UPDATED ON 8/4!!! What if Obi-Wan's memory had been erased in JA #3?

I don't think so....I kind of gave up on it....if you want me to continue, I will finish!

 

Yes, please continue!

It really would be a shame if such a good and interesting story like this should be forgotten without ever being finished.

 

If you wnat me to countinue you BETTER! Please I just found this and i wasn't even a memeber of the boards when this thing slowed down. Please post soon something anything pwease pweaty pwease!

Potsy wosty sooooon!

Oh this is a great story one of my favorites!

 

Well, Qui-Gon's in prison and he thinks that poor Obi is all alone. Obi has been taken in by seemingly kind strangers, but he doesn't know what has happened to Qui-Gon. I want to know what happens next. Please finish.

 

I knew it couldn't be just me that wanted this story to be continued!

That's why I brought it up again.

 

Whoa! Lots of replies! Here you go!
*****
Kara, the 19-year-old who had found Obi-Wan all alone and confused, led the boy down several halls in the palace of the planet?s king. Obi-Wan followed silently, cursing himself. He had had explicit instructions from Qui-Gon to stay put. He was disgusted with his utter lack of defiance when Kara?s father had taken him home.

Kara placed a hand on his shoulder, and he looked up. She smiled easily. ?Stay here, alright?? Obi-Wan nodded.

Kara strode over to a desk with a blond haired woman behind it. She began to converse with the woman in low tones, grinning and laughing every few minutes. Finally, she turned and waved Obi-Wan over. When he came, she put her arm around him, something Obi-Wan discovered he didn?t mind at all. Kara smiled gently at him, then turned back to the lady.

?Anyway, I found this boy in the woods near my father?s house about 3 days ago. He was alone, so we took him in for the night. He hasn?t talked since we found him.? Kara said, and Obi-Wan nodded to himself thoughtfully. He hadn?t been sure what he should do, and whether these people REALLY wanted to help him, so he had kept his mouth shut and hoped for the best. Kara continued. ?I think he?s mute. He had no identification, so I have no way to know who he is. I heard that the king has an amazing memory and knows all his subjects by sight, and I thought?maybe??

The woman nodded knowingly, then spoke briefly into a comlink. She told Kara to take Obi-Wan into the door on the left side of the desk, and then to go down the hall to the third door on her right. Kara obeyed, and once they were inside, Obi-Wan realized they had been directed to a throne room. He looked around in awe, when his attention was caught by something else. There, in the center of the room, strapped to a board, was Qui-Gon!
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Qui-Gon stared defiantly up at King Acton. //If he isn?t going to give me a chance to explain,// he thought, //I won?t try.// Acton?s face darkened.

?Answer when you are spoken to, outsider filth!? Acton demanded. When Qui-Gon still did not respond, he pressed the button on his armrest, this time holding it down until it broke off from the strain. He was tiring of this game. Acton nodded curtly to a guard, who strode up from behind Qui-Gon and punched the Jedi full in the face.

Qui-Gon flinched inwardly, but made a point of not responding to the pain in any visible way, to show Acton that he could not win. But, instead of Acton being angered, his attention was drawn to something else. Qui-Gon looked out of the corner of his eye to see that the far off door had opened, and a guard escorted two people in.

Qui-Gon turned his head away woozily, glad to be momentarily free of Acton?s anger. He struggled to ignore the pounding in his skull, and the throbbing in his right eye. Qui-Gon was sure he was going to get a black eye. He didn?t pay any attention to the newcomers, unable to work up any interest. Something deep down told him he should be, but, drowning in pain, he ignored that too.
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Kara stared at the man looking so worn out in the middle of the room. He was obviously in a LOT of trouble, to say the least. She wondered fleetingly about what he had done, but pushed the thought aside for more important things; namely, the boy she was with.

King Acton turned his glare to her. ?What is the reason for this disturbance?? He boomed. Kara cringed. No one had told her that she had not been announced to the king, nor that he would be angry for her coming!

She cleared her throat and plunged into her tale. ?My lord, I am Kara, of the upper regions woods.?

?I know that! I know all my subjects!? The king declared furiously.

?Yes, my lord.? Kara acceded quickly. ?That is why I came. You see, I found this boy a while back. He is mute, I believe, and had no identification. I thought, perhaps, you would take a few minutes of your valuable time and tell me who he is so I may return him to his family.? Kara eyed the king hopefully.

 

Yippee! A new post!

*voice sarcastic* Oh, and the king has finally seen reason and decided to help them! *end voice sarcastic*

Was about time. (Both the post and the king seeing reason )

 

Yeah, I know! Thanks Lang.

 

LOL Now we see who's really ruling the castle. Maybe the King should just give up and hand the crown over to the princess. At least Qui-Gon and Obi are together again. Will the side trip have proved in vain or does this planet's healers have something to offer Obi? Great to see more of this.

 

Thanks Abbi! Y'know, you always have the coolest theories!

 

I back! One yo up this thing oh and two to make sure you countinue and soon! I hope there will be anotgher post soon and hmmmm.... maybe some Obi/Angst on the way i hope!

More soon please!

.::Ganki::.

 

*waves frantically* come back to us Jacinta PLEASE! We need a post!

Don't leave us again. Please....

 

Hey! You didn't want to leave this after only one more post!

Quick, we must keep this on the first pages, or she will forget it for sure.

 

Must...*gasp*...keep on......*breath*first...page!

PLEASE POST SOON *grabs fic and pulls it to the top* there we go we are showing we want more by keeping it up there! HINT HINT!

 

Looked around and found something new *rubs hands together*

MORE!!!

 

Wow!!! Great post JK!!!!! Please post again soon, I am really enjoying this story Please don't let it die

 

GROWLS: MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

 

why is this thread on page 10 or something? why haven't I found it earlier? and the question of all questions WHY my dear Jacinta_Kenobi aren't you writing something? this story is very good and I'd hate it if we didn't see the end of it.

 

Man, so many replies I missed......

Maybe I should continue this....It's a thought....Hmmm...

Ok, here I go to continue this...

 

*7 looks around* did I hear someone say continue?

 

Whoa! This is an awesome story, you *must* continue (Please?)! :-D
I love it! I will keep the thread up until you feel guilty and decide to continue (um...jk)!
*looks around for the men in white who have been chasing her from thread to thread...satisfied they haven't found her yet, she sits down and waits for an update*
:-D
God bless!
<3-Moose

 

Up!

 

*sighs* Up again!

 

Please? Up? Post?

 

*stomps into the board*

*looks around and sees no post*

*eye twitches* post I hope soon, Right JK?

UP!