. imzadi Jedi Master

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    Thanks Mara Jadee and Sara Kenobi!
  17. Obi the Kid Jedi Master

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    this is to good to be on page 2! UP!
  18. princess-sari Jedi Master

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    <Wipes tears from her eyes.>
    That is really sweet, Imzadi.
    Poor Obi-Wan.
  19. imzadi Jedi Master

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  20. MaraJadee Jedi Knight

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  21. MaraJadee Jedi Knight

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  22. Healer_Leona Scattegories Host. Manager Emeritus

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    Beautifully written imzadi.

  23. imzadi Jedi Master

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