Hi. It's not often I post my poetry online so no flames. I actually posted this on another thread(links in my sig) but I think that maybe some might be too intimidated to go to an all poetry thread. Especially if poetry's not really they're thing. So if you like it or if you don't I'd really enjoy your comments on it. Okay. Here goes... Watching My Love Watching my love fall from the man that I held so dear Watching my love murder casually, his regard for life gone I fear Watching my love betray his mentor; turning from all that?s righteous and true On a canvas of hate...anger and vengeance he now drew Watching my love silently; quiet, without a word Watching my love in stealth; praying he hasn?t heard Watching my love decay; solitary in his path Hoping I don?t protest to loud and come across his wrath I watched as his new master corrupted him in his ways I watched as he deceived my love; covered the truth in haze I watched as my love put himself in my line of fire Waiting for me to stumble; waiting for me to tire He must have known that I would not Give up all I was fighting for Neither would I let my soul be bought Ravaged by darkness, blackened and poor I also believe my love?s not gone Left is a spark of the man I deeply cared Darkness will end, followed by a soothing dawn I only wonder how the rest have fared Any comments?